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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: Janu75
Nice one .
Khushi s thoughts that she is interested in a stranger rather then Arnav ...aha...all will break loose Arnav is the stranger.
The drama of takeover ...waiting for it

Thanks a ton! :)

Their reaction if/when they find out should be interesting :D

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: Savera84
Nice update. I am wondering whether they fall for each other as Khushi and Arnav or as complete strangers met on chat by accident.
At the moment they are simply indulging in fun from their lonely and ever busy work schedule.
Cheers...

Thank you so much!

They do seem to seek each other out (the strangers) when in need of comfort. As of now Khushi intends to keep her r/lship with Arnav, professional and platonic. Going ahead, we'll have to see ;) :D

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Savera84

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Posted: 6 years ago

#473

I was checking for an update and found a reply to my comment.

Is there a chance for an update today?

Cheers...

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Charming, light and yet speaks highly of the writer who is smart and ambitious :D

Love their chats...so real that they help you connect with the protagonists and the exact nature of what is going on in their minds, emotions and even physical reactions.

Keep them coming 😃

P.S - I have never read your work before but it reminds me of one my favourite writers on the forum who left this space a long time ago. What I am trying to say is...I love the way you write...seemingly effortless but I know writing takes effort. Just goes to show you have a natural flair for it :D

Cheers
Sandhya

Hi Sandhya!

Thanks a lot for the encouraging feedback. :)

The fact that you enjoyed reading the story makes my writing even more worth it.

I'm not a seasoned writer (by any margin :D) so these reviews really help me u/s my own progress.

Hope the future updates can keep up and please keep sharing your views.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: Savera84
I was checking for an update and found a reply to my comment.
Is there a chance for an update today?
Cheers...

hi! (I think) I'll update today. Need to do some finishing touches. If not then in a day, at max. :)

PS: I wanted to write something more wrt your review but was afraid I might unknowingly give out something so restrained myself :D

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 6 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: ErisedWitch45

hi! (I think) I'll update today. Need to do some finishing touches. If not then in a day, at max. :)

PS: I wanted to write something more wrt your review but was afraid I might unknowingly give out something so restrained myself :D

sorry for late comments.

I wanted to a picsq on barun shirtless. Could not mk it.

But something I made long time bk on similar context.

I'm posting it here. I loved the writing and the chapter. So this for all of sobti fans.

Shirtless raizada.

[Youtube]https://youtu.be/Pbmj6XO1kso[/youtube]

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: sarita_barun
I love how they find solace in each other despite not knowing it is each other.
Glad Arnav had a no nonsense attitude towards Sheetal at the start.
Poor Khushi is working so hard, she will be devastated when she finds out what Arnav initially came to the company to do.
Damn Arnav is giving Khushi competition with those photos he took... ahem!! ☺️
Yayyy Arnav and Khushi will be spending time with each other outside of the office again! Can't wait for it.

@bold- I agree :D

Arnav put Sheetal in her place for now. Since he doesn't know that his personal and professional life is going to collide (if* he finds out that the stranger is Khushi).

I'll be updating the next part soon.

Thank you so much for sharing your views. Glad you're liking it.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.
Loving it. Such a cute love story brewing here. ❤️

Thanks so much! :)

I wanted it to be lighthearted (till it can) :D

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: Sakhi2013
Nice story, update soon

Please PM me when you update

Hey thanks a lot! :)

I'll be updating the next part soon.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
Awesome...I love the way they celebrated their one month Anniversary 😉...hahaaa...Arnav and his Abs...I love their texting always. You have written beautifully dear. They both are falling for the stranger. This Sheetal is so irritating, she came all the way from NY to find out what's going on between ARSHI. Waiting for next update.

Thanks so much, Suniti! :)

Arnav and his abs have caught a lot of attention :D

Sheetal's trying to see what's brewing b/w ArShi but Arnav knew how to deal with her. For now.

I'm going to put the next part up, soon.