My version of Neil's entry

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luvrr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesum writing sukhi...if this would have been the 1st episode of show..definetely got highest trps...

pls keep writing...love ur thoughts n the way u pen down them...

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: luvrr
awesum writing sukhi...if this would have been the 1st episode of show..definetely got highest trps...
pls keep writing...love ur thoughts n the way u pen down them...

Thank you so much 😳😳😳

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poojadas77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

ya its nice ... but i think they showed his intro so lightfully because Neil is now a heartless man... he dont hav emotion for any one... and also as RR said Neil is a practical person rather than an emotional one... so its quite justified entry of Dr.Dashing!

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

@ronitfan was really hoping to write ya but time hi nahi mil raha!!! Next time fosho now shl enjoy your lovely piece of writing

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ttrocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Beautifully penned down! 👏

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: columbia
@ronitfan was really hoping to write ya but time hi nahi mil raha!!! Next time fosho now shl enjoy your lovely piece of writing

I'll still wait😆😉

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Dearest ronit fan, hope you like it!

Here you go my dear a companion Ragini piece to your lovely Neil entry!!!!

She was always an early bird. It's the getting up early everyday of her life that is the secret to her health she thinks. But this Monday as she returns home from work, she realizes she feels quite tired. She thinks she could go home and sleep for hours. She wonders about her exhaustion as she enters the house.

Home is a cacophony that does not help her tired eyes or ears. Shantabai's antics her son's complaints, her daughter's whining, her mother's lectures. She wants to escape it all. But where can she go? She announces she is having a headache and walks into Ba's room. She lies down on the bed with Ba sitting and enjoying her TV on mute. The senility of the old lady is the only thing that makes sense in the house she thinks.

Her Ba suddenly starts laughing, she turns over and looks at her ba

Kya hua ba, itni hassi? She smiles

Hassi nahi aayega? Main khush hun na? Mera pati mujhe bahut pyaar karta hai

She smiles listening and is about to turn her back

Itna pyaar ke aaj hamari anniversary hai, ghumne jaa rahe hai

Her back stills, her ears fail to hear any more of Ba's mutterings

She holds her heart, willing it to stop beating so fast, her heart calms, but her tears they continue to fall. She wipes them quickly and wills herself to sleep.

Ba continues to mutter happy anniversary grinning to herself, mutters it again and again only stops when she hears her granddaughter whisper in her sleep. She turns and looks at her, whispers

Ragini?

To which Ragini whispers..

Nachiket!

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Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Aww thats so cute Columbia!!

Loved it...especially her whisper, "Nachiket"

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luvrr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

ragini always hides her love from evryone...but at least in sleep she was true to her whispering his name...nachiket...

nyc one...columbia...

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: columbia
Dearest ronit fan, hope you like it!
Here you go my dear a companion Ragini piece to your lovely Neil entry!!!!

She was always an early bird. It's the getting up early everyday of her life that is the secret to her health she thinks. But this Monday as she returns home from work, she realizes she feels quite tired. She thinks she could go home and sleep for hours. She wonders about her exhaustion as she enters the house.

Home is a cacophony that does not help her tired eyes or ears. Shantabai's antics her son's complaints, her daughter's whining, her mother's lectures. She wants to escape it all. But where can she go? She announces she is having a headache and walks into Ba's room. She lies down on the bed with Ba sitting and enjoying her TV on mute. The senility of the old lady is the only thing that makes sense in the house she thinks.

Her Ba suddenly starts laughing, she turns over and looks at her ba
Kya hua ba, itni hassi? She smiles
Hassi nahi aayega? Main khush hun na? Mera pati mujhe bahut pyaar karta hai
She smiles listening and is about to turn her back
Itna pyaar ke aaj hamari anniversary hai, ghumne jaa rahe hai
Her back stills, her ears fail to hear any more of Ba's mutterings
She holds her heart, willing it to stop beating so fast, her heart calms, but her tears they continue to fall. She wipes them quickly and wills herself to sleep.

Ba continues to mutter happy anniversary grinning to herself, mutters it again and again only stops when she hears her granddaughter whisper in her sleep. She turns and looks at her, whispers
Ragini?
To which Ragini whispers..
Nachiket!