Arshi FF: Payback Last Chapter updated (pg:108) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Hey ya! Archu, (hope you don't mind me calling that if u are 16)😆

I am Kiddo_Star from MeD. I am a great fan of your story PAYBACK. Since the time I had started watching IPK (4 June, 2012) I had been noticing Anjali's behavior towards Arnav and I always felt it somewhere that she is just using him rather than loving him. I have always thought her as a valloan just as Shyam. She always made my blood boil😡

Anjali was over innocent, over nave, over dramatic and I din like that much. Moreover, she was blind for Shyam. Shyam was another idiot in the serial. Had never thought he could ditch such a loving family even when he was getting all luxuries.

Next... Dadi was another parasite there. First she comes as a guest and then she even wants to rule the house as if she's the owner. I had loved Arnav there when he had supported Khushi.

The worst were Aakash and Nani. Aakash was such lovey-dovey and supportive before marriage. But after marriage it seemed as if Payal doesn't exist for him and even if she does, he doesn't value her and that was quote visible. He was proving the statement, "The happiness after winning your goal is always less and minimal than the happiness you feel while achieving it"

Nani had betrayed me. She was so strict in the start, then why did she change? If she was strict maybe she won't have been biased towards Anjali. I hated that she wanted Khushi to be away from Anjali and family bcoz she thought that if Anjali would see her, she might feel bad. Wasn't Khushi a human too? Doesn't she have a heart too? 🥺

Okay okay I am saying the reason for all this ranting of mine.😃

Simple, Your story fullfills all the fantasies I had for Raizadas and ArShi. 😛 Sachii mein.. Pinky Promise😉 Anjali and other Raizadas as villain. Arnav ever so supportive. NK supporting his Nannav and Khushi-ji and Payal finally standing up for herself. Aakash is spineless but Payal dies have a spine😆 I loved the 5 yaar. Arnav,Khushi, Payal, NK & Lav... Wow!!! The awesome fivesome👏

the kids are sooo cute and such pranksters... No doubt anyone who stays up with Khushi ought to have her craziness in them. And here toh Ruhi & Ruhaan are her own kids so they do share her DNA😉

Adi is such a matured kid. Even I am not this mature at this age That's MY negative point yaar. Hihi no distractions. Back to my speech. Adi is very angry on Aakash and he should be. How dare they all glare at Payal for hiding Adi or letting Adi know abt them! I hate these Raizadas😡 I want to kick them, punch them, slap them and throw them out of Shaantivan. Humph! Idiotic selfish family.

I swear Archu.. I swear.. Agar Anjali's dirty brain played tricks on kids and if they got harmed, I'll personally make sure to come there in the story and pull Anjali's hair, make her scream, slap her, beat her with my sandals and throw her at police for physical abuse towards a kid.

Okay Now I end my nonsense speech here Archu 😉 So sorry for wasting you time Archu

I just wanted to summarize that THIS IS A FABULOUS STORY AND I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS AS WELL AS YOU❤️

Pls update soon Archu

I love you yaar... Muahhh!!! 🤗

One of the readers of this story had sent me a pm requesting me to update the story and i couldn't help but accept the request.

so here is CHAPTER 6

Chapter 6

"How could Chotte do this?" Anjali seethed in anger.

"This is all Khushi's doing Ranisahiba. She and her sister are the one who is turning everyone!" Shyam said.

"You're right! It's all that Khushi and Payal! Urrgh! I'm gonna kill them! No matter what I'll kick those girls away and get back my Chotte!" Anjali said.

"But where did this Lavanya come from?" Shyam asked.

"I don't know and I don't care!" Anjali said, "I need those Gupta sisters away!"

"Adi bitwa looks exactly like you Akash bitwa!" Mami said and Akash nodded.

"Those Gupta sisters even turned him against you. He hates you, his own father!" Mami said, "We need to kick those wh**es out and get our Adi! He is the heir of this house!"

Akash nodded and said, "I can't believe bhai did this! He made us stay in this small stinky room! What's wrong with him? Oh, this is the Gupta sisters' game! NK, bhai and Lavanya are blindly following them!"

"I hate them!" Mami cursed them.

"Even me!" Akash whispered in hatred.

At night 8.30 pm, everyone of the family gathered at poolside adjacent to living room to discuss on what to do!

It was then they heard some voices. They turned to their left and saw that in the living room, the kids have assembled.

"HP uncle! Can you please bring 4 glasses of orange juices?" Adi shouted and heard a yes coming from kitchen.

"So guys, what'll we play?" Ruhi asked.

"Hide and seek!" Sonu squealed.

"Arrey nahi!" Ruhaan said, "Sonu...you always hide at the same spot, i.e behind the curtains, and always giggles! It's meaningless to play hide and seek with you!"

Sonu pouted and other laughed.

"I have an idea!" Ruhaan said, "Let's go and bother Mr. 6 foot and Mrs. Makeup kit."

"YYAAAYYY" Ruhi and Sonu cried but Adi said, "No, we're not doing that."

"Par kyun bhaiyya?" Roo asked.

"Listen you three, just stay away from those people!" Adi said, "They are monsters!"

Sonu gasped hearing the word monsters and hid inside Ruhi's long skirt. Everyone laughed and pulled her out.

"Rui di...monster..." Sonu said fearfully.

Roo said, "Adi bhai, I know they are not good people. That's why I said let's irritate. Oh god, seeing that pooja ki thaal I felt like painting her annoying face again!"

Ruhi and Sonu laughed and Adi sighed.

"Look at that! These annoying kids! They are planning to irritate us!" Anjali said in anger.

"Hello hi bye bye, am I makeup kit?" Mami asked.

"That's what you are!" Nani said and Manorama huffed and puffed.

HP brought juices and asked, "Actually I didn't understand who among you are Arnav bhaiyya and Khushi bhabhi's children and NK bhaiyya and La didi's children!"

"I'll tell!" Ruhaan stood up.

"This is Aditya Gupta, Payal maasi's son! You can call him Adi!" He said pointing to Adi.

"I'm Ruhanika Singh Raizada, daughter of Arnav and Khushi Singh Raizada. You can call me Ruhi!" Ruhi said.

"I'm Ruhaan Singh Raizada, son of Arnav and Khushi Singh Raizada. You can call me Roo! And this is Suhani Khurrana, daughter of NK Khurrana and Lavanya Khurrana. You can call her Sonu!" Ruhaan said.

"What's going on here?" Arnav came there and asked.

"Nothing papa, just introducing ourselves!" Ruhaan said.

"Papa, papa..." Ruhi called cutely.

Arnav lifted her in arms and asked, "What does my Ruhi-chuhi need?"

"Papa...can we irritate Mr. 6 foot and Mrs. Makeup kit?" Ruhi asked cutely with a pout.

"Mr. 6 foot? Who? Akash?" Arnav asked and Ruhi nodded. "Makeup kit is Mami ji!"Ruhi again nodded.

"Nahi...Adi baiya said they are...monsters..." Sonu said.

"Arrey monsters ko hi irritate karthe hai!" Ruhaan said, "Papa, I do want to apply different colours of that pooja thaal's face!"

"Pooja thaal...oh Anjali?" Arnav asked and Ruhaan nodded.

"Papa please na..." Ruhaan pleaded and Adi said, "Arnav mamu, these guys are asking for a trouble!"

"Uffo bhaiyya, let's have some fun!" Ruhi said.

"Err...Adi is right! Don't irritate them. Actually stay away from them! You four go and play something else!" Arnav said.

"Papa..." Ruhi and Ruhaan whined and Arnav said, "Go and play something else!"

Pouting their lips kids walked away.

"See na Shyam ji, Chotte still cares for us. That's why he asked kids not to annoy us!" Anjali said.

"Ha di," Akash said, "These Gupta sisters are turning him!"

"We'll have our Chotte and NK bhai back! For that we need to kick out the Guptas!" Anjali said.

"And children?" Shyam asked.

"They'll stay with us!" Dadi said, "Adi is Raizada heir and Ruhaan is Malik heir!" Nani sighed and sat silent.

Next morning

"Good morning pumpkin! Good morning coconut!" Ruhaan squealed at dadi and Nani as he ran down the stairs.

"Pumpkin?" Dadi asked furiously while holding her pooja thaal tightly.

"Ha...wo your face looks like a pumpkin and hers like a coconut! That's why! So pumpkin what are you doing here?" Ruhaan asked.

"Bado se aisa baath karthe hai? Ye kaisa parvirish diya hai aapko?" Dadi asked furiously.

"Parvirish? Who is that? Is he a friend of yours?" Ruhaan asked and Dadi walked away with thaal furiously.

Ruhaan shrugged his shoulder and walked to living room and found Mami sitting there with Anjali.

"Hello Makeup kit and Pooja thaal, good morning!" he squealed.

"Shut up!" Anjali shouted.

"Hey, don't shout at me! Or else I'll paint your face like I did yesterday!" He lifted the paint spray from pocket and flaunted it, "Should I do that?"

Anjali nodded a no afraid that the boy would paint her face again. It had taken her hours and hours to get rid of that!

"Ok bye!" He slid it back to pocket and ran to kitchen but not before wishing "Good morning Mr. 6 foot" to Akash who walked down.

PRECAP

"AAAHHH!"

"Shyam ji!" Anjali cried seeing Shyam on floor.

Mami looked at the floor and said, "Hello hi bye bye...how did oil come here?" everyone looked down and saw patches of oil.

The five (Arshi, NK, La and Payal) widened their eyes as they now got the reason for Shyam's fall. They five looked at their right and saw the four pranksters standing with their classic grin.

"Oops!" Ruhaan said, "Sorry Mr. Gorilla, actually we had set the trap for Mr. 6 foot! Unfortunately you fell on it. Don't worry. We'll set another trap for Mr. 6 foot!"