Neira FF JOYRIDE : ANNOUNCEMENT Pg 150 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!!!
This was just stunning!! The dialogues were so beautiful.. loved the whole build up and the moment shared between them.. so so so amazing!! <3

Thank you!! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

WOW!!!

This was just stunning!! The dialogues were so beautiful.. loved the whole build up and the moment shared between them.. so so so amazing!! <3

Thank you!! :D


Thank you thank you ji 😊 Keep motivating us and we will do great, Insha'Allah 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: metoyou


Thank you thank you ji 😊 Keep motivating us and we will do great, Insha'Allah 😃


Always there to cheer you guys on 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


Yeh baarish ke boondh toh nahin ho sakti, kyunki baarish ko dekh kar mere dil mein itna dard nahin hota.
Wow Metoyou ... 👏 ... Kudos...

Typical Nachiket dialogue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is beautiful, Narges and Ragini.
Maybe EK should hire you both to write dialogues for NR.

They are simply beautiful.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng



Yeh baarish ke boondh toh nahin ho sakti, kyunki baarish ko dekh kar mere dil mein itna dard nahin hota.

Wow Metoyou ... 👏 ... Kudos...

Typical Nachiket dialogue...


Thanks Vidya 😊 Keep motivating us (whenever we write good stuff) 😳😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

This is beautiful, Narges and Ragini.

Maybe EK should hire you both to write dialogues for NR.

They are simply beautiful.


Thank you Rachna. Your support and motivation means a lot, it makes us want to write more and hopefully better too .We better get paid for the creativity, nothing comes for free these days 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Of course, that's why I said HIRE 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
"Ab kya kare Nachiket? Oh god! Lagta hai life ki sari problems ek saath aa gayi hai aaj! Pehle traffic jam, phir baarish aur ab ye!"she said as she almost felt like crying.


"Ragini.. ab please tumhara ye rona dhona chalu mat karo ha! Ek to pehle se hi main bohot pareshan hu.." he said pointing a finger towards her.


"Accha! To matlab main pareshan karti hu tumhe? Tum to jaise bohot shareef ho na!" she said stepping towards him.


"Ragini! No! Ye koi waqt hai ladne ka?" he said giving a hard stare to her.


"To ab kya? Kuch sujh raha hai" she said as she removed the keys from the scooty and handed them to him.


"Tum ek kam karo..Dr. Aman ko yaha bula lo tumhe lene ke liye." he said as he parked the scooty a little sideways.


"Dr.Aman ko kyu?" she said without giving it a second thought.


"Kyu matlab? Pati hai tumhare, farz banta hai unka!" he said in a obvious tone.


"Nahi..woh..i mean.." she said composing herself"i mean unhe kyu..matlab is waqt kyu? Itni raat ho chuki hai wo so gaye honge, subah bhi to jaldi jate hai hospital.. Nahi Nachiket, main unhe disturb nahi karna chahti!"


"Wah! Kamaal ka pyaar hai Ragini!" he said with his usual smirk.


"Nachiket!" she sounded a little hurt " Main sab jaanti hu..tumhari problem main hu hai na? To thik hai phir!" She said as she released the loose end of her sari from her waist and started walking her way on the empty road.


"Where are you going?" he snarled at her.


"No..Nowhe...None of your business," she said, squaring her jaw.

"Ragini, it's late. It's raining. Come home with me. Now," said Nachiket warningly.


"No, I won't. Main khud chali jaungi ghar," she replied with the stubbornness characteristic of Ragini Patel. She looked up doubtfully at the dark, night sky. Giant raindrops were beginning to pelt down. She had no idea how she was going to get home.

"I'll manage!" she said quietly as she moved ahead but her soul was praying to god for making Nachiket come along with her.

"Ragini ruko! I'll come with you. Main tumhe akele nahi jane de sakta and you know that!" he said, turning on his heel towards her. .

"Fine. I'll go with you!" she said huffily but quietly thanking god for his mercy.

She was looking into the rain that had intensified into a heavy drizzle now. She had that slight smile on her face. It was that tiny smile that barely lifted the corners of her lips, but shone fully in her eyes. He'd seen it peek out once in a way.

He liked that smile, he decided.He looked away as she shot him a puzzled glance. He'd been staring, he realized embarrassedly.

"What?" she asked.

"What what?" he said.


"Mujhe aisa kyu laga ke tum mujhe ghoor rahe ho?"she said as she looked into his eyes as if to find something in them.


"I wasn't staring. Don't flatter yourself Ragini. Aur jaldi chalo..der mujhe nahi tumhe ho rahi hai." he muttered.


They walked along quietly for the next 5 minutes or so. Besides the jingling sound of her anklets, threre was a perfect silence. Lights from houses on its opposite shore glistened on the surface, lighting up the water in patches.

Ragini looked at the lamps on the other side of the alley. Each bright yellow bulb lighting up the tree around it.

He kicked a stray pebble into a tiny puddle, splashing his shoes with muddy water which in turn splashed a little water on her sari.

"Nachiket!" she said irritatingly as she looked at her sari.


"Oops! Sorry Ragini."

She looked at him sideways "kya sorry? Thik se to chalna hi nahi hai. Meri itni achi saree kharab kar di! Eewww!" she said shooking her saree.


"Kya Ragini tum bhi..ek saree hi to hai!" he said carelessly.

She shot a hard stare at him. He sighed in reply. She rolled her eyes in the darkness and they started walking.


"Nachiket.."she broke the silence after a minute


"hmm.."


"Tumhe ye khusbu aa rahi hai?" she said as her eyes twinkled.


"You mean the smell of the wet earth?" he asked


"Hmm.." she said inhaling he fragrance with her eyes closed."You like it?"


"I love it!" he said smiling lightly.


"I love it too!"

Their eyes met crinkling at the corners as he smiled at her.

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Posted: 10 years ago

ooo HOW DID YOU GET THIS idea?!?!?!?


"Romantic"it's very romantic. And awesome, too."

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