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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey Kavita,

Amazing update...

I love Aarav and Manav’s conversations/ banter. They are such kids...but they bring lightness to life. By the way, what is Anjali’s age ?

Does Aarav has soft corner for Rashmi or was it default pairing, as Manav was walking with Anjali and Arnav with Khushi?

Now, Arnav wanted to speak to Khushi that night, when she faked sleep, did he wanted to confess his love for her ?

How much of his family situation will he share with her even if they confess their feelings and not to forget, Khushi revealing Payal connection ?


What will the New Year bring to their lives ?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi

That was an amazing update 😀

Loved the way you described full chapter

There every emotions

Manav and arav are like cat and dog

Rashmi clear s her place in arnavs life

Khushi finally realized that she is in Love with arnav

But payals mystery is the problem in arshis life

Asr is day dreaming

Thanks for the beautiful update 😀

Update soon 😀

TC😀

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update, loved it.Rashmi's past revelation cleared everything & Kushi 's realisation of her love for Arnav.

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Posted: 6 years ago

This is why I continue to write in spite of the dwindling likes


hi Kavi,

Don't say that. You keep writing and those likes will come , automatically.

Moths can't resist dancing around the flame😊😊

I read the chapter just now. Your narration is like 'Paisa vasool' . Story bhi hai...suspense bhi..emotions bhi ...aur tourism bhi hai....what's there not to like..😍

Bas lage raho.

love and hugs,

Vandana

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: charlotte74

This is why I continue to write in spite of the dwindling likes ❤️

Goriye 😘 tusi great ho.😍

Jane kahan kahan se dhoohdh lati ho aise gems..✌❤

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: charlotte74

This is why I continue to write in spite of the dwindling likes ❤️

Don't worry about the likes Kavi. I think it's only because of all the IF changes.


As for the gifs, images & videos, it's your storytelling that inspires us to hunt for them ❤️🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wonderful story with mystery revolving around.....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi dear!! Amaazing I loved it very much. Khushi has finally realized 😳. Arshi together look so so beautiful together. Waiting for more

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Posted: 6 years ago

With each chapter Payal story is taking lots of twist and turns. Why do I feel that Payal is involved with Aarav and not with Arnav and Manav knows about it. Arnav is daydreaming and he surely needs a cold shower. So, finally Khushi realised her love for Arnav. I like this Manav, he is making sure no one should come between Arnav and Khushi. Waiting for next chapter.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishu136

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Firstly Thanks Gauri for reminding me this story and making me catching up on time. I owe you one for this!

My Thoughts:

This story is a perfect example of suspense and surprise!

When it started I did not even guess the story will have such turns of events and man you make me hold my breath every single update!!

First with a prologue I thought it's an infatuation turned love for Arshi and see it's the love blossomed between the most matured people at the matured age! How it ended with Arnav shocked over his thoughts about Khushi.

Chapter 1 - it was totally a roller coaster! Khushi from a little girl hanging out with her sister friends to a girl with hunched shoulders with past bitter memories struggling to process and proceed with life and it ended with how Khushi was shocked with her thouhts about Arnav.


Chapter 2 - Though Khushi came to Bangalore with a motive and struggling with Payal thoughts. Arnav came just in to help her, seek her out and put her out of the misery and how. How it ended with Khushi meeting Arnav at the least expected time and Arnav not recognizing her and Khushi not really happy about it😂


Chapter 3 - Khushi's hidden crush over Arnav over taking her resolve to avoid Arnav! - Arnav and Khushi on the table, with lights off, holding eackother close, just mobile torch and Khushi had to wipe his sweat (poor Girl, I can totally understand her action any girl in her place would have done the same;)) - How it ended with Khushi remember her crush and him teaching her dance, a positive sign!!


Chapter 4 - I totally loved for quick progress in the story with Payal story and Arnav admiring Khushi and Khushi admiring Arnav and Khushi starting seeing Arnav on a different light and Arshi fighting - Arshi getting comfortable with each other despite not getting aware of and the great Rashmi entry which I don't ponder over it too much and How it ended with Arnav and Khushi on a bike, waahhhh!!


Chapter 5 - this took away the place for my favorite chapter, loved every bit of it - Right from how Khushi mind was messed up and Arnav turned up to mess up more and he did, didn't he? The way he chased Srejith away, the way he started caring for Khushi, the way he tied her hair (my god), the way Khushi showed her jealousy over Rashmi and Arnav's explanation to it (damn cute), Khushi anger on Arnav for drinking though it's her frustration on Payal, Arnav's reply and his explanation, Khushi consoled and lend her shoulder and in turn she cried on Arnav's shoulder and how it ended with Arnav and Khushi sleeping cosy on a sofa and Khushi dream which is her consciousness pricking her.


Chapter 6 - and yet again this chapter took away the place of my favorite chapter - Especially which Ridhabh strong words on Arnav, her forceful confession confused Khushi more - But the trip to well and saving girl from the ghost and scaring Khushi then daring Khushi and Arshi's almost kiss then Rashmi called to confuse Khushi more - How it ended with Khushi acknowledging her craving for forbidden fruit!!


Chapter 7 - OMG, this chapter I understand not this chapter but the whole has become my favorite that each chapter will become my favorite for its own reasons - How it started with Manav's entry here he came, he told, he gave an insight of past life, encouraged Khushi - Again came Rashmi though I was little doubtful with Rashmi kept saying things as Arnav's favorite and turned out to be its Manav's favorite and I felt may be there was love triangle and brushed it off thinking he is trying to make less akward for Khushi - How it ended with Khushi was convinced with Payal at fault and Arnav after all seem to have helped her.


Chapter 8 - Do I need to repeat myself as to what this chapter did to me?!! Of course my most favorite one for the obvious kiss happened!! - How it started with Saree shopping, sexy blouse, Function where Khushi felt out of place and when she saw Arnav, Rashmi and Savi, she could stop her heart breaking a little and chest tightening - I absolutely loved the fight and How it ended with Khushi bursting at Arnav with ranting from Srejith to Rashmi and Arnav had to stop her by kissing her and then snapped her blouse open!!


Chapter 9 -What a chapter!! Sheetal ice cream parlour - Though I was a little disappointed with the Chapter not starting from the exact end part of the last chapter but you understand us and gave away what we needed - Arshi crossed the boundary and already comfortable with each other atleast Arnav with Khushi - Stupid Srejith, glad He is out - Rashmi played a role in messing up Khushi brain and glad it happened as relationship should not start on a lie - I'm surprised how Khushi saw Manav's crush/love for Rashmi but I think he is over it - I loved how Khushi took care of Arnav and how it ended with Khushi wailing in guilt!


Chapter 10 - Much Needed revelation about Arnav's background - so proud of him, despite his suffering he stood tall and helping others are what I like the most about him - I'm sure he helped Payal like he helped Manav and Rashmi and probably he tried to stop her from going back to drugs but he couldn't and as a result she went back and on top of it she would have proposed him and he would not have accepted it/ hurt her unintentional which would have made her do something in party which let her die - Arnav must be feeling guilty of not able to save her like how he tends to take blame for other doings - How it ended with Khushi in the dilemma and Arnav clarifying about his and Rashmi relationship which means that he acknowledges and admits Khushi is one special and the mind blowing kiss!!


Chapter 11 - A surprise chapter with the arrival of Aarav and Anjali -I dunno why I get a nagging feel that Aarav is someone very crucial here - Glad Rashmi understood Arshi relationship and clarified her stand - Now I understood how mature Arnav is though there was an ample chances for Rashmi getting back as well needed his help and he did but at the same time, made it very clear as to she will remain a friend to him - Khushi though should have rejoiced with this , she didn't her went out for the young girl sufferings and reasoned Rashmi's doing - Both Arshi are very matured!! I loved loved loved Arshi little romance in car all thanks to Manav, i liked how Khushi is fluttering and shivering with Arnav ministrations and Arnav is daydreaming about her eyes wide open -How it ended with Khushi and Arnav moving away from others and Khushi saying this place is beautiful, Arnav saying she is beautiful and Khushi looks at him and realises how she would give every damn thing to be with him ever! And that how one realizes tthe love!! Love should slowly deep into your heart gives you warm feeling and spreads all over your heart then gives a sudden realization that this is love!!!


Thank you for this lovely tale and I love reading every bit of it🙂

Sorry for such a long comment, couldn't resist!!

I m asking the old question,Aishu..

R u for real??

🤣

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