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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Aww!

The tug and war was really sweet..
Good that N did not instinctively stay back for Ragini and insist on being a hero about the whole thing - that is so him :)

Thanks for pointing that out. That and also the sudden input of Ragini's past forced got him out of there.


N-Ranbir are too cute!
They are...imagine RR and some cute kiddo playing this scene...Aww 😳

And what's this suspense about who the kid is!! As per the flashback, N-Ragini never got physical.. or did they?

You've read it, did they? 😆


Keep writing!
Loving it..

Thanks much :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
This is so great.. Ranbir is such a lovely little boy and ofcourse Nachiket being a sport for the youngster.

It's good that N has found out about the past through someone else.
Look forward to the mission of finding out more!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh curious, that was amazing! Beautiful update.
Enjoyed reading it. You make us more curious everytime. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok, now I am back after reading the update for a second time. Thanks Curious for the update. 👏 It's a pleasant one, with loads happening and with the story moving ahead, now that we are privy to some things that happened in the past, affecting the present lives of N and R.
The interaction between N and Ranbir is so refreshing and nice to read, it leaves a warm and mellow feeling inside your heart and makes you almost yearn for them to find a way to each other. Nachiket would make a great Dad.

Also like the way you have portrayed Karan over here, and not like an useless lump as they are showing in the soap.

Now, the gears have started turning in Nachiket's mind that Ranbir couldn't be Ragini's own son. Maybe Ranbir is Aman and some other female's son, whom Ragini adopted later, following the death / separation of this female. Anyway, I will leave the part of creating this beautiful story to you.

Wonder how R will find out that it was N who had got her boy back home.

Please do update soon.

And NOT to forget the other beautiful story you were writing. it's at a crucial juncture, and I am waiting quite patiently. 😃 Want to read about NR interaction now that they are married.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rachna,

Thanks once again. The next update will clear a lot of things for Nachiket and readers (which most of you have guessed it :))

Once that is sorted, Nachiket will finally figure out what he wants? Apology or Ragini?

I am glad everyone is liking Ranbir...was skeptical abt liking him as a kid, but he is loved already. And yes Nachiket will be a great father :)

R will find out and even mention it ;)

About the other strory, haha...I thought I'd diverted you all here so its better forgotten. But will write...soon :)

Meanwhile I hope you post next update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Exactly how soon? 😆 Sorry for being so inquisitive. And the other one as well.
PLEASE update the other story. It's ethereally beautiful. 😊


I will definitely update my story, but after a few days. Am not keeping that well. Can't concentrate much.

Oh and Nachiket better want Ragini this time. Or I will slipper him. Life has given them another chance, and they shouldn't squander it away. Not all people are so lucky.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh please take care.

Nachiket and Ragini dono ko belan padenge ab agar plan change kiua to 😆

And I promise ill write the other one...nothing to be sorry please :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏 👏 👏

This update is truly awesomely blossommm 🥱

Ranbir-Nachiket scenes are perfectly written 👏
Thankyou soo much for this lovely FF... ^_^

Next part ? waiting :p
Greedy mee ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Curious, we need an update pl
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read all the updates in one go! What writing curious! Fabulous job you're doing. This story is very intriguing, every chapter is!;


Perfect characterization of Nachiket, Ragini and The Kid Ranbir😆 Nicely woven incidents. It's a treat to read. You should think for professional writing. You'll do wonders!

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