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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Thanks so much for the appreciation.. even I find the angst between them most gripping.. Their confession absolutely must be passionate and highly emotional..

Hoping for the best :)

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

It was really well written
;)

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Shweta

@Luv-IKNMP

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

First of all you deserve one big tight hug from me!!... 🤗
Now back to your OS!!.. Well I'm totally in love with it!!...
It was just fab!!... 👏
I wish we had the same scene in the show also!!... 😛 😛
Pls pls pls do write more!!..
Love ya ❤️

Shweta

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Thanks a lot Asma and Shweta! :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Beautiful piece. So simple yet emotional. ')

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

OMG!! This was so so beautiful yaar ❤️ Loved it!!🤗

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Amina Choudhury

@sparkleamina

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

What a beautiful and emotional OS :'(

Amazingly written.

Loved the little touches from Nachiket and Ragini being her true self in front of him. So sad at the end when the realisation hits Nachiket that she is married...would be great to have a continuation to see Ragini's thoughts...?

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

You know what I think of you as a writer

Is that you are brilliant

You know nachiket like no one does

You have built a fabulous stand up HOT loving guy in your FFs

You need to write a longer story

As a fitting ode to your nachiket

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sparkleamina
What a beautiful and emotional OS :'(
Amazingly written.

Loved the little touches from Nachiket and Ragini being her true self in front of him. So sad at the end when the realisation hits Nachiket that she is married...would be great to have a continuation to see Ragini's thoughts...?

Thank you so much 😳

This one really was a OS because I cannot imagine the pain both of them would be in post this.. however, I will definitely try and think of a logical and emotional continuation for the same..

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: columbia
You know what I think of you as a writer
Is that you are brilliant
You know nachiket like no one does
You have built a fabulous stand up HOT loving guy in your FFs
You need to write a longer story
As a fitting ode to your nachiket

Thank you sooo much😳

I need to do something about my attention span and try to write longer parts I guess..

too difficult but I'll definitely try!