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.......... Deeksha..........

@...Deeksha....

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow after nearly weeks i'm on this site..and here i'm really happy to read very beautiful os...

friend if u got time give ASR's view and after math please...

loved it...

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow! That's beautiful... But sad in the end...

Well, not the "end" is it? 😉

Please do continue... Would love to know Arnav's POV too... Why did he deny earlier? Or did all the barriers break only when he saw Khushi was shot?

Felt bad for Khushi...

But this can't be the end, can it? 😉

Waiting for the second shot 😃

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

This is so really very amazing! But why didnt he reciprocate her feelings back then? Is there any big reason? It was written very well, had a good time reading it!

Is there a second part where we could see what had happened to them?

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kshamaDeeksha
wow after nearly weeks i'm on this site..and here i'm really happy to read very beautiful os...
friend if u got time give ASR's view and after math please...

loved it...

Thank you for your response. 😃

It was just an OS but I'm thinking that I might right more. 😉

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles
This is so really very amazing! But why didnt he reciprocate her feelings back then? Is there any big reason? It was written very well, had a good time reading it!
Is there a second part where we could see what had happened to them?

Well, I guess you might get that answer in the next update. I think I'm writing it. I'm definitely writing it.😃