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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anaswara93

Congrats for the new thread⭐️ Thanks dear!
Intense Update😃 Sure it was😆
Seems like Khushi is pregnant😕 Hmmm, yup you diagnosed her fine...😃
Hope this time he won't misunderstand her😲 Ummm! That is in his nature...but ...then...
Loved it😊 Thanks!😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: WanieA

superb update...loved how u segregate all emotion individually..new character...hnmmm good or bad..from the way how the story going...its dosent look any good for khushi.Thanks dear...yes it is full of strong emotions and Khushi is going to fare better than what we think...Just because this idiot doesn't realize his love for her doesn't mean he would ever harm her in any manner...when it would come to him , no matter what he thinks of her, he would treat her like she is made of glass. 😳.hope the detective shed some lights for khushi when he reports to arnav..Nah it was just for few hours, he wanted to know where to find Khushi and that's all...He had not hired the detective for anything else. .why i have feeling she is pregnant..if she is, how arnav going to take it look at it or even react to it...damnnn...cho scary. That would be one of the most difficult part for me to write...it is going to be dhamaakedar. 😆..well if he finds out...hmm..will the "doc" propose to her? Ummm maybe😉 omg lavanya character is damn evil...also again. why do i have a feel its that "dungeon" gona play a major role in her evil plan...at last but least mami realize what a gem her niece is but ..buttt...after this...hmm..im actually going dhal dhak dhak...as how u will pen down the next chapter...I am going through the plan for the next chapter...Want to make it fun for sure😆...before it gets intense again.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: A...

Thank yu for updating after a long gap but i must say it was totally worth it. 🤗 Exceptional writing and beautiful portrayal of every single emotion. Thank you so much A, Each comment means a lot to me and I look forward to read them to see how reader received it😃

Your depiction of khushi's heartbreak and devastation is heart wrenching.But I really applaud yur stance of making khushi considering her respect utmost priority. I always think, if I won't respect myself, nobody else would either and why should they? That's why people with low self esteem lack...My Khushi here is an epitome of beauty, kindness and grace. She overcomes any amount of hurdles and grief in life with positive attitude...yet she is also vulnerable...she is going to shatter pretty soon...she is not without flaws also...and her emotional breakdown would be devastating for both her and Arnav.
I loved how this story is shaping up and but i really do'nt wish to see manipulative arnav and compromising khushi sccumbing to his demands b'coz of financial issues. See somebody has to sccumb to this madness and the reasons would be different though and the outcomes would be way different also.😆
Thank yu once again for such sn intense and brilliant story.Plz update quickly.

I would most certainly try to do that.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago


Ritu,

A superb and stellar chapter. You wrote those emotions so well. Khushi's devastation, her sadness, Arnav's terrible state of mind, the resulting drama, all so well documented. These two are such losers now seriously. They will neither admit their feelings for each other nor will they give other people a chance...Lavanya is going to be sadly let down, is she not! And will Arnav convince Khushi to give them a chance again? Why lord, will she not just tell him the whole truth? Of course, the man is an idiot and may immediately tell her she is trying to bait someone else...and Dr Abhinav is adding one more wheel to this already complex love story. Too gripped by this one, Ritu. Cannot wait to see where you take us with it.

How is it that Arnav does not realize Khushi's innocence? He is such a worldly wise soul and a millionaire businessman. How come he lacks the ability to understand people to this extent?

Atleast the one good thing to come of all this seems to be that Mamiji is kinder to Khushi now. But she and Mamaji are both unwell. I pray we do not have to deal with Khushi falling terminally ill or something before that idiotic Mr Raizada realizes his love and her innocence. Ye gods, this is such a convoluted situation to be in!

Trust you are feeling better now. Take care of your health. Waiting to see you with another update soon.

Hugs,

Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Worth the wait. Really amazing write up.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshisarunfan

Our long wait was worth it 😊 This is not only the longest chapter but the best chapter by far 👏 ⭐️ ❤️

Oh Thank you dear. that means a lot and encourages me to write more.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: brishti84

The first thought I had reading this chapter was that their reunion happened much sooner than I expected. Like I said previously I thought the leap you decided to take would be greater as a month isn't really that much time at all to get over such intense betrayal. I'm not saying that either Khushi or Arnav are over it. Of course they are not as was clearly visible in this chapter. But I thought a month at most would lead to them were end of week 1 or at the most week 2 did. I was really thinking maybe a few months or even a year later would they meet again. At a time where Khushi was in a better position to stand up to this man. Brishti, thanks dear, well you are right, I could have taken this story in that direction too. and who knows the next story, I would twist one and rewrite this one.😆...As you know there are always 150 ways 150 readers can take the story...but it is me who get to tell this one heheheh...so yes, this one is planned by the way how slowly love and respect would creep up in this bitter tale. Arnav has to reach the level of that pure love where nothing would matter but her happiness and the day he would realize that her happiness matters more than anything, he would be redeemed. So yes they could have met after years also...but the story that I have planned needed them to meet now and go from here🤗❤️...I hope I would still keep it interesting for you.😳

I really liked their interaction. It wasn't too explosive probably because they were in public but that made it more realistic. Plus it was such a big shock for Khushi to see him, especially after assuming he's moved on with Lavanya. I loved how she held her own and gave Arnav all the right answers to questions that aren't his business to begin with. As I mentioned, it took me hours to pen down that part...to write something retrained pent up anger...and I think Khushi nailed it with her words...telling him how that night didn't matter to her. atta girl!😆

Urg of course Arnav has to pick that moment to confront her after seeing her with another man. I do really try to sympathize with him but jeez does he make it difficult 😆 If it was just a misunderstanding I'd be less pissed at him. But he took the said misunderstanding aka the phone call to such an extreme that I want him to hot in hell! Dr.Rathore would play a big role...not in lengthwise but keeping Arnav on his toes for little while...He is in hell for sure...

I'm very curious as to what he has planned for the next meet. I'm assuming he'll be at Khushi's work and take things from there. I just hope he doesn't dig himself a bigger grave. Oh he is going to have a good time in that office...going circles around Khushi...Office romance, he never indulge in well he break his rule again...😆

I think I might put a teaser up tonight for that...😳

Dr. Rathore is intriguing. I'm not sure if he's all that you've presented so far or if there is more. After their initial talk in his office I thought there was more to him when you mention that he left his well off family behind to pursue medicine... Dr. Rathore is from a rich family for sure...well honestly, when I wrote this story for first time years ago, I didn't explore his character much...and now also I don't think, i would write too much about him,,,because there is so much to be written about Arnav and Khushi and their messed up life.

Ha Lavanya must be super pissed when she finds out that Arnav took off just when she starts working for him 🤣 I don't totally dispose her so far. She is just out to get what she wants but she does have those weird moments where I'm like W*F...like the whole dungeon part 😳 She's is a little creepy isn't she? She sure has a psychopathic tendencies and I wanted to explore that side of human nature.

As for Shyam, I hope he's done in this story. He has served his purpose. He served his purpose...I think he comes back again later...

I must also mention the part with Ira being heartbroken at Cinderella's changed fate. She's too cute and that was very touching. If she only knew that the prince indeed was back to get the princess back Oh I am so happy that part came out nice, ira is a sweetie and such a positive force in Khushi's life.

Amazing chapter as always. Oh and congrats on the new thread! Hope you feel better soon.Thank you sweetie🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Glad to see Khushi all strong but pl don't get her pregnant and then having to accept arnav proposition to be with him.

Hey dear, don't worry, even if Khushi is pregnant, she would never accept Arnav's proposition without fight.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rosalineak

Amazing update...Thanks dear!

Loving the way ,khushi is turning strong...Oh yehhh!😃
But one request,no pregnancy at this stage...Ummm! Hmmm! OOOPPPSSS!😳
Tanu is such a delusional character...Tanu improves now😆
La and her love for freaky places ...La is freaky for sure🤢
Arnav and his highly questionable brain where he can't distinguish a bitchy La and innocent Khushi,hope his brain works properly soon...Haha...Arnav at his manipulative best soon.
Thanks for such a long update but like a meanie,wanna know when will be the next update.Haha! Well hopefully, I would get to sit soon and jot down something. 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazybugs

ha. after long you posted the update which we were waiting for. fabulous as always. but you posted it on week days so i read it in three goes as i had no time.😕😕 Sorry dear...I do want to make a schedule...but these days, I had been running so behind in posting the parts regularly that the minute it is ready, I post it.😆 i thought throughout it would be pain. but we got showers at the end. cant wait for next update. now that the story picked up pace, we want quick updates. 😉😉😉. Story moves now alright. and I would try to keep it regular for sure. like you said if one had crush, even if the other persons behaviour is despicable, still some part of the heart still hold candle for him. like we can never hate any person completely. Oh absolultly she dooesn't hate him, she just wants to hate him and he would try to break her so many times in coming days...why i have this creepy feeling that lavanya will use dungeons for her benefit. so khushi is going to meet her boss next day. La can rest for now...by the time Arnav comes back to her, he would be a different person and for Khushi...she sure meets her boss next day while he charms everybody.

well it is really awsome chapter worth waiting. really happy to have the story going. pl. dont make us wait. Thanks dear!

good luck👏


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