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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Veryyy interesting...I wonder who it could be??
You've described the loneliness and longing so well for both of them, neither of their lives are complete without the other.

Eagerly awaiting the next update, thank you for sharing!

Thank you so much dear for reading it! 😃 Next update, thoda time lagega 😉

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Sukhi!! Thank you so much dear! 😳 😃 Next time I won't write boring, okay? 😆

Yes..India se call 😉

Dude, it was NOT boring..

chill baba! 😆

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Great job Sanam! This was so interesting to read. On one hand we have Nachiket, his emotions , his loneliness and on the other hand we have Aagam Suhani and their fun filled moments! These extremes were nicely woven and therefore I thoroughly enjoyed this!😉

This is NOT boring. Now I really want to read your 'interesting'😆

A nice peep into Nachiket's life :) India se call, Nishi? Chalo let it be suspense😆

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi
Great job Sanam! This was so interesting to read. On one hand we have Nachiket, his emotions , his loneliness and on the other hand we have Aagam Suhani and their fun filled moments! These extremes were nicely woven and therefore I thoroughly enjoyed this!😉
This is NOT boring. Now I really want to read your 'interesting'😆

A nice peep into Nachiket's life :) India se call, Nishi? Chalo let it be suspense😆

Finally! 😆 Thank you so much Ragini 😳 🤗

May be my interesting will be boring for you 😆

Yes, let it be a suspense. 😆

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Don't you ever dare to say that these updates are boring! 😡

Sanam, you have no idea how good this was! It is a simple yet very intriguing story. You have portrayed Nachiket's life very well and also his bonding with the kids. Is Ranbir an idiot here too or did you gave him a make over? 😛

The ending! Oh my...what a cliffhanger... please update it soon 😃

P.S. My comments were super fast this time😎

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Mansur Khan

@MansurKhan56

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Hey Sanam,

Actually NB's script deserves La Tomatina Festival, eggs & chappals😆😆😆

Your FF Story deserve better. That is Garland of Roses...😛😛😛

Superb Script, Awesome Vocabulary & Fantastic flow of Dialogues...

Kaash I could have written like you. You are a Brilliant Mind...👏👏👏

This is my feedback for the 1st Update...

Going thru the 2nd update now.😃

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Mansur Khan

@MansurKhan56

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Just Read 2nd Update...

Matured Story unfolding!

Sanam Mujhe bhi Thodi si FF Story likhne ki Training Daan me dedo😃

Acha acha bahut acha hai. Mein Khush hua padkar apka superb update😊

NB Never showed Rags or Neil bonding with their Kids while having Breakfast or Dinner!

India se call? Kahi Nivi Vamp ka toh Nahi aaya in this FF?😆

Waiting for the Phone Convo. JALDI UPDATE KARE AP FAST FAST😛

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: metoyou
Don't you ever dare to say that these updates are boring! 😡

Sanam, you have no idea how good this was! It is a simple yet very intriguing story. You have portrayed Nachiket's life very well and also his bonding with the kids. Is Ranbir an idiot here too or did you gave him a make over? 😛

The ending! Oh my...what a cliffhanger... please update it soon 😃

P.S. My comments were super fast this time😎

Narges!! 😎 Is baar humara reply aane mein der hogai 😆

Okay baba, I won't write the boring word again, ever! 😛

Ranbir is a little idiot here too..obviously saare bache to Agham Suhani jaise nai hosakte 😆

Thank you so much Narges for your support and encouragement! 😳 🤗

And that cliffhanger..Ragini gave me the idea, for the 1st update though 😆

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: MAK56

Hey Sanam,

Actually NB's script deserves La Tomatina Festival, eggs & chappals😆😆😆

Your FF Story deserve better. That is Garland of Roses...😛😛😛

Superb Script, Awesome Vocabulary & Fantastic flow of Dialogues...

Kaash I could have written like you. You are a Brilliant Mind...👏👏👏

This is my feedback for the 1st Update...

Going thru the 2nd update now.😃

MAK!! 😃 Thank you so much dear! 😃 😳

Please itni tareef nai..hazam nai hoti. 😆 On a serious note..I love your FF. Your dialogues and flow is awesome. Jaldi se write again and update 😃

I will update iy jaldi but it will take some time..as I still haven't started writing.

Thank you again MAK for reading. 😳

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Mansur Khan

@MansurKhan56

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

MAK!! 😃 Thank you so much dear! 😃 😳

Please itni tareef nai..hazam nai hoti. 😆 On a serious note..I love your FF. Your dialogues and flow is awesome. Jaldi se write again and update 😃

I will update iy jaldi but it will take some time..as I still haven't started writing.

Thank you again MAK for reading. 😳

Ditto sanam.. Mujhe bhi itni tareef hazam nahi to but ...Thanks for liking my FF updates. Will start writing soon.

I am eager to know the NERA Phone convo now in Ur next update.. I am sure your it is gonna beat Reel Show Phone convo.

Waiting plz update soon😃