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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
Love, love, love the update...

... and need I say, I love your Khushi so far? She is smart, bright, confident and not given to melting in the proverbial puddle on seeing Arnav :-) Thank goodness!!

Thank you so much!

Glad to read your views on Khushi. (I kinda wanted an equal-professional footing for both ArShi) and happy that it's translating well. Do keep sharing such feedback (it helps me) 😊

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Uzii
Wonderful chapter khusi is indeed a very confident n smart businesswoman she gave arnav tit for tat n he is kind of impressed from her n i think she took arnav's number by mistake.

Thanks so much! 😊

Liked reading your feedback on Khushi's character. I kinda intended her to be that way and your review helps me understand that. So thanks!

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ptuc

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Posted: 6 years ago

#143

Loved the story. Liked khushi's confident character. And also Arnav. He seems nice.

Hoping that Khushi messages/calls Arnav thinking it's Mohit :-)

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FancyDay

@FancyDewy92

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Posted: 6 years ago

#144

Bussines shark ASR is interested in toy company...May he's on 2nd thought..Like suspense kushi may dial ASRs number...Hey.. Waiting for more...Thank you🤡

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: mayabhi
I liked the way u ended it.. Clearly khushi had taken arnavs num. And she is going to text arnav thinking its mohit.. Nice..
Pls update soon. Anxious to know how it goes

Hey thanks so much! 😊

What you've written should be tackled with in the next part (which I'll be uploading soon).

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
wow khushi is a very smart and I really can't fully believe arnav that he wants Mongolia's success...maybe but after getting hold of it completely...so khushi took arnav's number by mistake...I think so

Thanks a ton, Ayushi! 😊

Glad you liked Khushi. As for Arnav, the better the co, does, the more he gets while selling it once he has bought it.

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: coderlady
I can just see this happening. She picks up Arnav's number instead.

We'll have to see 😉

Thanks a ton!

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: mu12
I think kushi going call arnav instead of mohit
I feel so... The numbers my interchange

Next part will deal with ^^ 😉

Thanks so much! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: jyothirockz
Did Khushi accidentally pick Arnav's no assuming it as Mohit's ? That would be interesting.

We'll see if that has happened (in the next part) 😃

Thank you for reading and commenting! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Savera84
How many of you think it is Arnav's phone number Khushi picked?
I know, we are all hoping it is Arnav's number she picked up.
OK, that settled, if she sends a cryptic message like, "sorry we could not go out as you proposed" or something in those lines and Arnav also replies back in the same lines, wouldn't that be great?
Wonderful update.
Cheers...

@1st line- Can I raise my hand too? 😆

But we've yet to see what exactly happened.

Next part will be on this.

Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed it! 😊