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Posted: 8 years ago

#631

Just started reading this and only the intro was more than enough to realize that this story is so so going to keep me hooked...now am really eager to finish reading all the updates and share my views😊

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: dreamerinme
Just started reading this and only the intro was more than enough to realize that this story is so so going to keep me hooked...now am really eager to finish reading all the updates and share my views😊

Thanks dear :)

Welcome on board!

Hope you like it so far 😳

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dreamerinme

@dreamerinme

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Posted: 8 years ago

#633

Ohkayy..I just finished reading the 16th part. To start with, I had actually thought that I would be able to read all the parts in one go...BUT I was sooo wrong!! Every part and my dear I actually mean 'every single part' was so so captivating that I read and re read each one. After every single chapter I would do this - blink my eyes- say wow- repeat my previous action😆...I was this much impressed and involved with your presentation of this story.

Now coming to the story, initially I had many doubts and theories of my own but my patience and your story telling method cleared all.. Hmm, so both Arnav and Khushi are "magical" and good souls. I can so understand Khushi's confusion, in the starting, regarding Arnav's behaviour and all those nightmares. But seriously what impressed me the most was Khushi's strength and courage. Yes, I would say courage because I can never expect any weak soul to conceal their fears so well..like she had a nightmare in the night and still managed to go to college next day and there also she behaved normally.

She was right that for her Arnav is sinner as well as saviour. He would glare at her all the time, intimidate her, read her thoughts and yet would take her breath away every single time. And he confessed..simple and straight...from his heart to hers...no extra words and actions needed...just a plain and honest I Love You. I adored this simplicity and honesty.

Btw I feel Mason likes Khushi. That boy is giving soo many hints at least thats what I think..He would make a nice pair with Rebecca😛

Anyways, now I would read the next part. Hope I didn't bore you with my comment because am just an excited reader. Take care.

Edited by dreamerinme - 8 years ago

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: dreamerinme
Ohkayy..I just finished reading the 16th part. To start with, I had actually thought that I would be able to read all the parts in one go...BUT I was sooo wrong!! Every part and my dear I actually mean 'every single part' was so so captivating that I read and re read each one. After every single chapter I would do this - blink my eyes- say wow- repeat my previous action😆...I was this much impressed and involved with your presentation of this story.

Now coming to the story, initially I had many doubts and theories of my own but my patience and your story telling method cleared all.. Hmm, so both Arnav and Khushi are "magical" and good souls. I can so understand Khushi's confusion, in the starting, regarding Arnav's behaviour and all those nightmares. But seriously what impressed me the most was Khushi's strength and courage. Yes, I would say courage because I can never expect any weak soul to conceal their fears so well..like she had a nightmare in the night and still managed to go to college next day and there also she behaved normally.

She was right that for her Arnav is sinner as well as saviour. He would glare at her all the time, intimidate her, read her thoughts and yet would take her breath away every single time. And he confessed..simple and straight...from his heart to hers...no extra words and actions needed...just a plain and honest I Love You. I adored this simplicity and honesty.

Btw I feel Mason likes Khushi. That boy is giving soo many hints at least thats what I think..He would make a nice pair with Rebecca😛
Anyways, now I would read the next part. Hope I didn't bore you with my comment because am just an excited reader. Take care.

Hats off that you managed to read 16 parts so quick dear, cuz I know the story takes a while to sink in and when u get to the crest of it, it finally starts making sense.

Thanks for a lovely and honest feedback and trust me as u read further, a lot of things will unfurl, some of which will be totally unexpected 😉

Hope you like it! 😳

Best,

Simi