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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 7 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: LuvAmalfi
Wonderful update .

Thanks and you dont have any pertinent questions?

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 7 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Hi N
Thanks for the pm
Commented on the blog. Sorry if I go overboard with assumptions.

Teaser is interesting

Can't wait for the update

I want to read the story anyone you come up with.👏

Let me know how to add myself in the select list 😉

Radz

The next chap is already up and you can read the title, right? 😆

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitrigemathema
Thank you for the PM dear. Wonderful chapter it is. Commented on blog.

Thank you for your comment.

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 7 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: Savera84
Nice update as usual.
Glad to know that Lil one is doing well.
What is this cold war between Shashi and Arnav?
Shashi thinks Lavanya ran away because of Arnav and Arnav thinks Shashi does not care about Lavanya.
The way things are going, I feel Aman has a hidden agenda.
A million dollar question. Why was Khushi serving food to Raizada family? Hasn't Arnav once said there is house help to do that kind of chores?
Cheers...

Raji

Did you miss out HP in the last update? And Arnav's jibe was for when it was their personal equation, true to his words, he dint accept anything from her, what ever be the reasons.

That said, Khushi being the member of the family was helping along with Anjali and others. I thought that was obvious?

But thank you for highlighting this, I am a fairly opinionated feminist, and i believe in equality of sexes. Hence, if your query was about the tradition followed in India, then I am not an adherent to it. Not that there is anything wrong with it, especially with people who follow it. But what I meant is that I am not s sucker for biased practices.

If it was only about Arhi's equation, than I clarified above. 😊

Also, not to hurt anyone, but the uneducated FL with whose a goody two shoes, is not my pick, no matter how much I love a show or a character.

Hope that helps.

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 7 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: MDTharun
Thanks for the pm N

Your welcome, M

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

To put it more aptly, what is marriage with no love.
And love here refers to making love. 😳

Making love, or making anything with love, everything will do N with your superb writing.

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dreamer-89

N you sure did put a mahaepisde with lots of dhamaka in this chapter 😃

Aman bhaiya scowling even though favourite dish cooked, what's his problem 😆 to know more on the fishy BIL will wait!!

Do you think there is something between Aman and La? But nah, its cliche and N doesnt do cliche. 😛

What say, N?

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Doc-ere

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Posted: 7 years ago

#518

Comment on blog...

Thanks for PM dear .

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#519

Before I elaborate on the update, let me tell you why I chose this song for the update. And btw, thank you for sharing my preference on the blog 🤗

Shikayatein, Mitane ko hai

Subah bedaag hai...

How apt are the lyrics for Arhi's state of mind. They both come with baggages and they both are vulnerable, in their own way. Yet, they are willing to put the past behind and carve a new life, on a new and clean slate. Hence, the reference of an untainted dawn (bedaag subah)

Jeet tu, haar mein

Haar mein, Jeet tu..

No one will know it better than you that these two souls are united as one, even before they have realised it. And, when two people are one, it doesnt matter who loses or wins the game of love.

You have outdone yourself with this update. I saw a determined Khushi, a Khushi whose in need of her husband and then I saw a Khushi whose stubborn but loving in her own way.

And Arnav, oh man, what do I say about him. Your portrayal makes me fall in love with him. He is strong and crude, yet, he is sensitive and caring, giving and accepting. What a man, N. What a description to him. "I have been taught how to respect a woman's honour', swoons 🥳

The rest of the characters are balancing the equation of Arhi, Shashi, Garima and Aman with the challenges and Dadi and Anjali with their comfort

Fabulous one, N 👏

PS waiting for some toe curling romance in chap 9 😛