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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#771

Ch16: Damn I don't know what to say. I knew this confrontation and subsequent revelation was going to be heartbreaking for Khushi but this was just depressing. Even more so because it happened in layers, slowly and painfully as realization dawns on her that yes he is actually saying and meaning everything coming out of his mouth!

This is going to be the shortest review I've done for any of your stories 😆 I don't want to dwell on Khushi's heartbreak cause our girl deserves so much better. Not do I want to see Arnav's point of view because he deserves nothing here.

I'm excited for the leap. Is it only a month per the teaser? I was hoping for a longer one because a month is definitely not enough time to get over what Khushi just went through. I also wished she'd move away though I totally understand her wish to care for her family. I am curious as to how he will find out the truth and if they'll meet before or after that because that can change how the story moves forward. If they meet before he's just going to dig a deeper grave for himself which I am not sure I want him to come out of. If they meet after him knowing the truth he'll be in his best repenting mood 😳 I can't help but be sarcastic and uncaring to everything Arnav right now. What an ass!

Edited by brishti84 - 8 years ago

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mansin129

@mansin129

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#772

OMG... that update was something

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nzmonica

@nzmonica

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#773

Hi Ritu

Fantastic story...Poor khushi has had a hard time, but like Ira prayed, here prince is here.

So enchanting that she fell in love at 16 and her feelings remained unchanged despite everything she went through.

Arnav is in denial of his love.

I really enjoyed how the characters are REAL, they are human. And there are no over the top vilians.

Yes we have negative people, mani who is selfish and self centered, kelly who is only concerned about her wants and lastly, shay am - he's vile and abhorrent but not nefarious.

Then there is Tanu, who is innocent and wants everyone to be in love like she is. ... but she lacks perspective and is always pairing arnav with Lavanya and khushi with shaamil. Paying no attention to their words or body language.

All in all, I have enjoyed reading this ff of yours, Ritu.

I will PM you again with my request.

Thanks Monica

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: crazybugs
Hi first of all standing ovation to you for the great chaspter. we were under lots of tension how their breakup wuld be n u kept us waiting for long time to unfold the secret😉 but now knowing cant wait for the next chappy. Awww, I know it took a long time to come to this point and there is another high point coming soon...I am really eager to write that one. Pl post it asap even in small doses. I would try to be more regular from now onward.Becoz we cant be kept away from our fav couple...what a mu. My imagination fails to guess how their mu would be cleared. Hmm yah I knowww..sometime, things happen on their own. and that's how they would unfold here. Arnav said so much he didnt allow khushi to speak. He doesnt know what he lost. 😭 my heart goes for both of them
Pl try to give regular updates even if they are small. I understand ur busy schedule but as a reader i am more stressed with😊 wild guess all the time. This story is close to my heart. I think u understand😊😊
Oh thanks for saying this to me...I would try to be very regular from now on.; 😊

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#775

I remembered you said that Lavanya will be a good villain. Is that still true cause I'm not sure where she'll fit into the story now since Arnav managed to singlehandedly destroy everything...

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: brishti84
I remembered you said that Lavanya will be a good villain. Is that still true cause I'm not sure where she'll fit into the story now since Arnav managed to singlehandedly destroy everything...

Yes Lavanya would be a very big villiian. The story takes a turn very soon.😊

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crazybugs

@crazybugs

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#777

What i like the most is that u respond to. Comments of everyone

It makes us special😊 n as if ee r shaping up of story👏

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#778

4 weeks has passed in retrospection 😲

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#779

Superb teaser both r suffering

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: crazybugs
What i like the most is that u respond to. Comments of everyone
It makes us special😊 n as if ee r shaping up of story👏 Thanks dear, it just keeps me in prospective with the reader also. Although, I think people are expecting a very different journey than what I am going to present to people. So very anxious

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