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benita

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Posted: 6 years ago

#721

You made me do IT. Every day I check your post at least five times (that's when I am super busy😆)

Why such a cliff hanger

Please post soon...

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: canapoem
Writerji, you always come up with a scenario which none of us readers would have imagined. How do you do it every time?

Poor Arnav was so confused with the way "The stranger" and Khushi were behaving.
Women do drive men crazy with their unpredictable behaviour 😆

I am kind of happy and relieved that Khushi told him the truth. Every relationship should be based on trust and honesty and good that Arnav knows who the stranger is now.

Is Khushi wearing the same white gown which she had worn for the photograph?

Now I am can think of hundreds of ways about how you might write the story next and I also know that you will write something totally different. 😆

Absolutely stellar update this was!!!!

Thanks so much for your kind words! (both here and on WP)

This kind of feedback really keeps me going :)

I am happy that you are enjoying the unfoldings of the story. I'll be putting up the next part shortly and looking forward to your views on it!

(and yeah, she wore the same gown :D)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: Sharaa
I feel the excitement in Khushi..
She is so happy to know her stranger...
That too when he rejected her, she is in cloud nine...

Poor Arnav is utterly adorable when he is completely clueless..

Now, how he is going to react...
I wonder, Arnav only admired Khushi,not even meagre attraction...

Poor Khushi she is happily dolled up for this clueless man...

Am waiting for the day when Khushi knows about real deal of Magnolia between Arnav and Sheetal..

Thanks a lot!!

Khushi's joy at being rejected did puzzle the already confused Arnav :D

As of now, the strangers identities are known to both of them, levelling the field but Arnav and his deal's truth is yet to be out. So that's something I am looking forward to sharing with you as well.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: raki
Amazing update

Originally posted by: adyaa
Loved it !

Thanks so much!! :)

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

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Posted: 6 years ago

#725

Omggg, she told him!

Whoa whoa! This entire update had me nail-biting, literally.

Arnav's such a goner, lol.

I love how he just wanted to hear from his stranger love-interest but she had other plans.

Haha, the bit where Arnav get so uncomfortable with Khushi's hug depicts his 101 loyalty towards the love of his life.

Loving it, and I absolutely cannot wait to find out what happens next.

-A

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: crazybugs
Amazing update. Waiting for arnav reaction

Thank you!!

Arnav's reaction in next part :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: shiv456
wonder what will happen now awesome update

Thanks, shiv!

I'll update the next part in sometime.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
I hope and wish for Khushi to tell the truth to Arnav and she did... I am glad that Khushi didn't try to hide or run... Love her for her bold step...Thank you for making her to do it. Now wanna see HIS reaction...

Thanks a lot!

Fic!Khushi is kinda straightforward and honest(ish) when it comes to dealing with stuff- professional and personal, so she figured he deserved to know.

Arnav now, will have certain things to deal with.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: Waistlines
I guess this could go either way...Arnav who clearly prefers "his stranger over Khusi for whatever reason now knows the two women are one person, but does the fact that he likes his stranger more mean anything as far as his feelings and ego go?...hmm we'll just have to wait and see.
Great update, I like the maturity of Arnav and bravery of Khushi. 👏

Thanks so much!! for this :)

I am happy that you liked fic!Arshi. Khushi is kinda upfront when it comes to things, more than Arnav (as evident :D)

All about Arnav's reaction in the next part , that'll be up soon

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#730

Originally posted by: luvbug
oh my god!
oh my god!
how can you be so cruel? 😔 ... (i dont really mean it...its just that i want to read further )
why did you stop there??? oh nooo
Fantastic update by the way! im glad khushi told the truth... on less tangle ...they already have everything else tangled 😛
oh when can i read the next part... i know you are busy but its just at such a crucial point...can't help but ask for more 😊

Ah! I had to stop somewhere. :D

the next part is gonna be up shortly

Thanks so much for the response. Yeah, one less tangle as of now. Before the biggest one starts to unravel (?) ;)