ARSHI's Story SILENT CONFESSION- Chapter 4 posted on 6/10 page 16

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ranoovs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

like to read it. it will be awesome as ur other two ffs, I trust u. eagerly waiting for next.

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ranoovs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

like to read it. it will be awesome as ur other two ffs, I trust u. eagerly waiting for next.

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

First to read for PART 1 😆

Edited by MoonBow. - 9 years ago

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MoonBow.
First to read for PART 1 😆

Editing it sooo fast

Short update tha.

But I loved it. Anything from you is welcomed.
Btw I didn't get you about the rewriting part. Are you adding parts of just posting what u wrote? I noticed some missing words 😲
52 chapters! Woo cant wait for such a long ride. Are the updates the same length henceforth?

Edited by MoonBow. - 9 years ago

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matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: MoonBow.

Editing it sooo fast

Short update tha.

But I loved it. Anything from you is welcomed.
Btw I didn't get you about the rewriting part. Are you adding parts of just posting what u wrote? I noticed some missing words 😲
52 chapters! Woo cant wait for such a long ride. Are the updates the same length henceforth?

Babu, when I say, rewriting the part, it means the entire part...u don't want to read the original part..It was sooo lame and armature...U would laugh...😆...I rewrote it over an hour so didn't read it again. Let me make an edit and make correction.

So all three stories which U have read till now, including this one were written 3 ( opps more than 10 yrs actually ) years ago...I keep the same structure but rewrite entire parts...where I have made improvements in term of language and scenarios...This one I think, I would shorten it...or might change it completely and make it very serious...Let's see,

Oh I am just sooo happy to see you back again.🤗

Edited by matosarah - 9 years ago

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raji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Ritz its so cheerful and I admit its completely strange of yours but trust me its so pleasent and something so cheerful loved the entire update so double stories and double updates in a week from you wow its so good you know 😊😉

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matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MoonBow.
RES

MB ki stylewa 😛

Haha! Not exactly...I would reveal as the story goes where I applied the inspiration😉

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matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: raji_sudha
Ritz its so cheerful and I admit its completely strange of yours but trust me its so pleasent and something so cheerful loved the entire update so double stories and double updates in a week from you wow its so good you know 😊😉

Hi Raji, the beginning of this story is sooo adorable and I don't know how I would change this original picture...

Khushi is somebody I don't relate to but I still relate...as she is very real...and somebody I was at that age...😉😆,...

Arnav is a surprise in this story.❤️

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matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dv19
Oh...silent love..

Is it very mellowed ...

Would love to read more.

DV, it starts on lighter note...but as soon as I unleashed my silent writer, it became too serious...This was the only story I shared with my sister, and she being my worst critic told me, it dragged towards the end after the confession...

I have some work cut out, if I take this project.😆

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Cant do proper quoting thanks to my shitty office computer. So YAY im happy to be back too.

I haven't read the latest BBB update yet.

Okay so u are doing the rewriting. Tbh the first thought were about it going the serious way but im eager to know about the light genres too. So im all ready. Present Chap 2 sooon!

And what about taking inspiration from my RES style ?