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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

It was a relief to find out she wasn't dead.

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amadea

@amadea

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

lovely update

glad khushi is a live

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Ohh Pari initially I thought that khushi is dead

Thank god it wasn't like that

The father daughter are cute

Arshi moments were as usual lovely and crazy

When khushi came back I was very happy that she's not dead

Loved it very much

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Savera84

@Savera84

Viewbie

+ 38

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Nice OS.

Halfway through the story, I knew Khushi has gone away for a little while to punish them.

If she is no more and if they have an 8 year old daughter, Arnav will never mope around and show his vulnerable side to his daughter.

He may cry when he is alone, but not in front of her. He will take care of her. That is just Arnav.

Cheers...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Mind Blowing OS

At first I really thought that Khushi had died and Arnav is thinking all about the moments spend with her then I realized no she is not dead but is away

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Nice Os with unexpected yet sweet twist .

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Beautiful song...
nice wrote with the os...
beautiful...

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aaru.aradhya

@aaru.aradhya

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

i actually thought khushi was dead

lovely os

well written

beautiful song

thanks 4 d pm dear😊

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Labitha

@labi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

You are quite a tease yaar.😆

To such a soothing and surreal mode, you made us panic and then boom...all is well in their paradise.😃

Such an amazing read dear...loved every scene you penned out, the song intensified each and every scene.👏

You are such a beautiful writer who always writes what we ArShians wish!❤️

Thank you so much for this amazingly beautiful OS.🤗

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Pari...

Bach gayi ho tum mere gusse se..

😲

😆

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