SS- NEIRA-(Unnamed) - Part -4 UPDATED pG-9 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
That was fab...! Really loving the way u write..!:)
Continue sooonnn😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shakti...where r u...we all are waiting for u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART -4

Yes the male ego got deeply hurt that his lady lied him...with fuming anger he thought to confront her...realizing that its time for him to get into his scrub he waved the thoughts and left to his cabin...
After a very tiring day he got a call from agent to meet the seller. Neil comes only to see its Ragini a shell shocked ragini gets into a discussion with him.
Ragini: Nachiket Tum?
Neil: Nahi mein Nachiket ka bhoot Jo khada hu... Ya oh no ek minute Aman ka future Jo tere samnevkhada hu
Ragini: Mazak karne nahi ayi hu mein
Neil: Mein toh bewarse mein kam wan chodke baita hu na and waves off his hand
Ragini: Agar tum ghar khareeed na chaute ho toh mein nahi bechungi apne ghar
Neil: Agar tum is duniye ke akhri skaks ho Jo ghar bechna chahti ho to bhi nahi kareednewala hu...waise tumhara pati dev Ko nahi pata hai kya...ya phir Tu ne use Teri madad ke kayak samjhi kya

Ragini: Mein Aman ki help nahi lena chahti...
Neil: Oh really!!! Help nahi chahti Aman se good itna nalayak hai kya
Ragini : Bass bohot ho gaya and is about to leave
Neil: Itna gussa ek baat tumhare aman ke barein mein kehdiya
Ragini: Bass nachiket mujhe nikal na hoga
And leaves... NEIL looks on with a smirk ...
It's night 12:00 Nishi and family getting ready to wish Arav and they all do as per plan for cake cutting...but disappointed Aeav hurts Ragini rejecting her warmth... Bell rings and there you go its Aagam welcomed warmly by ragini.
Arav Nishi nani sunnytai in cloud 9 as Agam has come and its his first birthday with them... In all sentimental and heart touching talks sunny tai reveals that since last 15 years Ragini bakes 2cakes one for Arav and the other for Agam. Agam gets so touched with this and all are ready to enjoy the moment. All gather at dining table... Both bros are about to cut the cake...
Pam rebukes Neil that Ragini is snatching her son while Neil says that Agam is nit a small kid. Every kid has right to love with their parents in their case as they are divorced and after ages kids have come together whatever might be the reason the blood will pull and he asks pam that he is grateful and thankful to her that she has taken care of his kids and he always will have hight respect for her through out his life but it shouldn't come in between the relation of a parent. As Ragini and he are the ones who gave birth to the kids.
Pam: Neil tum tum ne eh bast karahe Ho??? Ho kya Gaya hai Neol ankhein Kholo sure Zara dekho wo manhoos bachalan aurat Kisi aur ke saath shadi karke...

Basss pam Enough nit an another word against Ragini I would want to hear... Is that clear??? Shouts Neil...

Pam stuck in shock with eyes wide opened and mouth took while nivedita pukes her bite of coffeee in her coffee mug...


Here ends thus short update actually was suffering from high fever cold cough from Dec 31st jabse manhoos nivedita ghantiya bhajaane lago tab se...

Will update it today only... Aur ha meri imagination Mein Ragini ya Kisi bhi aurat weak nahi Ho sakti... Neil and Ragini both will be tough tiffs here which will be more gripping...

If you all liked the chotusa update hit like and care to share ur views...

Adios & Signing off

Shakti (loads of love for u all :-))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Likd the way Neil replied back.pam deserved it.jab dekho tab suru ho jati hai.it will work as a eye opener for her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Great update!
Love how Neil let Aagam spend time with his mother and shut Pam up. Liked the little interaction between NeiRa as well.
Hope you get well soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Aww, thanks for the update even when you are unwell.
Short but sweet.

We will wait for a bigger one, once you are better.

BTW, loved the idea that Neil gave it back to Amplified Witch. Also, loved the part of Nivi puking into her own coffee. 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Aww, thanks for the update even when you are unwell.

Short but sweet.

We will wait for a bigger one, once you are better.

BTW, loved the idea that Neil gave it back to Amplified Witch. Also, loved the part of Nivi puking into her own coffee.👍🏼



Hehehe thanks now apart from puking choking on her face n coffee migs she will not have any damn work in my imagination... Naam loya wahi kaaafi hai is aurat keliye lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Lovely that he stood up for Ragini..
Thanks for the chotu but super cute update..

Do get well soon..
Happy new year! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
nice update...loved the way neil stopped pam...i think definetely ragini deserves at least that amount of respect that neil should not hear such rubbish things from anyone regarding ragini...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heeyy!!.. Thanks for the update 😊 😉
Really loved the way Neil shut Pam's mouth!!... 😃 😃
Take care of yourself sweety!!.. ❤️
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