Neira FF JOYRIDE : ANNOUNCEMENT Pg 150 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago
Metoyou!!! True to your username! You really gave it to us man __/\__
May i know your name? :) But as it goes "Naam mein kya rakha hai" i will put my thoughts down over this update.
I am finding words to appreciate this fabulous piece you wrote here, actually the wait was worth it. It did left me speechless but i will make sure to express myself here so don't mind if i turn complete lame in between. As i generally do.
Nachiket and ragini's soulful conversation straight away banged into my heart and i swear i felt so soo sooo good reading it. Today was my paper so this made me feel lot better. The indirect answer of ragini in the end was the justified finish to this awesome update, you maintained the consistency of being awesome...like it didn't went a pitch below awesome anywhere in the middle, it was awesome throughout. Give yourself a pat on your back, or ask someone to do it on my behalf as i don't know how you'll do it on your own hahaha! Aee i loved those moments especially where ragini wanted to hug him, awww our babies :') it was like the rush moment, i was feeling like sitting on the edge of the chair and imagining the scene infront of my eyes and then biting my nails and all enthusiastic stuff going on and then THUD! You finished it! Like a boss.
Kuch zyada taareef nhi ho gyi? :S
But don't worry aage k liye stock hai, ragini! Ab tumhari baari :D Take your time but, no rush, studies come first!
You guys have truly rocked this thread. *Hi5*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

<font size="2">Metoyou!!! True to your username! You really gave it to us man __/\__
May i know your name? :) But as it goes "Naam mein kya rakha hai" i will put my thoughts down over this update.
I am finding words to appreciate this fabulous piece you wrote here, actually the wait was worth it. It did left me speechless but i will make sure to express myself here so don't mind if i turn complete lame in between. As i generally do.
Nachiket and ragini's soulful conversation straight away banged into my heart and i swear i felt so soo sooo good reading it. Today was my paper so this made me feel lot better. The indirect answer of ragini in the end was the justified finish to this awesome update, you maintained the consistency of being awesome...like it didn't went a pitch below awesome anywhere in the middle, it was awesome throughout. Give yourself a pat on your back, or ask someone to do it on my behalf as i don't know how you'll do it on your own hahaha! Aee i loved those moments especially where ragini wanted to hug him, awww our babies :') it was like the rush moment, i was feeling like sitting on the edge of the chair and imagining the scene infront of my eyes and then biting my nails and all enthusiastic stuff going on and then THUD! You finished it! Like a boss.
Kuch zyada taareef nhi ho gyi? :S
But don't worry aage k liye stock hai, ragini! Ab tumhari baari :D Take your time but, no rush, studies come first!
You guys have truly rocked this thread. *Hi5*
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*gives a hi5* Thanks Surbhi for appreciating her..the girl is named Narges😉
And now I have time hi time😆 Done with the exams just today evening! And now all the best to you for your exams!
Narges will give reply to this once she is here😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR



*gives a hi5* Thanks Surbhi for appreciating her..the girl is named Narges😉
And now I have time hi time😆 Done with the exams just today evening! And now all the best to you for your exams!
Narges will give reply to this once she is here😊



Narges! Okay thankyou.
Oh thats great! Thankyou so much ragini, i need it! :X
Haha okay i will wait for her reply :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Narges!!

Thanks so much for this! :)
Was unwell for the last couple of days and this really cheered me up and helped me put a smile on my face by imagining the both of them in such a situation..

Even the Nachiket in the show just needs ONE hint that she still loves him and wants him back.. they'll be just fine once he knows that.. *SIGH*

:)


Thanks!!
Write soon!


SS! I am glad that I could cheer you up a bit 😊 That's why we are here, so bring a little bit of more joy to all of you and whenever that works, we are on cloud nine!
Keep supporting us and we will try to entertain you as much as we can 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sampa79

Awesome

wht a emotional update
kaash we can see something in serial
update soon next part


Thank you so much 😊 Next part will be soon, hopefully this weekend so be prepared because it will be a rocking one!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

Narges, that's such an excellent update.

As somebody mentioned, this is how a mature plot needs to be handled - I could almost visualize the scene in front of my eyes.

This was so poignant and beautiful. NR needs this interaction, this heart-to-heart discussion about how life has been for them and the kids in these 15 years. They should also acknowledge how some MUs and miscalculations have squandered away the family- how it has been a collective failure.

Really appreciate your efforts, knowing how de-motivating things are at present.

Now, it is upto Ragini.


Dear Rachna, thanks yaar. Seriously, I just don't know what to say. Matlab it feels great that you guys are liking it. Never ever had we thought that things would turn out like this.
I must say, this update took a bit of more time since it took a bit more effort to find inspiration (for obvious reasons) but luckily you all liked it! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

Yayyy! Everybody appreciating my partner's efforts! It feels sooo good!
And a good news..I'm done with my exams!! Will update this tomorrow. I'm yet to watch this weeks episodes. So the very first thing I'm going to do is watch the episodes 😉
By tomorrow evening I'll update this😳
Thank you guys for appreciating her 🤗


Bas kar tu yaar...mujhe aadat nahin itne tareef sunne ki 😳 Thank you for being such a good partner 🤗 Eagerly waiting for your super awesome update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: goldstar678

Excellent update once again,you both are so perfectly understand the emotions of Neira,this is the best scene of the week for me.Yes,its much better than the whole week crap that they showed.


Thanks a lot goldstar 😊 I am very lucky to have such an awesome co-writer, she is amazing! 😳 Glad you liked it!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Blue_Moon824

@metoyou and @RaginiluvsNR



Yet another brilliant update..I really love both of yours "nokh jokh" that one writes better than the other .. Believe me ..Both of you write just brilliantly..fabulous .. I really wish NB gives you a chance to script for IKNMP .. Audience would be spellbound to get a taste of such wonderful creation ... This is how the story should actually have been..

Now @metoyou .. Some suggestions/complains .. I did not get these..
Bringing in of Suhani's angle ? and that she met with an accident in US .. Obviously in such a situation Neil will not be expected to be so "romantic" .. I think this was unnecessary .. and also unless Suhani angle is solved .. It won't be ever possible for Neil and Ragini to come together.. So if you are planning to take us readers through all of this(Suhani coming to India.. meeting Ragini ... sorting of differences etc)..then it's wonderful..else it could have been avoided ..

Sorry for being a bit critical ...
Waiting for the next update ..


Thank you so much Blue Moon! 😊 We are very lucky and happy to write this story together 😳Many people are liking it and that is what keeps us going.

About your suggestions/complains: Thank you for being honest, much appreciated. We do not plan to bring much of the heavy stuff, related with other characters, into this story. I have used the Suhaani accident thing just for the realization of Nachiket being (not) a good father, hence I mentioned it. In that particular scene Neil was not ''romantic'' but just pouring his heart out to Ragini, the rest of the convo was more about their, the way they have suffered and sharing it with each other. Surely, some ''romance'' will be involved in that. Nevertheless, I do get your point but we will mainly focus on NeiRa (as my partner already explained) 😊

Hope it is clear, if not feel free to say so! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR



Hey! Thanks for your appreciation and for the suggestion as well! Nice idea actually. Don't worry! We'll keep them together somehow 😆


Thank you proneira! Feels good to read comments from silent readers 😊 Also thanks for the suggestion, we will figure something out 😉

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