SS: Broken Strings *Last Part on page 48* - Page 5

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Introducing

Advay Singh Raizada

Hanna

Kiara Chaturvedi

Angelina Singh Raizada

Chapter 5

"What happened next?" Kiara asked.

"Advay and Hanna started meeting frequently," Angelina said, "Advay used to go to the restaurant where Hanna works and both used to talk. They became good friends and Advay came to know about her family background."

"Hanna didn't have father. All she had was her mother. Her mother is ill and Hanna stopped her education after 12^th. She started dancing in bar to earn money. After one year, her mother died and she lives all alone." Anjali said.

"It was then, one day, the showstopper of AR sprained her ankle!" Akash said.

"So what?" Kiara asked confused with the sudden mention of AR's showstopper!

"What are you saying Aman uncle?" Advay asked shocked.

"Ha Advay! Liza sprained her ankle!" Aman said.

"Oh god! The show's within 3 hours and how are we gonna get a new showstopper? Did you inform dad?" Advay asked.

"Do you think I'm crazy? ASR would kill me if he knows this!" Aman said, "Please Advay, only you can help me. Can you please ask any of your friends to be a model for this show?"

"But I don't know any..." Advay trailed off as he saw Hanna coming to him holding a tray.

Keeping the tray before him, she said with her sweet smile, "Enjoy your meal, sir!" And she went.

"Advay, you there?" Aman asked.

"I'll call you later uncle!" He said.

"But what about model?" Aman cried.

"Don't worry uncle, the model will reach there within an hour!" Advay said and cut the call.

"WHAT? ME AND MODEL?" Hanna screamed.

Advay nodded and Hanna said, "Dancing and singing are easy but modelling...are you crazy Advay?"

"Please Hanna, only you can save me now! The show is in 3 hours and we really need someone now!"

"Your sister can be the model!" Hanna cried.

"Di is not here Hanna! She is away on college trip with her students. You're the only person whom I know! Please please please do this..." Advay begged.

"But I haven't walked on a ramp ever..." Hanna cried.

"You dance in front of a huge audience every week!" Advay said, "Walking on a ramp is much easier than that!"

"But me..." Hanna cried when Advay stood up, "You're coming with me and that's FINAL!" He held her hand and dragged her to the car.

As he started the car, she said, "What if I fall on the ramp?"

"No problem!" He said.

"NO problem? Your daddy will kill you for getting such an idiotic model!" Hanna cried.

He smirked and said, "Dad will never shout if anyone fall on ramp!"

"Why?" she asked frowning.

"He had met his lady love from the ramp!" He said.

"What?" She asked excited.

"Mamma had fallen from the ramp straight to dad's arms! So falling on ramp is not a crime, especially in my father's eyes!" Advay said and Hanna burst into laughter.

"That was cute!" She said in between her laughs.

"Advay, did ASR know?" Aman asked tensed.

"We'll inform him after the show!" Advay said, "Where is Hanna?"

"She is in the green room!" Aman said and walked away.

Advay walked to the greenroom.

He knocked the door and hearing no response, he slightly pushed it. The door opened and he entered.

He entered and found her standing in front of the mirror with her back facing him, trying hard to tie her dori.

Advay gulped seeing her backless and he slowly closed the door.

Hearing the door's closing noise, Hanna turned and found him.

"Advay!" she asked surprised, "Why are you here?"

Advay woke from the daze and said, "I came to call you. The door was open so..."

"Door was open?" She frowned, "Oh my! I am so tensed that I even forgot to close the door!" She said smiling nervously.

He nodded and smiled.

He saw her taking her hands to her back and he said, "Should I help?"

"Huh?" She asked.

"I'll tie it" he said.

She smiled nervously and nodded. She slowly turned and Advay walked to her.

Taking the delicate strings on his hands, he slowly tied it. His hands brushed to her soft skin and she gasped. She clutched the dressing table with her hands and he whispered in her ears, after tying the dori, "You look beautiful" She closed her eyes feeling him standing close to her, his chest almost touching her back.

It was then Advay's phone rang and he suddenly moved away from her. She opened her eyes at the instant and turned to him.

He moved backwards and took the call. "Yeah dad...yeah I'm coming!"

He cut the call and said to her, "The show's about to start. Come!" She nodded and turned to the dressing table.

He saw her taking a clip and clipping her hair when he said, "Leave it open!"

She turned to him and he said, "Leave your hair open! I like that." And he walked away.

She turned to the mirror and unclipped her hair. The long hairs came down the instant and she smiled with his voice ringing in her ears.

I like that.

"And here we have the show stopper of AR presenting to you the exclusive design specially designed by the king of fashion, Arnav Singh Raizada!"

The announcer spoke and Aman whispered to Advay, "Will she do it?"

Advay smiled confidently and said, "She'll be the best!" He glanced at his father and uncle who were waiting for Sheetal to appear on stage.

He saw their faces going to frown and he smiled. He looked at the ramp where she was coming.

Arnav and Akash looked at each other seeing a young girl walking on the ramp instead of Sheetal.

Aman closed his eyes praying and Advay looked at the ramp. The whole crowd fell silent and was just gazing at her.

Hanna, dressed in a blood red sari and her long hair left open, walked through the ramp elegantly. She looked at the huge audience before her and then looked at the front seat to find Advay, the only person she knew there. She smiled beautifully at him and he too smiled back.

He gulped seeing her walking through the ramp. The red sari that perfectly fitted her highlighting her curves and her long hair that flew in air was looking damn irresistible. He watched her walking through the ramp on her high pointed heels elegantly. He saw her smiling at him and couldn't help but smile back.

Hanna reached the end of the ramp and then turned back to exit it.

As she walked back to the ramp, everyone clapped for the best showstopper of AR.

Akash said, "Who is she bhai?"

Arnav shrugged and said, "I don't know but she was awesome!"

Akash also nodded and the brothers clapped for the showstopper.

"After that show, bhai offered her a modelling contract with our company because we found her work good. She accepted that and soon joined our company!" Akash said.

"She shifted to the apartment that AR provides to its staff and within a month became the well paid model of AR," Angelina said, "In between this, Advay and Hanna grew closer. In other words, they both fell in love."

"We all liked Hanna. She was a good, traditional yet modern girl! We all wanted Advay and Hanna to pair up but..." Khushi trailed off when Kiara completed, "But you didn't know that Hanna was actually a bar dancer."

Khushi looked down and closing her eyes hummed. Kiara sighed and said, "What happened next?"

NK continued, "Advay proposed her on her birthday. Actually he had taken tips from Nannav! Hanna accepted it and we all were happy."

"But the next day..." Arnav said.

"Okay Aman, contact their managing director and fix an appointment," Arnav instructed Aman as he walked inside his cabin. Aman nodded and walked out. It was then Sheetal came in.

"ASR, why am I being terminated from AR?" She asked angrily.

Arnav looked at her and said, "We don't need you anymore Sheetal! Hanna will be the permanent showstopper of AR!"

Sheetal cried, "This is unfair ASR. I'm far more experience than that girl! In fact every model here is experienced that Hanna! How can she be the showstopper?"

"Because she is good at modelling!" Arnav said angrily.

"Or is it that she is your son's girlfriend?" Sheetal asked.

"GET OUT SHEETAL!" Arnav shouted.

Sheetal scoffed and said, "I'm going! But let me warn you, that girl is not good! She is trapping your son!"

Arnav rolled his eyes and Sheetal said, "Don't ignore me ASR. Who do you think Hanna is?"

"Get out Sheetal!" Arnav said sternly.

"HANNA IS A BAR DANCER!" Sheetal shouted.

Arnav looked at her shocked and Sheetal said, "Don't believe me? Then ask your Friday man Aman to enquire. He will also say the same - Hanna is a bar dancer! If you don't believe that also, ask Peter, Rolf, Aashiq and Rahul. They are Advay's friends and they will tell you who Hanna is!" And she walked away.

Arnav sat watching her retreating back. He was lost in thoughts when someone knocked his door. He looked at the door and found Rolf.

"May I come in sir?" He asked and he nodded.

Rolf came in and handed him a file.

"Rolf, where did Hanna work before joining AR?" Arnav asked directly.

Rolf looked at him shocked. "Tell me!" ASR demanded.

"Sir, you can ask Advay!" Rolf said stammering.

"Tell me where Hanna worked!" Arnav said sternly.

"Purple Orchid restaurant! She was a waitress there!" Rolf said looking at the floor.

"I'll fire you if you're lying!" ASR threatened.

"Sir, she used to work at two places. One is purple orchid!" Rolf said suddenly.

"The other one?" Arnav asked.

"Sir...Advay...you can ask him..." Rolf stammered.

"Rolf!" Arnav shouted.

"Chameli bar!" Rolf said in his frightened voice.

Loved the cs and chapter 5👏

So what's bad in being bar dancer.. she used to dance and earn money and was not sleeping around.. what was wrong?? hope ASR didn't went against his son for this.. nice update..

Well presented story...I am enjoying it a lottt...but characterisation of the new generation , that's too very kya batau!!! Give someone who will at least match with the age...ranbir and barun won't look like son-father...anyway that's ur choice..
But I am loving it..plz continue soon...

Nice update. Eagerly looking forward for the next update. Continue soon. Thanks for the PM.

Oh God! The past is finally out. I can understand Arnav's concern abt Advay but still things were actually out of hands. and u know what? I am in love with Advay-Kiara's pair. I have always loved them. Hehe! C'mon girl update soon. Hope the MU ia cleared out soon

Great update
Thanks for pm me

Chapter 6

"Ok, so you got to know that she was a bar dancer. And you disapproved Advay's and Hanna's relationship and fired her. Right?" Kiara asked.

"No, he did something more than that!" Akash said looking at Arnav who had his head weighed down.

"Why did you call me?" Hanna frowned as she entered Advay's cabin.

Advay who was swirling his chair said, "Nothing! I just wanted to see you!"

"Is that a joke?" She asked. "No, the truth!" He said grinning.

She sighed and turned to walk away when he said, "Stop!" She turned and looked at him. He stood up from his chair and walked to her.

"Will you come out with me tonight?" He asked as he walked towards her.

"To where?" She asked frowning.

"My college friend came back from America. He has organised a reunion party and..." he said when she cut him in between, "You really need to take a lesson on "How to lie efficiently?"..."

He sighed and said, "Okay fine! I want to take you out for a night!"

"Hmmm..." she crossed her arms and said, "I don't see your intentions good!"

"Because they aren't good baby!" He smirked as he stood before her.

"Oh! Then why should I come out with a man whose intentions are not good?" She asked.

He smirked and pulled her hand. She landed on his chest and hugging her by her waist and kissing her, he murmured on her lips, "Because I take out these intentions only on one girl!"

"And that girl is..." She asked as she pushed him away.

"The girl who is arguing with me now!" He said.

"I'm not arguing!" She said.

"There you go! You have begun to argue..." he said.

"I'm not..." she couldn't finish when he slammed his lips on hers.

Kissing her madly for a few seconds, he whispered out in breath, "This is the only way to shut you up!" And he kissed her again.

And that's how Arnav Singh Raizada found them as he entered his son's cabin.

Advay and Hanna broke hearing someone clearing the throat. They looked to their left and found Arnav standing.

"Dad..." Advay cried and Hanna moved away from him.

"Red lipstick doesn't look good on you!" Arnav stated and Advay rubbed his lips while Hanna looked away.

"Err...I'll...I'll go..." Hanna said stammering when Arnav said, "What's your actual name Hanna?"

Hanna and Advay looked at him weirdly. Akash who had come to call Advay heard it and asked, "What are you asking bhai?"

Arnav looked at Hanna and demanded, "Tell me your actual name Hanna!"

"Hanna is my name!" She said.

"Oh, so Hanna isn't you fake identity?" Arnav asked.

Advay said, "Dad what are you saying?"

Ignoring him, Arnav said, "So Hanna is your actually name. Then who is Mohini?"

Hanna and Advay looked at him shocked.

"I insulted her badly, accused her for trapping my son. Advay stood for her and the battle became between me and my son. My ego got hurt seeing my son fighting with me for that girl and my hatred towards Hanna increased tenfold!" Arnav said.

"Bhai insulted Hanna in front of the whole office. Advay couldn't bear it and he shouted at bhai. And for the first time in his life, bhai raised his hand against Advay." Akash said.

SLAP!

Hanna gasped and so did the whole office staff seeing ASR slapping his son.

Advay looked at his father in tears. The last thing he expected in his life was his father slapping him! He bit his lips to prevent himself from crying out hard but tears started to flow down his cheek.

"THIS IS NOT THE WAY YOU SPEAK TO YOUR FATHER ADVAY!" Arnav roared.

"Bhai...please...this is not the place..." Akash whispered to his brother.

"Of course this is Akash. Let the world know what kind of girl she is!" Arnav roared pointing towards Hanna who stood in tears.

"Dad, this is the last time I'm warning you! ONE MORE WORD AGAINST HANNA AND I'LL FORGET WHO YOU ARE!" Advay shouted.

Arnav looked at him shocked. And so did Akash!

Hanna clutched his arm and whispered, "Advay stop this! You're shouting at your dad!"

"This is all because of you! So talented you are Mohini! You have trapped him well! Within two months you have made him shout at his dad whom he knows for 26 years!" Arnav shouted.

"Dad stop it!" Advay shouted.

"I will...but only when this girl goes away from my eyes! I don't want to see her in your life!" Arnav roared.

"That is never gonna happen! She will not go away from my life because SHE IS MY LIFE! What is your problem dad? Just because she danced in a bar you concluded that she is gold digger! She had her own reasons for that!" Advay shouted.

Arnav shouted at Hanna, "ENOUGH! GET OUT OF HERE YOU ****. YOU DO NOT BELONG HERE!"

"SHE BELONGS TO WHERE I BELONG!" Advay shouted holding her hand tightly who was sobbing bitterly.

"SHE HAS TO GO OUT OF HERE! AND ALSO FROM YOURS AND EVERYONE'S LIFE! SHE HAS NO RIGHT TO BE HERE!" Arnav shouted.

Advay looked at him in anger and the next moment did something which shocked everyone present there.

Taking the knife which was there at one of the employees' cubicle, he cut his thumb and pressed it against her hair partition.

Hanna looked at him shocked. He pulled her close and holding arm tightly, he said to Arnav, "Now she has the right to be here dad. Now, she is my wife!"

"Chotte what are you saying?" Anjali asked in disbelief.

"Ha di, this girl is a bar dancer! She is nothing but a gold digger!" Arnav said angrily pointing at Hanna who was standing in tears in the living room of Raizada mansion clutching Advay's shirt.

Mami in her usual hello hi style started taunting Hanna while Khushi kept silent. She stood watching her son standing, hugging Hanna sideways.

"Khushi, say something!" Arnav shouted.

Khushi looked at Arnav and then at Advay. "What should I say? There isn't anything to tell!" She said in low voice.

"So you accept them?" Arnav asked in disbelief.

Holding her head high, Khushi walked to Hanna and caught her hand. Hanna looked at her and Khushi said smiling, "Whatever mishap happened, just forget it! Now you're my Advay's wife and Raizada bahu. Come!" She then looked at Advay and said sternly, "I'm not very happy with you. You should have told me about this. And I also do not appreciate this move of yours! I was planning so many things for your marriage...huh you ruined everything!" She finished with a mischievous smile.

Advay and Hanna looked at Khushi with their eyes wide. Arnav and Raizadas stood shocked. Khushi shouted, "Hari Prakash ji, there is a lehenga inside an orange cover in my wardrobe. Get that!" turning to Hanna she said, "That was the lehenga I had selected for my bahu. Go and wear it. We'll do the grah pravesh ceremony! Advay, take her to your room!"

"Khushi what are you telling? She is a gold digger!" Arnav cried.

"That was what you said when you met me for the first!" She said and walked away shouting for HP.

"So you accepted them?" Kiara asked to Khushi who nodded and said, "I always loved their pair. And Hanna is a good girl. I knew, if she is a bar dancer then she is forced due. I was right! She was forced to do that due to her financial conditions. And who better I knows that struggle? Many times we're forced to do things for our loved ones and that's what Hanna did."

"But no one understood that," Angelina said, "The only ones who accepted them after Khushi maasi was me and my mamma. Everyone was angry at her and also with Advay." Sighing at Arnav who was looking down she said, "Arnav chachu insulted Hanna again and again and the more he hurted Hanna, the more his relationship with Advay worsened."

Akash continued, "Advay couldn't tolerate our behaviour towards Hanna and he left the house with her. They moved into a small apartment and started living there. Bhai and he got apart and they didn't even acknowledge each other when they collide inside the office."

"Slowly, Anjali bua and badi dadi (Nani ji) also forgave Hanna!" Angelina said, "We used to visit them every weekend. Hanna joined as a model in another fashion house and Advay continued in AR. Months passed like this."

"I begged to Arnav ji to bring him back but he wouldn't budge!" Khushi said slowly looking at Arnav who was still looking down with his eyes closed in guilt.

"And after 6 months of their leaving, I went to them and brought them back. I had enough. I couldn't live with my son not talking to me. Although I didn't want to accept Hanna, I did that for Advay. They both came back and slowly things were getting normal!" Arnav said opening his eyes.

"Days passed and things became normal. Hanna was accepted by everyone. One day Hanna fainted and the doctor confirmed that she was pregnant. Everyone was happy for the pair. After a week, it was Advay's birthday and a party was organized here." Angelina said, "But..."

"But?" Kiara asked.

"But nothing went well!" Angelina whispered.

intriguing story... Totally addicted to it