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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Very interesting concept. Loving the story so far. Riazadas were tricked by Shyam. Hope Anjali will regret very much.Arnav should regret and repent for not standing by her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Loved it
But can you update it a bit longer?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
I hope you will like this update:

Chapter 4:

"Wow Akira, this sketch is will beautiful, Khushi did a pretty job", Veer said impressed.

"She may even help us in our company", Akira said.

Khushi came barging in the study room.

"Akira, why did you send the sketches to Dad", Khushi whispered to Akira.

"Khushi, can you please join our company? Your design is very incredible, you will greatly help us in the company", Veer said standing up.

"Dad, I am not experience in office work, so how will i cope with it?", Khushi replied to Veer.

"Akira and Karan will be tutoring you in the office work, you work is only to design dear", Veer said.

"Khushi, this is a great opportunity for you to build your dreams..for you to work and be yourself independently", Akira said to Khushi.

Khushi thought for a few seconds,

"You are right di, I want to build up my dreams and be myself..but there is a problem", Khushi said.

"What is it?", Veer asked..

"Well, because your company is very very professional, I don't have this office wear attire so what will i do?", Khushi asked.

"Well, it is time for Shopping!", Akira said happily.


@ The Raizaida Mansion


The door bell rang and HP, ran to look at who it was, it was Payal and Akash who has come back from their honeymoon.

"Welcome Payal and Akash", HP said happily..

"Granny, Anjali, Manorama...come fast Payal and Akash are back", HP shouted from the living room.

Soon, they all were downstairs,

"Akash,you are back, why didn't you inform us you were coming back?", Anjali asked.

"Well, we wanted to give you all a surprise", Payal said lovingly.

"Come and sit down", Granny said..

"Anjali di, where is Khushi, i cannot see her anywhere?", Payal said..

They all stiffened when they heard Khushi's name,

"Ermm,Khushi..Khushi has gone to see her friend for some days", Anjali said stammering.

"Ok", Payal said, still unsure.

"You two should go and freshen up and come down for lunch", Manorama said.

When Payal and Akash reached their room,

"Akash, don't you find some fishy with their behavior", Payal said.

"Yeah, I sense something is fishy too, but we will find out soon", Akash replied.
With that words, he went into the bathroom to bath.


@ the Shopping Mall:

Khushi and Akira were selecting some office attire as Khushi will go the company soon.
Khushi remembers how Arnav sent her to the mall to do some shopping with his naughty behavior. Some tears formed in her eyes as she remembered those memories. Akira shook her out of her thoughts..

"Khushi? What is wrong? What happened, don't you like the attire?", Akira said worriedly.

"No di, I just remembered some memories", she said wiping her tears,"it is ok no di, all that is in the past", she continued.

They chose some collections, paid for the bill and went home.


Raizada Mansion:

Arnav reached home from the office a bit late, he stroded to the hall and met the family chatting happily.

"Akash, you have arrived? But you are supposed to come tomorrow what happened?", Arnav asked worriedly.

"Well, we just wanted to surprise you", Payal said with a charming smile.

After sometime,

"Arnav, where is Khushi?", Payal asked self-consciously.

"She has left", Arnav replied and ran back to his room.

How was it? Hoped you loved it😊. Please comment and like



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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Hello guys thanks for the support I really appreciate it...

Chapter 5:


RAIZADA MANSION:

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What? She left", Payal said cryingly.

Akash went to Arnav's room to call him downstairs.

"Arnav, you are Khushi's wife, so you know her whereabouts right? Where is she?", Payal asked.

"Payal, I threw out of the house, any problem😡", Arnav said

"Bhai, can you tell me what happen exactly?", Akash asked.

"She cheated on us, she had an affair with my Shyam ji ", Anjali said with disgust.

"Ohh,I should have known, that this was what the drama was all about", Payal said.

"What do you mean?", Granny replied.

"HHBB, Look, this Gupta sisters, so much attitude", Manorama said.

"Please, if you don't know the truth, then stop judging!",Payal said angrily.

She told them the whole truth [hope you know what happened, the truth about Shyam].

She went to her room to bring a CD and she played it,

It showed how Shyam confessed everything without knowing..

They were filled with guilt
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They were shattered..

"Akash, this is why I insisted we should come here early so that I could expose Shyam but it seems I came too late😭", Payal said and broke down.

"No, my Shyam can't cheat me!", Anjali said crying.

"Where is Shyam?", Arnav asked angrily.

"Well, he must have run away. Because he found out that I was about to expose him", Payal said wiping the tears in her eyes.

"Payal, please forgive us, we were blinded by his act", Granny said pleadingly.

"Payal, am so sorry", Anjali said crying.

Payal walked to her room...where she reached the stairs, she turned said,

"I will not Forgive anybody, and I will not give any of you a chance because you didn't give Khushi a say. And remember i will not forgive any body unless Khushi forgives all of you", Payal said and rushed to her room..


KHURANA MANSION:

Khushi was in her room looking at her photo crying..

Hers and Arnav's wedding photo..

"Arnav, why did you fail to trust me", Khushi said through her tears..

"I loved you so much", Khushi said again😭.

"But you fail to recognize the truth in my eyes, but for this Arnav, i will never forgive you", Khushi said wiping her tears.

Khushi's thoughts: Khushi, Arnav now doesn't care about you. He failed to recognize the truth in your eyes. Forget him. You have a long life ahead to concentrate to.

Hello sorry for short updates, please comment and like😃.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Love the update. Payal prove Khushi innocent and now they are asking forgiveness from Payal when they should be looking for Khushi to apologize to her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awesome.. do continue writing. Now the truth is out. Hoping to read more. Please do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Please can you put in a index so it is easier to find the page each chapter is on?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
It's a wonderful nice concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Just read all parts in one go
It's awesome story
Loved it
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
came across the story just today and read all parts, lets see what will Arnav and Anjali do to get Khushi forgive them ? Even if she forgives them, should she get back with Arnav ?

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