Arshi SS: Another peg Mr. Orwell? Part 2 updated

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Another peg, Mr. Orwell?

Ma'am, you forgot your purse' the shopkeeper shouted, to a girl leaving the shop. The girl turned and slapped her forehead lightly, berating herself for being careless. Thank you so much, sir' she beamed at the shopkeeper. It struck me, her smile. Her entire face seemed to have lit up when she smiled. Genuine smile, a smile one can bestow upon others only out of unadulterated happiness and good will' I mused. Wonder how long that will last, the light inside her. The world will eventually take it away' I muse again, albeit without the serenity that enveloped me a moment ago.

Those who know me say cynicism should have been my middle name and rightly so, but I couldn't care less about what people say. People talk, and they talk as their own situation suits them to talk. My own aunt is very generous in dishing out praises to anyone when she is content with her life, and she could squeeze the life out of you with her tongue when she is upset about her neighbour's daughter hitting on her saintly son. People are slaves to their situations and their prejudices. I don't blame them, really, nor do I pity them. On the contrary I understand to a certain extent why they do, what they do. And I notice things; I see the worry lines and empty faces of people I have lived 25 years of my life with and over time the glow in their faces become just memories of a facade painstakingly built. And you see the world enough to see it for what it is -a facade. That is why I like books better than people; words do not hide behind the mask that glows with happiness. Words are crude, detached and hence trustworthy. People are like the flitting glimpse of understanding when you think you could read between the lines. I look at the book I am holding, as my thoughts drift towards books yet again. The Explorer', the hard bound cover says, in pleasant cursive fonts. W. Somerset Maugham, the writer, my cynicism is comfortable with his story. Maybe because he can make smiles out of hopelessness and sell it as the part and parcel of life. It's funny though how we buy it. Desperate bunch of people holding onto dear life.

My thoughts takes an abrupt halt as the world flips before my eyes and I find myself flat on my stomach hands flailing about in reflex to hold onto something, anything. Holding onto dear life indeed', cynicism kicks in even in most desperate of situations as it seems. I see people running, I hear them screaming. My head aches, what the hell is happening? I try asking people as I gather my bearings and push myself up on my feet. No one answers, everyone running with distorted image of fear painted on their faces. They are panicking. Something terrible has happened. But what? I try to gauge the reason behind sudden flurry of panic. I do not remember hearing a deafening boom'; it can't be a bomb blast then. It is a relatively big city if not metropolitan. We have faced bomb blasts before, but there is no trace of smoke or fire. The city is not bombed, as far as I remember there was no warning of the country being in war either, though it could be at any moment, given the look of things in present scenario- a government on the verge of turning fascist and foreign affairs department going down heel. Before I could ponder more about the situation, someone drags me by my hand, screaming "Run, run. They are coming" to my face.

I would have scratched my head and looked stupid had the person dragging me was not holding my hand. "Wait, why are you running? Where are you taking me? And who the hell is coming?"

The person seems to be a girl with long hair in a green flowing skirt and white top. She doesn't answer and continues running, taking me along. So I patiently repeat my question. I am not used to people pulling me about, I maintain my distance. Even in a crowded country like mine, where you can't buy squat in the market place without getting squeezed between sweaty bodies, I try hard to protect my personal space when others just accept the violation of the same on daily basis. My irritation is mounting as the minutes passed. The confusion in my head and annoyance at being dragged by a faceless girl adding to my discomfort. I want to snatch my hand away, but before I could act on my wish, the girl turns her head, looks at me with reproach as if reading my thoughts. It is the same girl with the smile that looked too real for this world, I note with surprise. She seems to have mistaken my surprise for confusion. "They are coming, the thought police" she answers laced with indifference, very unlike the strong grip of her fingers on my wrist. I wanted to scratch my head again, "Huh? The thought police? Big brother's army from 1984?" I ask her what my own brain asked me, without a second thought.

She looked puzzled. She hasn't read the book. "1984, the novel. George Orwell wrote it" I answer to her confusion, cringing at my stupidity. Of course the thought police from 1984 can't come to India. They aren't real.'

"I don't know what you are talking about, but yes, big brother's army. And what is a novel?" Her question mortifies me. I do not answer her, simply because I didn't have any. I feel a bit deranged. Why would thought police, the imaginary police department of imaginary Oceania come here? The real world. And who on earth doesn't know what is a novel? Wait!! Am I dreaming? Or has reading too many books finally taken my head?' I pinched myself to see if I feel the pain.

f**k' I swore, it did hurt.

"what?" the girl bit out

"Nothing. Where are we going?" I decided to keep the conversation normal without mixing up fiction with reality, for the sake of my sanity.

"We are getting away from them. You know very well what they will do if they catch you." There it was again. The confusion, the craziness.

Reality is an illusion, indeed.

"Einstein, where are you?" I call out to the genius who quoted the sentence in sheer desperation.

"Don't you know? They banished him for propagating blasphemy in the name of knowledge." The girl answers sincerely. As sincerely as a rhetorical question can be answered with a preposterous answer.

I gape at her. "Are you talking about Einstein? The genius scientist? Who proposed the theory of relativity? The father of quantum physics?" I ask, my mind rattled.

"Yes, I am talking about Einstein, the man who said that free fall is a falling. And it is because that's how things move when external pressure is not exerted on them. That free fall is an inertial motion. But what is quantum physics? And theory of relativity? You know you use strange words not unlike yourself. But you know what I think, I think even us, body and mind, we have inertia too. A great amount at that. But why am I even telling you this? They will evaporate me if they heard what I said. Anyone who dares to go against them or associate themselves with a state convicts are bound to get evaporated." She answered. Her running has slowed down to fast pace walking.

I know what evaporating someone means. Mr. Orwell was only too generous in its explanation. If the state mechanism evaporates you, you will vanish from the face of this earth, along with any record of your existence. It will be as if you never existed.

I always wondered what if I was evaporated, no trace of me ever being in this world. My life, the days I spent living. My family, friends and their memories of me, everything will reduce to nothing. But that is just not possible. Our state has not developed such sophisticated mechanism for eliminating dissent. And the hundred and one human rights organisations that exist in this country would make it very difficult for state to develop such mechanism. So what does she mean by evaporation? And what was that about Einstein? She must be a lunatic with no sense of the reality I am living in, escaped from mental asylum. That is the only explanation. Or is it?

I don't know if it is good enough for the Arshi lovers. Please let me know if I should continue. And silent readers please hit the like button, just so I know you are reading the story, that I am not posting it here in vain.

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its interesting...i like science fiction. Just hope they end up together and they ARE Arnav and Khushi. :)
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Chapter 2

Whatever the explanation might be, I Nongrum Kharsyiemlieh for once, against my better judgement, decided to indulge in this madness. All my life I searched for something, something I can't put a name on, something that is not mundane, ordinary. A letter to Hogwarts perhaps? My loyalty to logic never let me wait for a letter to Hogwarts as a child even when I waited for each book in Harry Potter series with relentless devotion. Let alone fiction, even the vibrant stories and legends of my community, the khasis, and my ancestors could never convince me of their material existence as it would a normal child. The legends intrigued me, sent me to a wonderland of my own and fuelled my love for fiction but they never occurred to me as reality of another time, another age. So the madness I had been encountering since a few minutes, or has it been hours? Seemed refreshing. Well, in my defence, madness is not ordinary, it could come close to that something that I always seek, that draws me towards it. In fact madness is the place where you can be what you want to be, exactly what you want to be. Because there are no rules to madness.

"So, why are the thought police chasing me? I don't remember breaking any rules, or did I?" I might as well let myself go with the wind.

"No, you haven't." Disappointment made its presence felt in that exclamation, only ordinary goes by rules.

"But that is only because you have no rules that you live by"

"Huh?"

"You come from a land we know nothing about. At least not yet. Life here in Sindh must be very different from the life of Burmans."

"Wait! Burmans?"

"Yes, Isn't that what you are? A Burman?"

Last time I checked I was in Shillong, the capital of Meghalaya in the north eastern part of India, shivering under the layers I had worn in the Christmas chill. Am I in the future? Did Burma occupy Northeast? But that seems unlikely given the friendly relations India shares with Myanmar. Yes, Myanmar, that's what they call themselves now, isn't it? So if I am in future then it should be Myanmar, not Burma. Damn!! Am I stuck in some disrupted space time continuum? Where the hell am I? The future? The past? Or just in company of a lunatic? The latter option seems the likeliest and hence I decided to test my theory by grabbing hold of a passerby's soldier, which I had no difficulty doing since the commotion has cleared and people are not running anymore.

"Excuse me sir, I am a little lost. Can you help me out?" But the stranger with a poker face doesn't reply, shrugs off my hand and continues walking ahead, no trace of anything in his expression which is a little odd.

"What the hell do you think you are doing?" I am surprised at the fury lacing her voice.

"I am just.." but before I could complete

"Do you want them to find us? Find you? Agreed you should already consider yourself dead but why are you hell bent on quickening the process? You knew you were dead the moment you dared to cross the border, ASR."

I found my own temper rising. Here I am trying to make sense of what in the name of holy mother of God is happening around me and the nerve of this lunatic to drag me to her make believe world and to drive me insane. I have had enough. I lost my cool before me she pulls me to the bushes bordering the sidewalk.

"You want to know what I am doing? I am trying to get away from you, you freak. Not that you would care, but you are in serious need of help, lady. Just leave me alone."

"What on earth are you talking about?" her voice is a furious whisper.

"What am I talking about? Well then, listen. Einstein is dead. Has been for decades. Do you hear? Thought police is not real. It is fiction, created to envision the world that can go horribly wrong at any point of time if its delicate balance is tipped. Dystopia is what they call it. This is India, not Sindh. I am an Indian, hailing to the state of Meghalaya, I am not Burmese. I belong to the largest freaking democracy in the world where people die of hunger. And you, you sweetheart are a lunatic who took a chance and escaped from the mental asylum some pitying hypocrite put you in." I stop, gasping for breath.

Her eyes, expressive and luminous, hold confusion, incredulity and pity!!

"If you are trying to escape with a fake identity or with your outrageous claims to make white the new black, then you are not in luck. If you think they are so stupid to get frazzled by your identity theft, then you are the retarded one among the two of us. I have no interest in your bullshit, ASR. You are just a job, another useless life to protect until you inevitably get killed. Now, if you want to delay the inevitable and stretch your doomed life as far as you can, you will follow me."

"You have got the wrong person, inside that little head of yours. I am not ASR, the figment of your imagination. I am Nongrum Kharsyiemlieh." Her concerns doesn't hold any importance. Even if my life is in danger, its only inside her head which now I am sure of.

"Nagrup what?"

"Nongrum Kharsyiemlieh. NK in short. Go find your ASR in someone else. Goodbye"

I turn to leave, But before I could jolts of pain shooting from my spine paralyses me, rendering me unable to move my body. The threats to my life, I paid no heed to minutes ago, seems very real. I fall backwards, anticipating the hard, cold bite of the concrete below. But a hand, its palm clutching the back of my neck breaks my fall and a voice, a silky whisper tickles my ear " Khushi Kanak Gohaain, KKG in short. And now that you didn't leave me any choice, let's go find you a place to rest, ASR."

That was the last thing I heard before waking up inside a tent, three days later as KKG would later inform me.

I have seen this place before' was my first thought as I came out of the make shift tent. It was a small clearing in the woods. Bushy shrubs and sparsely growing tall trees. A fallen tree has hidden the entrance to the clearing, making existence of the clearing unknown unless prodded to the outsiders. Amidst the light cooing of cuckoo, and the warm yellow sunlight something familiar caught my eyes. Something that planted seeds of madness, that is yet to began. Bluebells, the wild flower Winston has picked for Julia in 1984. The outside of the clearing is carpeted with bluebells; I stagger back several steps as realisation hit me. I know where I have seen this place. In my mind, yes, I have seen this place in my mind as I put together bits and pieces of the picture while reading its description on the yellowed pages of a beloved book. 1984.

What the!!'

Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago
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This is freaking awesome! Your imagination has bowled me out! I haven't read the novel yet. Now that you have got me intrigued to this mind-boggling story of your I must read it! Off to order it online. Keep writing. Could you please pm me whenever you update.
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Originally posted by: smriti25

This is freaking awesome! Your imagination has bowled me out! I haven't read the novel yet. Now that you have got me intrigued to this mind-boggling story of your I must read it! Off to order it online. Keep writing. Could you please pm me whenever you update.


First of all, how did you find this story? I thought it was buried deep inside IF. And thank you so much. And I can't describe how happy I am, for you have decided to read the book. George Orwell was a genius. Hope you would love it as much as I did. And sure, I will ping you when I update.

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