ARSHI's Story SILENT CONFESSION- Chapter 4 posted on 6/10 page 16

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matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

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janu

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Posted: 8 years ago

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This is ages from you..

Khushi is too young and very cute ..may be not towards Arnav...but in due course of time that would also come

Is Arnav a singer and anyways linked to "abhaas "...or is he the one!

And arti and Arnav have hit off superbly...liking this family and your writing too...

P.S...waiting to read your other work after coming across this gem...

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anjs

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Can I please be honest here, Khushi's ganwar rant is getting too much, and makes me not like her.

I think Arti will fall for Arnav, infact as of now, it feels like its ArnTi story more then ArShi story.

I think Arnav will turn out to be her favorite Singer, and but the damage she has already done, is too much. Had it been me, I wouldnt even think of reconciling with a person who thinks so badly of my background, without even knowing me. I wonder how Arnav sees Khushi's horrible behavior as a breath of fresh air.

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Jessie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Khushi reminds me of a bratty Kareena Kapoor in KG3. But her friend could be right, she may be attracted to Arnav, and so is behaving atrociously with him.

What secrets is he hiding?

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pravallika

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Lovely update dear...

Pooja guessed it right... she is very much attracted to him and not realising it...

Arnav feels that she is like a Fresh air in his otherwise pretentious life and is welcoming this...

Plzzz update soon ritu... waiting eagerly... loving this very much..

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sydy

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thanks for updating this story. i have been waiting for a long time. Love-hate relationship has started off-course only in Khushi's mind. Her ganwar rant is slightly on a higher side but I'll cut some slack for being a teenager and her previous experience with her Buaji.
Arnav comes out like a chilled out person who is simply enjoying the kiddish antics of Khushi. Why I get this feeling that Arti and Arnav will start liking each other and by the time Khushi will realise that Abhaas is Arnav it will late, anyways right now Khushi is too young for him. Waiting for next chapter.

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chinnulu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Nice to see an update for this one.

Amazing Update

Khushi is just a normal teenager with rebellious attitude. She is against village people because of her encounter with her buaji's narrow minded thinking. Seeing Arnav's dressing style she even thinks the same about him. Arnav is enjoying her behaviour towards him and also riling her up with his words which makes more angry on Arnav. As her friend said was it her attraction that is making her behave the way she behaves with Arnav or just she is against the people from village whom she feels have narrowmind. Arnav reads her mind easily and interpret what she is thinking about him. Their fights are cute. Thinking Arnav must be her favourite singer Abhas whom she adores.

Waiting for Bound by Blackmail update

Advance Thanks for the PM

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Shamz

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I didn't know you had started this story :o :( sorry but will come and read this soon with more time will not leave it like that coming to it sooon

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matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Janu75
This is ages from you..Yah I am sorry dear, still trying to figure out how to progress this one...😉
Khushi is too young and very cute ..may be not towards Arnav...but in due course of time that would also come Khushi is adorable...and this was just the first day, as u can see she is already possessive about Arnav, she is going to be having nightmares pretty soon. Ahh those days of very first love...are so exciting. 😆
Is Arnav a singer and anyways linked to "abhaas "...or is he the one! They are one and same.
And arti and Arnav have hit off superbly...liking this family and your writing too...Oh thank you!!!

P.S...waiting to read your other work after coming across this gem...Sure...the other story "bound by blackmail" is done more regularly...though many won't agree with that.😉

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BarunFan1212

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi , i was waiting for this story to progress and was happy to see you updated it today.

Love this Khushi and Arnav. Khushi is a breadth of fresh air as Arnav feels.

She behaves like a typical teenager. Expecting a village boy and baffled by a handsome hung and didn't want to accept her defeat. Otherwise she is a very compassionate young lady who love everyone and loved by all.

From so far i can figure Arnav was an affluent person in the past. Must have been famous and arrogant and must have had female population flooding over him. Khushi's behaviour is something he never encountered and it's amuses him a lot. He has a sad past which may make Khushi more protective towards him.

Arti seems likea very smart and lovely girl who loves her sister very dearly. She is a very sensible girl and can carry a intelligent conversation with a smart man than the bubbly Khushi who is too young to be serious about anything. Hope Arthi does not fall in love with Arnav as i could see Arnav only can be a good friend to her as there are no sparks between them.

Please continue the story quickly. I would love to know how Khushi is falling for Arnav and how Arnav's reaction for her feelings are going to be.