OS: Darmiyaan - When hearts beat in unison... - Page 2

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Nice ringtone 😆

Seriously well done! Looking forward for how the story unfolds. You write really well. Keep writing and keep entertaining us:)

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Res?

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Res matlab reserved. That means she'll comment later😉

Originally posted by: a.patel

Amazing yaar!
Awsumly written! 👏
srsly u nailed it! 😊
update soon!

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

My darling Simi joined IF😳

This was amazing! Beautifully written Simi! That song in between added the flavour and those last beautiful lines spiced up your update. Really well written. So that was his dream! Turn the dreams into reality dear!

Waiting for the next update eagerly! Please hurry:)

Originally posted by: poetic

Simi Dear, 😊

This is so beautiful. Am glad you decided to start this story in a separate thread.

Though the happenings go back to some time in the immeidate past, yet the feelings and emotions are so palpable. I am so glad that it turned out as a nightmare only.

Please update soon. We are all waiting.

Tumhara naam mere dil ke har dhadkan pe likha hai... Tumhare bina zindagi matlab jeethe jee marr jaana... Kuch bhi ho jaye par I will win you back...

Such a beautiful dialogue. I so hoped to hear this from the Nachiket in the show , but alas! 😕

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Di could u please suggest some scenes to write on...

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Omg so damn sweet of u Rachna di Ur my idol n inspiration cuz ur writing is just superb! Thank u so much for the nice words