ArShi SS: Yours... Forever... (Completed)Ch - 7 Pg-22 Thread#2::07/07 - Page 59

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Haww!!! Didu u always do this to me *sniff*

U djn even reply my comment in ur story😭

Originally posted by: ...Champ...

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Though not first one.. I'm glad I'm still in the first page.. 😛

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Every time I start reading your update na Baccha? I have to think about the words in dictionary to use for you which yet didn't roll out of my mouth. You have such a passion for writing, and it shows in every of your word.

Usually though, the updates with no or very less interaction causes a boredom to readers. I don't blame anyone, it's how the mind works. But in this update, it was so delightful to read it. I have never felt the lack of interaction through out the update.

The feelings of Arnav were very beautifully written. His happiness on seeing and getting his Khushi back in life, the anger on the doctor who dared to lie to him, the confusion on what had really happened, everything was perfectly blended in explaining his thoughts.

As for Khushi, she is nervous? Why? She is happy too seeing Arnav after such a long time where they've spent apart from each other. But what is the reason behind her missing out? I clearly remember you saying there are no villains in the story. So going by it, did Khushi herself disappeared due to the accident or something?

I had to smile at Anjali and Payal's reaction. Getting back their sister had elated them and it was shown though brief but perfectly!

Waiting to know this now... What is the reason behind Khushi's disappearence? That's the only question I have now in my mind...

Finally, Arnav got his Khushi back!!

Waiting for the next Baccha!

Love you loads and loads.. ❤️

Kisses and Hugs, 🤗

Urs,

Vampire.. ❤️

Originally posted by: Mysticaldivine

Nice update dear Gudiya, a bit emotional :(

Happy seeing them together ,yet sad seeing her like this.

She still had not clear the eerie of the reasons why did she leave him.

He is so happy 😊

Originally posted by: bellarosa

nice

please continue soon

thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: noordina

Finally I got the time to read this update, and what A very emotional and heartwarming update, how beautifully you described their emotions and inner feelings and thoughts, it was absolutely awesome, so eager to know how is khushi going to explain why she disappeared and what happened with her all this time, please update as soon as you can, but no hurries, take your time

Originally posted by: pree2605

Awesome one..

Happy that khushi is alive..but would love to know what had happened to her...

Loved it..

Thnxx fr pm

Originally posted by: Linsie

so it is her...

what happen...

why she got separated...

can she speak...

she is quiet al the time...

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved chapter 5 👏
Khushi is alive, where was she and what had happened to her, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃