FF : Vivaah UPDATED Part 5 Page 36 - Page 2

Thanks Sid for the story. This is so simple and beautiful. The first onset of feelings of a newly married couple.

Sid!

Great start. Story looks simple full of 'moments' that we all are looking for.

So good to see so many coming up with their stories.

Good job :)

Where were you till now?Im sure the hidden writing talent that came out with this is not going to forgive you for not coming out till now.Jokes apart,

what a start,its like scoring century in very first match.looking forward to the next update,just married Neira is so beautiful idea to start wirth.

Sid sid sid!!

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Me here:)

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Siddharth! What have you done..! This is amazing👏I'm glad you tried something completely different. I'm already in love with this idea for the story. What else, you write so beautifully. Ragini's feelings were perfectly handled by you. Her nervousness, her fear, her clutching the dupatta..everything!

Nachiket in this, is lovely too. Stubborn kind of 😆 Him in a black vest😳

The last two paragraphs are very much explanatory. Really looking forward. I won't ever mind continuing this😉

Thank you so much sweetheart! It's actually you who pushed me. I'm glad you liked this. Actually, I had never written anything apart from essays😆

This arranged marriage story has a lot of potential to actually entertain the audience. Falling in love dheere dheere as you say😉

Thanks again for encouraging a person like me😆 Will update this soon. And yes, as you've promised, you'll have to help me😉

Originally posted by: ZainabSidd

Sid 👏 👏 👏

Awww such a cutee FF 😳
Ragini and Nachiket Awww

Lost in NeiraLand yaa. :))

Please please continue soon 😳

Thanks! Will continue this soon:)

@BlueMoon8 - Thanks bhai😉 Actually, that's the only time I get😆 Glad you liked this


And as far as the instant noodle gang is concerned, let the girls rule there😆

@t-bonegirl - Thank you! Yeah, will update by Sunday:)


@shabhz - Thanks a lot:)

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak

Okay finally ... what a beautiful and different start Sid ... plz do continue it😳

This Nachiket is so different from rest so would love to know him more and trust me for your first try this is superb so do focus on writing ...

Such a nice beginning ... waiting for the next part and story to unfold😃

Thanks Jia. This is just the beginning.. Aagey aagey dekho hota hai kya😉 @Ragini Listening?