Originally posted by: brishti84
The first thought I had reading this chapter was that their reunion happened much sooner than I expected. Like I said previously I thought the leap you decided to take would be greater as a month isn't really that much time at all to get over such intense betrayal. I'm not saying that either Khushi or Arnav are over it. Of course they are not as was clearly visible in this chapter. But I thought a month at most would lead to them were end of week 1 or at the most week 2 did. I was really thinking maybe a few months or even a year later would they meet again. At a time where Khushi was in a better position to stand up to this man. Brishti, thanks dear, well you are right, I could have taken this story in that direction too. and who knows the next story, I would twist one and rewrite this one.😆...As you know there are always 150 ways 150 readers can take the story...but it is me who get to tell this one heheheh...so yes, this one is planned by the way how slowly love and respect would creep up in this bitter tale. Arnav has to reach the level of that pure love where nothing would matter but her happiness and the day he would realize that her happiness matters more than anything, he would be redeemed. So yes they could have met after years also...but the story that I have planned needed them to meet now and go from here🤗❤️...I hope I would still keep it interesting for you.😳
I really liked their interaction. It wasn't too explosive probably because they were in public but that made it more realistic. Plus it was such a big shock for Khushi to see him, especially after assuming he's moved on with Lavanya. I loved how she held her own and gave Arnav all the right answers to questions that aren't his business to begin with. As I mentioned, it took me hours to pen down that part...to write something retrained pent up anger...and I think Khushi nailed it with her words...telling him how that night didn't matter to her. atta girl!😆
Urg of course Arnav has to pick that moment to confront her after seeing her with another man. I do really try to sympathize with him but jeez does he make it difficult 😆 If it was just a misunderstanding I'd be less pissed at him. But he took the said misunderstanding aka the phone call to such an extreme that I want him to hot in hell! Dr.Rathore would play a big role...not in lengthwise but keeping Arnav on his toes for little while...He is in hell for sure...
I'm very curious as to what he has planned for the next meet. I'm assuming he'll be at Khushi's work and take things from there. I just hope he doesn't dig himself a bigger grave. Oh he is going to have a good time in that office...going circles around Khushi...Office romance, he never indulge in well he break his rule again...😆
I think I might put a teaser up tonight for that...😳
Dr. Rathore is intriguing. I'm not sure if he's all that you've presented so far or if there is more. After their initial talk in his office I thought there was more to him when you mention that he left his well off family behind to pursue medicine... Dr. Rathore is from a rich family for sure...well honestly, when I wrote this story for first time years ago, I didn't explore his character much...and now also I don't think, i would write too much about him,,,because there is so much to be written about Arnav and Khushi and their messed up life.
Ha Lavanya must be super pissed when she finds out that Arnav took off just when she starts working for him 🤣 I don't totally dispose her so far. She is just out to get what she wants but she does have those weird moments where I'm like W*F...like the whole dungeon part 😳 She's is a little creepy isn't she? She sure has a psychopathic tendencies and I wanted to explore that side of human nature.
As for Shyam, I hope he's done in this story. He has served his purpose. He served his purpose...I think he comes back again later...
I must also mention the part with Ira being heartbroken at Cinderella's changed fate. She's too cute and that was very touching. If she only knew that the prince indeed was back to get the princess back Oh I am so happy that part came out nice, ira is a sweetie and such a positive force in Khushi's life.
Amazing chapter as always. Oh and congrats on the new thread! Hope you feel better soon.Thank you sweetie🤗
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