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Originally posted by: PreenaRak

Nw as u said we know hw the teaser is gonna happen. Anyway the update is super. Loved hw she threw the ring on him. Waiting for nxt hotpart

Originally posted by: Sheebaaier

I love it. Can imagine what khushi will face and go through. Just a request, don't let there be a leap again. Just let everything happen gradually

Originally posted by: Anu567

Ritu,

Anu...meri behna...sometime, I feel I write long explanations for no reasons...😆...Because if it didn't clear these two characters through this long winded writing...it must be my mediocre language skills so might be confusing😳...

But, it is true when I am writing a part...I eat, sleep drink the part...and I do try to think as logically as possibly...

I have tried very hard through this part to justify both the characters. Why Arnav is thinking in such manner has a very good reason also.

Also in this part, I tried very hard to depict that no matter how and what Arnav thinks about her...deep down he does love her...No he doesn't know about that love yet,.because he doesn't want to open himself to these feelings which can get him hurt...So what he does...he labels it as just want and desire for her...

And after this night...he would still want her with him...but it would be her decision to leave him..if he lets her.

I again thought, I created each scenario to explain why and how she couldn't tell Tanu about her real relation with Shyam. That was the only reason, Tanu had done shots and gotten so drunk and passed out...Otherwise, tonight Khushi might have revealed the truth to her.

Again after breaking off the engagement scene, I created the encounter with Shyam which was not there in my original piece which I had written in 2003...as I was not satisfied with it. it didn't give a good reason, to show why Tanu would agree so readily with Khushi's decision to not join them

Oh both these characters have flaw...because they are real to me...But I think Khushi is not at all confused ..If she was, she wouldn't break off her engagement like that...She knows when she wants something. She is pretty clear in her head.

That was super awesome. Usually a die-hard Arnav supporter, you know me. Not this time, though. I mean what is he really thinking about trying to tell her to want him some more. Why be this cruel? I think that line was just said in passion...like when somebody says...then love me some more...I don't think he was being cruel...he just want her to want him more...Can he not really see how deeply Khushi cares for him. How dare he humiliate her this way? Yes, he certainly does not have the luxury of knowing what Khushi was up to last night or this morning. Yes, that stupid girl, has continued to keep both Arnav and Tanu and a whole lot of her well wishers believing she is still engaged to Shyam..I think Khushi didn;t get any chance to confess about her engagement in this part...If she had told Tanu, then Tanu would have most definitely dragged her with her and she wanted to spend some alone time with Arnav to talk to him....I mean what the...Ritu, why would she continue to be this dumb? I don't think she was dumb at all...I think in this entire part...she was driven by her love for Arnav and to create a memorable time with him...She was not foreseeing such outcome as what happened later in the chapter...for her she wanted to sit down and create some romantic moments with him and talk her heart out...She was going to tell him about her broken engagement because she knew it was something very important for Arnav. And why is she crazy enough to suggest she is going to pay Shyam back? Oops...that is little bit of me in Khushi...I don;t believe in keeping money from anybody...that is the way I was brought up and so for my Khushi...she is honest to the core...She did take that money from him and his family so she is dutybound to return it...No matter what Shyam did meanwhile...but his actions doesn't give her the right to keep that money. But then that's my thinking...which I inserted in the story😕 For what in the world...for sleeping with Kelly throughout their visit to The engagement? Khushi has a major character flaw here...she is indecisive to the core...this is completely insane because it will lead to more and more half truths and misunderstandings, truly devastated now. Oh absolutely...this story won't reach the place where I want to take it...had there been no misunderstandings...😆And what is with the equally silly Tanu? Surely anyone seeing Shyam and Khushi together and then seeing Shyam doing all sorts of stuff with Kelly would not wish for Khushi to be with him in that way...I mean really...so at the end of this chapter I am livid at Arnav, quite fed up with Khushi and simply sick of the lecherous Shyam and Kelly and the dumb Tanu...sorry girl...this is hardly easy to digest. Well written as usual. Just...naah...I am going to reserve further judgement till I see which way the story is headed...right now there's a whole load of half truths and deceptions to resolve...and I do want to beat Arnav and Khushi's heads together to make them wake up and smell the coffee...like really...do they know love like this comes along once in a lifetime? No, too pig headed to realize it of course...😆

Sorry for disappointing u with this part...but next part should make things more clear...Hopefully!😆

Waiting,

Babu, Your comments always leave me thinking for more sooo thank you soo much for your honest opinions about these characters. Just keep reading,, so that I can keep writing.🤗

Anu

Originally posted by: MoonBow.

Res

So much of write.

And esp that silly comment at the end about likes. 😡 I knowww... I had wth moment also reading that...😆I have read few writers putting it and but damn they are ones with 400 people reading the story... I was just kidding...none of you are going to stop me from writing the next part...like or not🤪

Originally posted by: matosarah