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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Rachna your rachna killed me.
reserving it to comment later in a much better way otherwise i will screw it, just like your update did to me. Thoda talent distribute kardo _/\_

Hi Surbhi, hope you are doing fine. 😊

Well, take your time and read. And let me known whenever you want to. 😆

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Filza.
Beautiful part 2 as well

Incredible expression of their emotions, i was totally into the story picturizing it in my mind.

NR are so in love!

Hi Filza, thank you so much. 🤗

I had planned the end a bit differently, but then I chickened out cos I hate typing. But I am glad, the shirt cut also led to a good result. 😆

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Filza.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: poetic

Hi Filza, thank you so much. 🤗

I had planned the end a bit differently, but then I chickened out cos I hate typing. But I am glad, the shirt cut also led to a good result. 😆

a very good result! 😳 i really hope this week inspires you to come up with more! 😳😊

i so love these stories here more than what they show us on screen.

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Filza.

a very good result! 😳 i really hope this week inspires you to come up with more! 😳😊

i so love these stories here more than what they show us on screen.

Thank you so much Filza 😊

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Hey rachna :) I am doing fine what's up with you? These exams totally bored me and as they ended few days ago i immediately got onto the forum and read this beautiful writeup! I was so excited to see your name on the author's side and i was sure about the level of awesomeness coming my way! But till then i didn't knew you would double up the level with a second part too!
After reading both the parts, my reaction was, how is the beach water? and then i realized my actual place 😆 i swear you are your own competition, because this time its so hard diverting my attention from this writeup, and super hard is to comment :X I am like how to type :S such brilliant superbb things here all over the thread and how do i appreciate it through my amateur lines? Damn!
But as you can see i'll not give up easily, so sit back and relax.
Nachiket and ragini looked like a sexy couple, going on a trip, having food, fun, blushing, getting emotional too, well lots haha. And you know i love corns, like its midnight here and after reading this i am having a sudden craving for it, american corns especially. Keeping aside the food, ragini and nachiket are too cute in the room, and that conversation before they start the most natural part of the update is so heart warming, she's like a baby asking for her mother's love and one can simply adore her or love her, just like nachiket did! Then the last two three para's were bliss for me, their love being he moonlight of their life and the steps they had taken seemed so right, they are just meant to be! Our nachiket ragini ❤️
Then today i got to read the second part, as amazing and mesmerising as the first one this is no less dude. That earring thing was super added, brought a we-are-back-in-business thing to the update. Then that cute banter they had on the beach of nice shirt and shorts was adorable, i could imagine it in real. Then the kitchen scene was hot, the way in a heartbeat she said with my life wasss woww!
Then aftermath it all seemed like a dream, both of them walking into the sea and living the moment. The beautiful and serene description of a chaotic sea was remarkable rachna. You literally gave a exquisite touch to it, infact the whole writeup looked so enchanting. And the next para, sizzling end hahaha, rachna why you write so hot man, were you a steam press in your last life? tell us, the world wants to know! 😆
Okay before i start typing kuch bhi, i will write byee cya take care, its good to be back, but kuch zyada hi likh diya, don't get bored man, this is how i am, i am a lazy person when it comes to writing fiction and thats how i try to compensate for it, by writing a essay like post. Shit why am i even writing. bye rachna i need sleep lol tc. You are an amazing writer my friend! Hugs Hugsss!

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Lots of love Surabhi.

I will comment in details, but need to sleep now as well.

I only registered the words steam press 😆

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: poetic
Lots of love Surabhi.
I will comment in details, but need to sleep now as well.

I only registered the words steam press 😆

Thats so sweet, i will take the love! And you can call me surbhi, why taking pain to add 'a' in between.
Hahahaha wohi mila tha register karne ke liye lol
yes now even i am going, good night, sleep tight, tada!

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iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: poetic

Hey, I am sorry. Didn't get much time at work to read your lovely views and comment. So here I am ! 😃 Arre please don't be sorry. Work comes first 😊

Now that you mentioned, I think I also like that highlighted para - surely enjoyed while writing it.
I often read what I write, and things that I love, I dont mind re reading again and again 😆
The idea is definitely to enjoy writing! 👍🏼

But I surely enjoy reading all comments - makes me float in seventh heaven.
Oh dear I can feel you. Nothing pleases a writer more 😆

Am glad you liked the BONUS. 😊😳 And as of yet, no more pleading. 😆
I'll let you take some time. Won't be greedy. 😆 But beware I'll be watching you.