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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

That was a thrilling update

It seems like khushi has given some powers when she was wearing that bracelet. her emotions are all over the places. she is acting out of her character. What is that bracelet is about. and i am sure arnav dissapeared because of the bracelet. he knows about whatever happening with khushi. and not to forget, they share a strong connection...like telepathic.

whenever khushi is in trouble, arnav appears out of nowhere saving khushi.

and what is this locusts are about?

i guess the solution to all khushi' s problems are included in that book of her grandmother's.

Looking forward to read more...this is getting addictive more and more

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: AnupamaJY
That was a thrilling update

It seems like khushi has given some powers when she was wearing that bracelet. her emotions are all over the places. she is acting out of her character. What is that bracelet is about. and i am sure arnav dissapeared because of the bracelet. he knows about whatever happening with khushi. and not to forget, they share a strong connection...like telepathic.

whenever khushi is in trouble, arnav appears out of nowhere saving khushi.

and what is this locusts are about?

i guess the solution to all khushi' s problems are included in that book of her grandmother's.

Looking forward to read more...this is getting addictive more and more

U are right dear. The bracelet has a lot of significance.

Khushi is unaware of her own agenda as of now, but very soon, she will be explored to a world darker than her nightmares.

Stay tuned :)

Will update the next part asap!

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..
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So she can teleport that is clear. And Arnav is their whenever there is danger. So she is someone "important" without whom the community of Arnav and Khushi can't survive and dark forces are out to get them. Cool.

I loved the drama. It was beautifully written. But I have one suggestion to make, it's happening too fast and it seems to be quite awkward to read what is happening. I hope you leave hints in between the chapters.

Otherwise I'm in love Smi with your work and you know that very well by now.

And btw why dont you give us a song suggestion likes in sinner. :PI would love to guess what is happening in the story. :)

Love,
Saraa :*

Thanks for your feedback like always babe 🤗

Yes, there's a big bad dark world out there, you are absolutely right. But what roles Arnav and Khushi play in there, time will tell.

Coming to the pace of the story, well, there's a reason there's pacing in these chapters, because everything is scheduled to come to a standstill in no time.

And about hints, well, I am not going to brag or lie, but this story is very very different from Cruise Adriana and The Sinner. So even minute reading won't give you much hints about what would happen next. You just have to read this one with zilch guesses and be prepared for anything and everything 😉😆

Loads of love,

Simi ❤️

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Awesome simi!
I bet mase is in love with her ha ha:D This is getting more n more mysterious. Like everyone guessed this bracelet is very powerful! It does possess some supernatural element in it. But one thing i am curious to know is will it do any good to khushi or will she doomed coz of wearing it considering the trauma she just faced? Arnav also knows something. There is more to the story. Why did he disappear all of a sudden. And the connection between them is a mystery. Who placed the box in her garage that night? And i wonder if khushi's grandma also knew magic. How come khushi's mom was unaware of it? Will you please update today also. There are so many questions running in my mind.
Whats with the locusts and was all this staged by arnav for her to get a glimpse of his world?

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: Titaliya1234
Awesome simi!
I bet mase is in love with her ha ha:D This is getting more n more mysterious. Like everyone guessed this bracelet is very powerful! It does possess some supernatural element in it. But one thing i am curious to know is will it do any good to khushi or will she doomed coz of wearing it considering the trauma she just faced? Arnav also knows something. There is more to the story. Why did he disappear all of a sudden. And the connection between them is a mystery. Who placed the box in her garage that night? And i wonder if khushi's grandma also knew magic. How come khushi's mom was unaware of it? Will you please update today also. There are so many questions running in my mind.
Whats with the locusts and was all this staged by arnav for her to get a glimpse of his world?

That's a heavy line darling 😉

Is it really his world?

Sure, I will try my level best to update this tonight.

Also, we don't know if the box in the basement was kept by someone or it was always there.

The impact of the bracelet will unfurl soon. 😳

Stay tuned.