BOUND By BLACKMAIL- Chapter 25 posted at page 116 on 5/30/17

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bakwas_serial

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

In the last two updates... their constant verbal sparring... one completely believes these two hate each other. That is no mean task.. written very well. This must be hard to write or was it fun to write :)

Wonder how/when will their misunderstanding end?

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shubhi05

@shubhi05

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

thanks fr the pm. finally the marriage is done. nw with both under same roof it will get more interesting

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: binduk
Beautifully written.. but it's so painful to see them like this. When will the misunderstanding get clear???

Don't expect misunderstandings to clear so suddenly dear... I always take time to build the plot.😳

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kulfi89

@kulfi89

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Hi dear,
Really loved the part as always u had nailed it... Thank you for the update.. Would love to give a long feedback.. But on a very busy schedule... Will comment to my hearts content in the next update...

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Phew

Finally done reading the last two chapters

Khushi is facing such an emotional roller coaster ride

The title now fits the story perfectly

" BOUND BY BLACKMAIL "

Eagerly waiting to know how the story unfolds in the future

I'm scared of Lavanya's reaction though

Hope she doesn't hurt Khushi

Please do continue soon

Thanks

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Brishti

@brishti84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#416

Is it awful that the person who stood out the most for me here is Lavanya. This woman is surely insane and I'm weirdly excited to see what she's capable of. The scene from Arnav's dungeon like cave comes to mind and I'm oddly intrigued as to what evil plans she may succeed in achieving to ruin the other woman.

The sleeping arrangement banter between Arnav and Khushi was kinda cute if you disregard everything that's happened. I like this nok jhok and it'll be more enjoyable once this darn misunderstanding is over.

I wonder how they are going to keep up their pretense around the Roberts'. They can't just ignore each other as they are expecting to do without them noticing and figuring out that something is majorly wrong. Maybe they haven't thought about this yet. I'm glad that Mrs. Roberts remembers that Khushi lost her virginity here with Arnav. As much as I despise the importance/stigma about a girl's intact virginity, here it actually might help Khushi tremendously if Arnav gets to know the truth, one amongst many he's yet to discover.

My bet is on Rachel or Mrs. Roberts to be the first to figure out that not everything's all peachy between the so-in-love newlyweds.

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Thank you for the update...

First of all, I am really happy that Arnav kissed her lightly when she was sleeping...

Secondly, I hope over the course of time Arnav atleast comes to know from the servant couple that Khushi was only his and no one else'

Thirdly, I somewhere want Lavanya to create some misunderstandings, little jealousy and lots of angered passion between Arshi

Fourthly, I want Rachael to knock some sense in Arnav..and I want her to know the truth of their marriage ASAP..

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PaRuL(PaRi)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#418

Wonderful update with the aptly described emotions.loved it.waiting for the next part.

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: sairam03
I think beauty of this story is the way you narrate each and every detail of inner turmoil, feelings of each character in this story very well and in such a way we feel like we are observing them in real. Thanks dear! I am also happy the way it is shaping up and people can visualize it.

Even after completion of reading your story's update, we think constantly about it's characters, their dialogues and their actions.

Arnav and Khushi needs to spend long time together before they can resolve trust issues and misunderstandings. We need full update on their day to day activities for all the 9 months. It's really nice to see Arnav's protective nature. Hope Khushi can see love behind his possessiveness. They have plenty of time to bond now...and yes you would get lot of day to day activities updates in coming weeks... She would eventually get his possessive nature and the meaning behind it.

And the last lines in the update about which emotion would dominate ...it is always love for them.

Honestly, very sorry for this late comment.

No prob dear...Look forward for each comment. Thanks!

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: A...
As usual Excellent update dear... after a long time this update felt like a breather... Arshi's fights and Arnav's overbearing attitude was really stressful and getting on my nerves. I hope things will get better in future updates. I really want to see Arnav repenting for his deeds and pre concieved notions tht made khushi's life hell. Hi dear! Yes, Arnav's over bearing nature can be daunting...but his each action talks about his deep feelings for her.,..there would come a time when he would repent all his doings...but that time is not right now...
I always believed tht you are one of the best writers on IF and with every piece of writing ... yu r proving yur worth again n again... keep writing ... god bless yu:) Awww thank you...that is the sweetest thing to hear...🤗
Ps: plz update regularly and share your blog link

Recovering from bad bout of flu...but yes would get back to updating the next part soon.

Thanks!