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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#501

Thanks for pm.😃

I loved the update... Thanks for revealing some facts.👏

This is one hell of intriguing journey... For the first time, I am going through a story based on witch craft or wizards... But to be true, I am loving it & twists & turns that you bring in & have in store for us...⭐️

Happy to know that Arnav is there for her... So if Khushi will be in danger, he will save her...

Please dear update quickly...

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Nilima2016

@Nilima2016

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#502

Thanks for pm 😊

Lovely update...really love your stories and your writing which is so different.👏

Love the way you keep the mystery active till the end..

You are the ultimate⭐️ in writing unusual stories which grab your attention till the end.

Way to go gal!!!👏👏

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#503

y do is feel Mason is some what related to all this

so khushi knows her families past that will be a part of her present

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#504

Awe-struck! Dumbstruck! Thunderstruck! You cant imagine the situation I'm in right now. Your way of writing astounded me. Incredible! You made me imagine so many things. At one point of time (okay! A real confession here), i even thought arnav was a locust. He he :D
so the necklace is back to its rightful owner yo! I knew it'd be with him. So Judith is only a friend
*lets out a huge sigh of relief*
I love Judith now he he:D.
Poor lady was so cursed by me.
Hmm that aloysius is back in town. He reminds me of YOU-KNOW-WHO in harry potter.Looks like a major bloodshed gonna happen soon.
Meredith was evil. That's really shocking. I wonder if its only khushi who has the hidden powers. Why not jasmine? And were khushi's grandma's powers more superior than aloysius's? How did she die? This chapter was really a turning point, a u-turn to this stry i feel.
Like always, you were marvelous here too. :)

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#505

What an intriguing story.. read all parts in one go and what a wonderful roller coaster journey was this 15 chapters.. so finally happy to ARSHI together all set to fight the evil together and they have cleared all the differences between them and now the real story starts as per you and can't tell you how curious i am for it to happen.. Simi really love your story idea.. you are awesome.. your concepts are so different and so intriguing leaving your readers mesmerized and in hunger to know what will happen next.. thanks for such awesome stories. God bless you.. best wishes and happy writing 😊

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: Titaliya1234
Awe-struck! Dumbstruck! Thunderstruck! You cant imagine the situation I'm in right now. Your way of writing astounded me. Incredible! You made me imagine so many things. At one point of time (okay! A real confession here), i even thought arnav was a locust. He he :D
so the necklace is back to its rightful owner yo! I knew it'd be with him. So Judith is only a friend
*lets out a huge sigh of relief*
I love Judith now he he:D.
Poor lady was so cursed by me.
Hmm that aloysius is back in town. He reminds me of YOU-KNOW-WHO in harry potter.Looks like a major bloodshed gonna happen soon.
Meredith was evil. That's really shocking. I wonder if its only khushi who has the hidden powers. Why not jasmine? And were khushi's grandma's powers more superior than aloysius's? How did she die? This chapter was really a turning point, a u-turn to this stry i feel.
Like always, you were marvelous here too. :)

Thanks a bunch darling.

Coming to your feedback, TBH, it wouldn't be wrong to get the "'You-know-who"vibes from Aloysius, cuz his character is a lot on those lines if not completely.

He is a power monger and can go beyond extremes to ensure he has what he wants.

Khushi has powers, but they were subjugated till she turned 18.

Like it's written throughout the chapters, it is only when she was nearing 18 and turned so, that the mystery and weird stuff started clouding her.

Her grandma ensured that she was mature enough to have her hands on this boon/bane called Witchcraft and that's why let the bracelet be her trigger for her powers.

Jasmine is still young, If we go by Amelia's (Khushi's grandma's) logic, then Jazz is still young to be a part of this world. But this is just technical way of saying it. If Jasmine at all have powers or not, is what further reading of the chapters will tell u.

Coming to Amelia and Aloysius, who was more powerful?

It's a good question.

While Aloysius here is definitely the supreme one given the fact that he is an immortal, it is very well evident that Amelia was one of the most powerful witches of her time, because she managed to conceal the bracelet from Aloysius with her unique spells.

Rest, your questions will be answered as the further chapters come up :)

Best,

Simi

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: pup03
What an intriguing story.. read all parts in one go and what a wonderful roller coaster journey was this 15 chapters.. so finally happy to ARSHI together all set to fight the evil together and they have cleared all the differences between them and now the real story starts as per you and can't tell you how curious i am for it to happen.. Simi really love your story idea.. you are awesome.. your concepts are so different and so intriguing leaving your readers mesmerized and in hunger to know what will happen next.. thanks for such awesome stories. God bless you.. best wishes and happy writing 😊

Thanks a lot dear 🤗

Means a lot.

Stay tuned for another round of roller coaster ride.

I am updating the next chapter today 😉

Best,

Simi

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Thanks a bunch darling.
Coming to your feedback, TBH, it wouldn't be wrong to get the "'You-know-who"vibes from Aloysius, cuz his character is a lot on those lines if not completely.
He is a power monger and can go beyond extremes to ensure he has what he wants.

Khushi has powers, but they were subjugated till she turned 18.
Like it's written throughout the chapters, it is only when she was nearing 18 and turned so, that the mystery and weird stuff started clouding her.
Her grandma ensured that she was mature enough to have her hands on this boon/bane called Witchcraft and that's why let the bracelet be her trigger for her powers.

Jasmine is still young, If we go by Amelia's (Khushi's grandma's) logic, then Jazz is still young to be a part of this world. But this is just technical way of saying it. If Jasmine at all have powers or not, is what further reading of the chapters will tell u.

Coming to Amelia and Aloysius, who was more powerful?
It's a good question.

While Aloysius here is definitely the supreme one given the fact that he is an immortal, it is very well evident that Amelia was one of the most powerful witches of her time, because she managed to conceal the bracelet from Aloysius with her unique spells.

Rest, your questions will be answered as the further chapters come up :)

Best,
Simi

the only difference between voldemort and aloysius was that voldemort was seeking immortality, and aloysius has already got it...right ?

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: anjs

the only difference between voldemort and aloysius was that voldemort was seeking immortality, and aloysius has already got it...right ?

Yes Anjs dear.

Absolutely right.

But Aloysius' immortality is threatened now, since Khushi is a doppelganger of Meredith, and since the bracelet belonged to Meredith, with the help of which Aloysius acquired immortality, he was reeling joy after Meredith died and hence, didn't really care much when Amelia hid it from him.

He only retaliated by killer her son (Khushi's father) but he wasn't feeling threatened, knowing that his immortality spell could only be broken by Meredith(the right owner of the bracelet) and since she was dead, there could be nothing that could harm him.

However, Khushi's birth and her entrance into the world of witchcraft is a threat now, since she is the bloodline doppelganger of Meredith and hence, she can jeopardise Aloysius' immortality. :)