This is killing. Only because the way you write, the way you literally pour emtions in each and every scene. That's not your fault. The story itself is going this way. You tried to show what's actually happening, rather than imagining what should happen. They are made for each other but are not destined to be together, that's what is reflected from the show.
Him standing alone at the balcony, listening to the song.. Must be imagining their moments of togetherness. What else does he have?
That song is beautiful as well. Raat ye qaraar ki beqaraar hai Tumhara intezar hai...Really. A perfect song!
What do I say more? This hurts. Their pain, that longing, their love..them...Everything!
A request. This was written from Ragini's POV. Could you please give us his POV for the same scene? What was he doing in the balcony? What were his thoughts? He must have felt her when she came there, but didn't respond. Just a request Rachna di. My birthday is too far so cannot demand a part 2 as a gift 😆