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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#261

Oh my God! Arnav has a bad past.. Child abuse i presume. And his parents are ignorant of it. Do all the brothers know? Nice story so far..

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#262

Glad to see Shyam and Anjali having a normal interaction. Shyam would hopefully show his wholesome personality, not just his flirty nature and at the same time fall for Anjali for more than just lust for her.
Nikhil has realized it already, by the way, I loved his and Khushi's conversation... Khushi is too good.
Akash and Payal are cute.
I wonder how Arnav was before his bitter experience..? How is it that the brothers know while not the parents ?

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#263

Now we get a little clue about Arnav's past. Whatever happened scarred him for life.

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: ranogill
Wonderful update .. hope that you unravel Arnav's past soon .. I missed Arshi on this chapter

Other characters support the story of Arnav yet having their own. Arnav's past will be opened by him few updates later. I am laying the foundation that will bring Arnav and Khushi closer. I know the wait is long. Please bear a little longer.

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divan_arshi

@divan_arshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#265

Loved it.. n the mystery continues..something very terrible has happened for sure with arnav

Love khushi..eagerly waiting for next update..

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Aboli Deshmukh

@loquacious_soul

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#266

I read your story in one go and I am speechless. The characters, their interactions all of them have me hooked. I feel bad for Arnav, it seems he really has a troubled past and an ignorant family. Loved Akash and Arnav's bond. Khushi is really a gem and the only person who seems to be able to crack his cold demeanor. I hope she is able to heal Arnav. Eagerly waiting to know what happened with Arnav. Waiting for the next update.

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#267

Thank you all for you kind comments and likes. I appreciate it and am very grateful.

Enjoy Chapter 20 Part 1.

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#268

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#269

I love, love, loved the drama you created with Shyam and Yash's entry and chat with the ladies. Arnav's shock totally comical. But Khushi doesn't have to get worried about getting fired, her skills at work will save her. Moreover, he can't show a reason for firing her. She is safe... may be he will torture her by work overload... can't wait to find out .