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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#51

Very interesting chapters so arnav is an architect n that must be his company who gave internship to her n I think payal works for his elder brother ie advait i think but he is in his forties you mentioned i the chapter so how old is arnav.

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Sheetal

@Prettycool

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

Nice concept, keep us indulging.

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#53

Beautiful poem. Things got off to an awkward start but not too bad.

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#54

Really nice start... liked Arnav and Khushi's first meet and that phone convo, oh boy.. so awkward but really looking forward to them meeting each other again.

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Nice update. Shashi was an understanding father. Looks like it was Arnav company that was recruiting. Is Arnav related to Anjali and Advait?

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#56

WOW... So finally they met... I love this calm Arnav..

Khushi is so protective... Payal is seems naughty... Poor Aakash.. I know she's gonna give him hard time...

Is Advait Payal's boss?? What's his story??

Khushi and her blabbering... 😆 I am glad Arnav took it well...

Will they both continue meeting or Only texting as she will be in London??

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coolie001

@coolie001

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#57

😊

Thanks for all the lovely comments, you guys!

All your questions will be answered!😆

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thamanna

@owin

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#58

Very interesting start.Different from typical Arnav and Kushi.
I shouldn't be surprised.You are very good.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#59

intriguing

khushi is adopted but she has no idea

will d truth change her perspective toward life

who is her father

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

Moderator

+ 30

Posted: 6 years ago

#60

This is a very interesting story. First I wanted to attempt this prompt to develop my story, but later deviated from this and settled with some other prompt. That's why this theme is dearer to me , even I prepared a synopsis for this and banner too was readied 😊

The title is great and the start is excellent, eager to read the further development of the story 😊