OS : Tum Pukar Lo ... - Page 4

Rachana,I read your OS five times so far and every time I finish it,I feel sad for the present situation they both are in.

Originally posted by: goldstar678

Rachana,I read your OS five times so far and every time I finish it,I feel sad for the present situation they both are in.

You really understand them.

Originally posted by: Pavan.Malhotra

Hello Rachna and Excellent work

& Greetings, fellow fiction writers ...

Hi! I'm Pavan Malhotra from Delhi and I love to Read and write fiction stories! This group looks really cool! I'm going to see if i can get a copy of all your FF and OS .

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

This is killing. Only because the way you write, the way you literally pour emtions in each and every scene. That's not your fault. The story itself is going this way. You tried to show what's actually happening, rather than imagining what should happen. They are made for each other but are not destined to be together, that's what is reflected from the show.

Him standing alone at the balcony, listening to the song.. Must be imagining their moments of togetherness. What else does he have?

That song is beautiful as well. Raat ye qaraar ki beqaraar hai Tumhara intezar hai...Really. A perfect song!

What do I say more? This hurts. Their pain, that longing, their love..them...Everything!

A request. This was written from Ragini's POV. Could you please give us his POV for the same scene? What was he doing in the balcony? What were his thoughts? He must have felt her when she came there, but didn't respond. Just a request Rachna di. My birthday is too far so cannot demand a part 2 as a gift 😆

I love this song too. Forgot to add that...also now that I reread it...I loved this bit - its so pointed - it hurts!

"Downstairs - a place where she chooses to be away from him; from her turbulent love for him; from her messed up feelings; from her emotional chaos; from everything that defined her. Completely opposite to what she had begrudgingly chosen for herself. A star crossed Life.

Away from Her Nachiket !"

Their relationship has suffered such a serious damage that it seems beyond repair but even now just one single step from her can change so much. Ghuth ghuth kar jeene se to better hai mar jana. 😭

Worst is both have to pay for the indifference of one.

Originally posted by: iamcurious

I love this song too. Forgot to add that...also now that I reread it...I loved this bit - its so pointed - it hurts!

"Downstairs - a place where she chooses to be away from him; from her turbulent love for him; from her messed up feelings; from her emotional chaos; from everything that defined her. Completely opposite to what she had begrudgingly chosen for herself. A star crossed Life.

Away from Her Nachiket !"

Their relationship has suffered such a serious damage that it seems beyond repair but even now just one single step from her can change so much. Ghuth ghuth kar jeene se to better hai mar jana. 😭

Worst is both have to pay for the indifference of one.

Rachna di, I'll be waiting for a part two😳 Let it be sad, at least we'll get to learn his feelings through you. I want to know what exactly was he thinking while standing there at the balcony 😆

No matter what, I strongly believe love and time heals every wound but it requires sincere efforts and strong determination to make it and you HAVE to believe in it. This four letter word is so powerful, beyond our imagination at times.

They just need to empty / erase EVERYTHING from their hearts and minds and focus on just one thing that is they want to be together...things will fall in place and how :)

And I agree probably indifference is not the right word. It the hurt of failed expectations. She'd just begun to trust him with her 'part' of life...too delicate that moment...dear lord...so unfortunate it had to happen 😭

I am soo depressed suddenly! 🤢

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Rachna di, I'll be waiting for a part two😳 Let it be sad, at least we'll get to learn his feelings through you. I want to know what exactly was he thinking while standing there at the balcony 😆

Originally posted by: iamcurious

No matter what, I strongly believe love and time heals every wound but it requires sincere efforts and strong determination to make it and you HAVE to believe in it. This four letter word is so powerful, beyond our imagination at times.

They just need to empty / erase EVERYTHING from their hearts and minds and focus on just one thing that is they want to be together...things will fall in place and how :)

And I agree probably indifference is not the right word. It the hurt of failed expectations. She'd just begun to trust him with her 'part' of life...too delicate that moment...dear lord...so unfortunate it had to happen 😭

I am soo depressed suddenly! 🤢