ArShi SS: Yours... Forever... (Completed)Ch - 7 Pg-22 Thread#2::07/07

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@MahrunLuckyPMs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Meri toh RES hain Baccha!

Lemme go slean up myself and will comment after that.. 😛

~Un-Res~

First of all toh Baccha! I'm really really very sorry for this late un-res. Abhi abhi tumhe bataya problem kya tha...

And now coming to the update, start toh tumne bahut accha kiya hain. Where Arnav and Khushi are already married and thank god not out of any misunderstanding!

I loved Arnav's thinking. He wanted Khushi to be independent and hence had her learn driving. You know while I was reading the way Arnav was instructing Khushi? I remembered my first ride on Scooty where my father was behind me, and he was giving me those same instructions.

'Beta, itna speed nehi. Kuch uchalpadne wali nehi hain agar tum slow drive ki hain toh. Dheere se drive karo.. haan, aise.'

LOL!! It made me annoyed to an extent but then it's my dad and he just wants my safety right? And that too, it was first time riding doubles.. 😆

And woh kya end tha Baccha? Accident hogaya? Again, thank god it was not due to Khushi's carelessness. I know that sounds sadistic of me for thanking god after their accident happened. But kya hain na? Agar Khushi wajah se wo hua hota na? Toh aur zyada bura lagta mujhe!

But, what the hell did you do? Khushi is awake and is in concious but Arnav is not? Kya irada hain tumhari Baccha? Karna kya chahti ho tum? Arnav is not dead I'm sure now.. So did Khushi slip into coma?

Hmm.. I got something to ponder on for a while! Is it true then? Khushi is in Coma?

Aise cliffhanger mein kaise chod sakti ho Baccha? Is it your revenge on me for not giving you frequent updates or something? This is not fair Baccha...

Continue this soon...

I'll be waiting with my eyes and brain wide awake, okay? Don't delay it more...

And last but never ever the least... I love you loadsss and loadsss and loadsss and more!!

Tight hugs and Jhappis to you.. 🤗

Loads of love,

- Vampire ❤️

Edited by MahrunLuckyPMs - 9 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Brilliant Update

Khushi meant that its her time now as its night and there is no traffic so she can learn driving but wow she is driving really fast too

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

wow
awesome
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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noordina

@noordina

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

These truck drivers 😡 , they act as if they own the roads, why was he speeding this much, the way you described the accident and their pain made me feel like I was there with them, which I wish was true😉, eager for next part, please update as soon as you can, and sorry for the late comment🤗

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

just want everything to be good with ARSHI.. lovely start..

thanks for pm 😊

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Loved the update, well written 👏
Hope both are okay, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊

It was so sad to see Arshi like that...😭

I hope everything will be fine.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

so khushi n Arnav were married
he was learning her to drive
when the truck hit
but what happened when he blacked out
did someone take khushi away
now im thinking hes feeling guilty maybe blaming himself for pushing her to learn how to drive n for distracting her???
looking forward to story continuing
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Shreya😊

I love the way you are building their closeness.

Driving and teasing ,together is bringing them closer.

For a while It seemed they are in painful period ,but I am sure this will strengthen their relationship with more understanding👏

Great going ,

Edited by Mysticaldivine - 9 years ago

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Brilliance at its peak! That was an impactful beginning...
I don't have words to express the beauty of this chapter. You've rendered me speechless.
The chapter started with a serene note with romance brewing between the two followed by a mayhem of events and finally the heart-wrenching moment of despair.
After re-reading the prologue, the first chapter and contemplating, I could only come to a conclusion that maybe Khushi is alive and hiding somewhere in the dark due to her guilt-ridden state of having Arnav go through near-to-death situation.
Let me tell you girl, this is the most striking feature of this story- a captivating chaos. The prologue, the teaser and the 1st chapter, all three of them having diverging ends but converging emotions. So kudos to you!
Thank you so much for sending me the much appreciated PM.
And I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter😊

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