SS : The Sea ... Part 2 updated. Pg 13

roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Rachna Rachna Rachna..

I just can't stop sighing after reading this..

you've ended it so perfectly... her doing what she always wanted to.. to trust him with everything she's got and to be able to do that now that they're both back together - that was such a beautiful touch to the story.. him asking her to trust.. and she doing so without batting an eyelid.. because somewhere deep inside, she always has :)

Your writing is so effortless and has such great flow..

just drowns me in feels and emotions <3

AMAZING!!!!

Thank you so much for this :D

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Filza.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

this is gorgeous stuff! part 1 killed me! I felt so happy so relieved after reading it.. BEAUTIFUL.

these beautiful souls so deserve some calm and peace in their lives.

and i love this Nachiket!

off to read part 2 now :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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my Monday morning could not have been better...first the beautiful montage and now even a more beautiful narration...this was heartwarming ..so beautifully woven ..thanks rachna for keeping their love story alive for us come what may...this is an assurance that all will be well soon

and the manner in which you have just taken a leaf out of their beautiful love story and immersed us ...am still going awww

thank you indeed 🤗..they both deserve each other's love,companionship and in each other only they find peace...nor their family nor friends could given them that...so much love

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: sun29

my Monday morning could not have been better...first the beautiful montage and now even a more beautiful narration...this was heartwarming ..so beautifully woven ..thanks rachna for keeping their love story alive for us come what may...this is an assurance that all will be well soon

and the manner in which you have just taken a leaf out of their beautiful love story and immersed us ...am still going awww

thank you indeed 🤗..they both deserve each other's love,companionship and in each other only they find peace...nor their family nor friends could given them that...so much love

Sun,

Glad you liked it. Started the story as a OS and then ended it as a two parts story. Am happy that you guys enjoyed it.

What more could one ask for? 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Filza.
this is gorgeous stuff! part 1 killed me! I felt so happy so relieved after reading it.. BEAUTIFUL.

these beautiful souls so deserve some calm and peace in their lives.

and i love this Nachiket!

off to read part 2 now :)

Thanks Filza. Hope you read Part 2 as well, and enjoyed it. 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ronitfan
Rachna Rachna Rachna..
I just can't stop sighing after reading this..
you've ended it so perfectly... her doing what she always wanted to.. to trust him with everything she's got and to be able to do that now that they're both back together - that was such a beautiful touch to the story.. him asking her to trust.. and she doing so without batting an eyelid.. because somewhere deep inside, she always has :)

Your writing is so effortless and has such great flow..
just drowns me in feels and emotions <3

AMAZING!!!!

Thank you so much for this :D

Thanks Sukhs. Thank you so much. Couldn't have done it without your encouragement. 😊

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iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Finally re read the whole part again. Read it in parts last night but well this does need a peaceful reading to let the beauty sink in.

A very justified extension to the previous part. This was like bonus! 😊

You are a gifted writer indeed, I really am learning from you, Sukhi and likes...I am yet to read the Joyride which I mean to shortly.

I am a huge fan of unpublished work, I was just discussing it with a friend today. Its very raw and clean. You so beautifully visualized it and then to choose right words and present it, its a talent!
I love the honesty you put in writing these, loving both the characters equally and giving them space to outdo other. "Sea" is their 'thing' and it proved to be instrumental in mending their relationship so beautifully. Cleansing and refreshing their past marks likes waves do.

In particularly I loved this part a lot. A deep sigh!

"While he had been hating her all these years, she had been dying inside - a little each day, while struggling to keep her family afloat. Nachiket did realise that they had their reasons for the separation, for the fight, for the hatred and the pain - God knows he has suffered as much - but every time he got to know how she had killed a part of herself during this struggle, his heart had bled inside"

I love it when you give in to our 'please write more' pleas so lovingly and write :)

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Rachna your rachna killed me.
reserving it to comment later in a much better way otherwise i will screw it, just like your update did to me. Thoda talent distribute kardo _/\_

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Finally re read the whole part again. Read it in parts last night but well this does need a peaceful reading to let the beauty sink in.

A very justified extension to the previous part. This was like bonus! 😊

You are a gifted writer indeed, I really am learning from you, Sukhi and likes...I am yet to read the Joyride which I mean to shortly.

I am a huge fan of unpublished work, I was just discussing it with a friend today. Its very raw and clean. You so beautifully visualized it and then to choose right words and present it, its a talent!
I love the honesty you put in writing these, loving both the characters equally and giving them space to outdo other. "Sea" is their 'thing' and it proved to be instrumental in mending their relationship so beautifully. Cleansing and refreshing their past marks likes waves do.

In particularly I loved this part a lot. A deep sigh!

"While he had been hating her all these years, she had been dying inside - a little each day, while struggling to keep her family afloat. Nachiket did realise that they had their reasons for the separation, for the fight, for the hatred and the pain - God knows he has suffered as much - but every time he got to know how she had killed a part of herself during this struggle, his heart had bled inside"

I love it when you give in to our 'please write more' pleas so lovingly and write :)

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Hey, I am sorry. Didn't get much time at work to read your lovely views and comment. So here I am ! 😃

Now that you mentioned, I think I also like that highlighted para - surely enjoyed while writing it.

But I surely enjoy reading all comments - makes me float in seventh heaven.

Am glad you liked the BONUS. 😊😳 And as of yet, no more pleading. 😆

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