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Posted: 8 years ago
It was a very beautiful journey they had together and I m glad I was a part of it. loved reading it entirely
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Posted: 8 years ago
i have dcided to read this awesome story for the second time, till u post ur new story prologue simiii 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
What was that !! ... unbelivably awesome story !!
So much of suspense n thrill .. i cdnt stop reading it in a go !
I guessed that khushi wasnt a killer actually ... and i thought she was spying on arnav ... maybe she was some detective or cop n was finding if arnav was a killer ... but i was wondering who was killed to begin with ... the only missing character was kiara .. i thought she might hv been killed but thn again she was in party ( although the fake one . But to me as a reader it felt she was alive :p ) ... but never have i ever thought arnav would actually be the killer ! ...
Uff that khushi going missing from library launch ... n thn arnav being stabbed by her i was so shocked and confused .. i actually at that time thought she is the killer ... lol...
you are sooo good at words .. i knew arnav wont kill khushi but in that scene where he has that injection .. i got scared ...
I m happy that the story ended on a happy note .. but thats highly unlikely to happen ..right .. even if it is some arnav singh raizada sinner or saviour ... i dnt think wd get this lucky ..
I do feel for the little orphaned arnav ... but i cdnt fall in lv wth this sinner ... sorry i cdnt see him as ONLY saviour ... he might be for some.. or many... but he is a sinner he is taking people life ... thats too severe a crime to let go ...

But its a fiction right .. lol ...
Hey its really a fiction right ? ... the lines of the novel "fiction can be real " got me scared too 😆 ..

This is by far the best suspense / mystery i hv read on forum ... !!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Zaidi

What was that !! ... unbelivably awesome story !!

So much of suspense n thrill .. i cdnt stop reading it in a go !
I guessed that khushi wasnt a killer actually ... and i thought she was spying on arnav ... maybe she was some detective or cop n was finding if arnav was a killer ... but i was wondering who was killed to begin with ... the only missing character was kiara .. i thought she might hv been killed but thn again she was in party ( although the fake one . But to me as a reader it felt she was alive :p ) ... but never have i ever thought arnav would actually be the killer ! ...
Uff that khushi going missing from library launch ... n thn arnav being stabbed by her i was so shocked and confused .. i actually at that time thought she is the killer ... lol...
you are sooo good at words .. i knew arnav wont kill khushi but in that scene where he has that injection .. i got scared ...
I m happy that the story ended on a happy note .. but thats highly unlikely to happen ..right .. even if it is some arnav singh raizada sinner or saviour ... i dnt think wd get this lucky ..
I do feel for the little orphaned arnav ... but i cdnt fall in lv wth this sinner ... sorry i cdnt see him as ONLY saviour ... he might be for some.. or many... but he is a sinner he is taking people life ... thats too severe a crime to let go ...

But its a fiction right .. lol ...
Hey its really a fiction right ? ... the lines of the novel "fiction can be real " got me scared too 😆 ..

This is by far the best suspense / mystery i hv read on forum ... !!


Eee... thanks for the the lovely and honest feedback😳
In this story, Arnav had two sides to him. Of course one can never take law in their hands, but his scarred past made him believe in the simple Vladamir Putin philosophy that "Only god can punish the sinners, but to send the sinners to god is my job."

He is of the same belief that if someone drains innocent blood, s/he must perish.
I don't know how many people will stand by this attitude of his and how many will refute, I personally can't stay with a person like that, but here it was Khushi. If you noticed, she had a wicked passion of her own and she was that obsessed with research and stuff that she didn't care twice before putting her life in jeopardy and became a part of Arnav. the sinner's world, who according to her was a savior as well.

Lastly, yes this was a fiction, woven out of my imagination, but hey! They also say "Everything that you can imagine is real." 😉
😆

Haha!

Best,
Simi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR

i have dcided to read this awesome story for the second time, till u post ur new story prologue simiii 😃


Yay! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Simi1711


Eee... thanks for the the lovely and honest feedback😳
In this story, Arnav had two sides to him. Of course one can never take law in their hands, but his scarred past made him believe in the simple Vladamir Putin philosophy that "Only god can punish the sinners, but to send the sinners to god is my job."

He is of the same belief that if someone drains innocent blood, s/he must perish.
I don't know how many people will stand by this attitude of his and how many will refute, I personally can't stay with a person like that, but here it was Khushi. If you noticed, she had a wicked passion of her own and she was that obsessed with research and stuff that she didn't care twice before putting her life in jeopardy and became a part of Arnav. the sinner's world, who according to her was a savior as well.

Lastly, yes this was a fiction, woven out of my imagination, but hey! They also say "Everything that you can imagine is real." 😉
😆

Haha!

Best,
Simi


Hey .. welcome !! ..
I see ... yes i agree khushi was different and i m happy to have a happily everafter arshi .. but i was saying in AD tht wd hv never happened .. thts wt i think .. no khushi wd hv lived wth a murderer arnav .. no ? ... i get arnav s thinking ... but i disagree he does not need to shed blood even of the culprits ... he dxnt need to send thm to God.. God is capable of handling it alone.. plus it just does not sound right to shed blood this way...(leave it thats debatable 😆 ) ..
Wht i loved most about this story is the suspense throughout ... thats commendable ! .. from start till end one keeps wondering getting surprized .. the last line of prologue is introguing itself ... n whole story is just so gripping ... i loved reading it ! ...

Haha dnt tell me ... it can be real ? .. lol ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
such an awesome story 👏
so thrilling...so romantic..wow
i m in awe of your writing gal..u r amazing <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome so so so so beautiful story loved to read it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
^^Awww... ❤️
Edited by Simi1711 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Story removed from I-F.


Is it because of Plagiarism ?
or Have you decided to post only on Blog ?

You have very nice collection of Arshi's stories

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