SS- NEIRA-(Unnamed) - Part -4 UPDATED pG-9 - Page 4

Originally posted by: _YuviFanatic_

This is amazing Shakti di.

Awww thanks shruti... 😉

Very tightly and well written

Shakti!!

Amazing update!!... I liked the part where Neil is trying to solve Ragini's marriage puzzle 😛 wonder what would happen when he comes to know they aren't married! 😃
Thanks for the PM!!!...
Update soon!!...

Originally posted by: Romanticfreak

aww thanks buddy... if they started the show with full brainy Dr. Neil then why make him dumb all of sudden with niveditha and Pam yar ... lol I want him to be acting with his brains... lolz heya whats ur name ...

shakti...u have written it so beautifully and connected everything so nicely that once i thought that i have missed sum episode n u have put written update of that episode...

Hey Shakti!

Originally posted by: Vikruti

Hey Shakti!

Loved the update. Thank god that Neil's brain is picking up the little details of Ragini's life. Hopefully he finds out everything soon. Love the tactics that Nishi did at end on the phone.

Little antics of his grown up daughter he should be aware off when its his turn to make ragini understand that the mind mockery she had about her rules might break the track of kids... May be on a positive note... 😉 lets see...

And awww dear thanks u liked reading me.

Originally posted by: luvrr

shakti...u have written it so beautifully and connected everything so nicely that once i thought that i have missed sum episode n u have put written update of that episode...

but thn realised its our fantasy land coz no PAM here...😃

but i really hope serial CV's also thinks like u..n show sumthing like this in serial...

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Shakti!!

That was AWESOME! Really loved the flow and all the elements..

Hope we get to see Neil introspecting a little in the show as well.. would be fantastic..

Really enjoyed reading this.. do continue soon! :)