OS- Love Remains Same LAST PART UPDATED ON PAGE 3

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Hello friends i knw its too early to write a OS on IKNMP but i have already written it so plz give feedback

OS - LOVE REMAINS SAME

PART 1

PART 2 [LAST PART]



Hi ye kahani hai meri Ragini Patel
oops Ragini Nachiket Khanna

aur

MR.Neil
ha main pyar se Nachiket ko Neil bolti hu unhe mere muh se mr Neil K sunna bahut accha lagta hai...



2 years ago...




I could feel my heart breaking. It felt as if someone was ripping it out of my chest and stomping on it until it shattered in two.


"Are you okay?" The old lady asked me.

I just nodded containing my shock and heartache. Tears flowng out of my eyes as my wobbly legs held me up off the beige couch.

"T-thank you. I should go." I said hastily. Without waiting for a response, I ran out of there...

The picture of Neil...his gorgeous wife, and his twin boys burned in my mind.

I get in my car, not able to forget the memory of that one picture.


My hands were shaky, but after two full minutes I managed to get the key into the ignition.


I looked up at Neil's perfect house before driving away.

I came here to surprise Neil but now i was in shock...he is married not married had two children twins...


It had all been a lie. His promises, his words, his kisses. They meant nothing to him. He lied. Neil lied.


I knew i ki main driving ki halat me nahi thi but I couldn't have cared less at that moment.

I dialed Isha' s number(her friend) and waited


"Hello?" she said.


"He lied!" I said, breaking out into tears,

"Neil shadi shuda hai uske do judwa bacche hai..he he..., not able to continue.

Kya no Ragini...thats not true i mean how u know...look baby Calm down. Where are you right now?" She asked.


"I'm driving away from his house." I sobbed...going to suicide...


What r u mad...tujhe meri kasam
Stop crying for a minute.car rok abhi..." She said.

I pressed the brake on my car, seeing the red light. I quickly wiped tears from my face, my vision becoming less blurry.

"Okay. Okay kasam wasam...," I breathed.


"Now take the first flight home. Drive to the airport right now." She instructed.


"O-okay." I said but tears not stop...


"Now drive carefully and hurry home. I love you. Trust me, you will get through this."

She said in a confident tone. I nodded even though she couldn't see me.

"Bye. Love you too." I said, phone cut...

I couldn't wait to get home,cry in Isha's arm

Of course I fell for the 25 year old guy with a wife and kids. Not that I knew in the whole two years I had dated him.

He had been my first everything. Mera pahla pyar my 1st boyfriend, my first kiss, and the first and only guy who ever made love to me.

I gave him everything and all he gave me was betrayal. The funniest thing is i still love Neil,i want him back, i want his tight hug...i want to listen his heartbeat...
I want Neil

I've seen a lot of cheaters in my life.

Isha's last boyfriend cheated on her. My history teacher cheated on his wife..


Never in my wildest dreams would I have thought Neil was a cheater. Not fun loving, life of the party Neil. Not the Neil who kept his cool when things got out of hand. Not the Neil who had never even looked at another girl besides me, even though plenty of girls wants him...

Neil


It hurt so bad.


And ye signal green kyo nahi ho rha hai... I looked beside me at the other drivers who were having aslo wait for signal...i was again in shock...

Right there next to me in his shiny, black car was Neil...My heart started beating fast...

He looked over at me. At my red, puffy face that probably had mascara all over it from the crying. He didn't hide his shock. Looking at me, he knew that I knew. His secret was out now...

"Ragini...!" He shouted, using his loud..voice.

That same voice that had sang to me months ago at a little cafe in front of a huge crowd. I remembered how he had jumped on a table while everyone was watching him and he started dancing. I had shouted at him to get down while I covered my red face...

Was this the same person? I broke the eye contact...


The red light finally changed to green. I heard him shout my name twice more, but I ignored it. I ignored the heartache. I speeed away with more tears forming in my eyes.


Why did that red light have to take so long?

Why did he have to be right next to me? Why did he have to see me?

I drove like a crazy. When I looked in the rear view mirror, I saw his car was right behind me.


Oh oh oh noo

Wo mera picha kar raha hai...?
Of course he was, but why?

Ab sab khatam ho gaya hai Neil fir bhi tum... Tum khush ho apni life me apni biwi or baccho ke sath...fir kyu aa rho ho...mere piche...

I saw the green sign that said the airport was only 2km away.

I speed up not wanting him to catch up with me.

But he ll catch me...at parking and i have to pay rent for this car take my Voter card back it tooks so much time...

At airport
Finally he caught me...


He still looked breathtaking with his dark black hair, and light brown eyes.

I opened up the passngr door of car and angrily took out my two suitcases.
he walked towards me. I could see him out of the corner of my eye, but I try to stay focused on getting my luggage.

Once I did, I slammed the door down, hoping I hadn't shut it too hard bcoz its rented car not mine...

"Ragini!!!!!!!!" Ragini ek baar meri baat sun lo...

He called. I took my suitcases (one in each hand) and started walking away...

Kaha ja rhi ho Ragini...

I was well aware he was following me. What I couldn't understand was why...


Before I can realize what's happening, I trip over one of the heavy bags weighing me down. I was falling through the air, but I didn't hit the ground...

Of course he would catch me...

I look into his brilliant blue eyes. The ones I fell in love with the first time they looked at me. I sucked in a breath as he lifted me up, but he didn't let me go. Instead he wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me close.

"Let me go Neil" I said.

"No, I promised I would be there to catch you, and I am." He said. I looked up at him.

"How could you Neil?" I asked. Now my voice sounded weak. I sounded like I was on the verge of breaking.

Main tumse sorry nahi kahunga kyoki sorry is not enough Ragini.. I can explian you...

He sounded so calm. It was like I never found out his big secret. How could he be so calm all the time...

"No! I hate you Neil i hate you." i said hitting on his chest...

"But I love you." He said quietly. I looked into his eyes. They were filled with love. They were filled with the truth, but this wasn't right
Neil ne jhut bola... He already had a wife..he already love someone who is not me...

"No, you don't. You're a liar, a cheater." I said. He looked down. Finally I could see he felt a little ashamed at what he did.



"I've been feeling sorry for me but now I feel more sorry for your wife.

How could you do that to her?
What about your little kids?

Some father you turned out to be. I won't be a home wrecker,.." I said coldy. His next words almost made me fall to the floor.


"Wo mere bacche nahi hai." He spoke in a low voice.


What
"What do you mean?"

"It's a long story and I need time to explain." He said...

Mujhe Neil ke sath jana chahiye tha...of course

Bcoz I loved him.


"Fine, but after you say whatever it is you want to tell me, don't follow me again."

I told him. It hurt to say those words because a big part of me wanted him to follow me. I knew that wasn't right though.

He led me to his car and I got in...


It was a Silent drive...tears contineously flowing from my eyes.but Neil Neil wo itna shant kaise rah skta tha...

He parked in front of a little cafe. He got out first and after taking a calm, collected breath, I got out too.


We sat down and a waiter came over to us immediately. I kept quiet, but Neil ordered exactly what I wanted. A coffee and a piece of chocolate cake. He ordered his usual too...

When our food arrived, I took a sip of the coffee. It burnt my tongue but that was nothing compared to the pain in my heart.

To be continued

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was lovely!
Nice twist to the betrayal angle..
Please continue soon <3

Even I want Neil to sing to Ragini in the show!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally someone write on them
well written dear
it was like i was watching the show lol

even i also felt that the kids aren't his

plz do continue soon

cant wait




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Posted: 10 years ago
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nicely woven story...looking forward to it's update...thank you dear ..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Aman u see this show too good one I have read this n on Ragini n Neil it's also suited pls keep writing
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Hey you write so beautifully! It's never too early to write an OS 😉

I loved it.. Can't wait to read the next part.. Cheers!
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plz continue...[/QUOTE


Thank u so much Will continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

That was lovely!

Nice twist to the betrayal angle..
Please continue soon <3

Even I want Neil to sing to Ragini in the show!


Thank u so much for u valuable comment ll post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kamiya

finally someone write on them

well written dear
it was like i was watching the show lol

even i also felt that the kids aren't his

plz do continue soon

cant wait






Thanx so much for ur comment i m glad u like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurjya

nicely woven story...looking forward to it's update...thank you dear ..😊




Thank u so much for u valuable comment ll post soon

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