#2 ArHi Collaboration SS: Jalebis and Chillies [ Completed ]

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

nice one

thanks for pm x

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2
Congratulations guys!

Waiting for Monday, Res.

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UnRes

Koi nahi aayega!

"Jalebi tum mehendi kyun laga kar aayi ho? Aaj engagement party hai."
"Voh mein.."
"Tum kyun doosre haath par laga rahe ho, Chilli?"
"Tumhe lazy bann ne ka shauk hai na? So. here it goes."
"Haaw! Ab mein khana kaise khaungi."
"Yehi tumahari sazza hai for eveasdropping on Chutki and Aman."
"Ek min, aapko kaise pata?"
"Meri behen hai, mujhe nahi pata hoga toh aur kise.."
"Kya? Avni aur Aman ji?"
"Haan, so? Tum kyun itna ghabra rahi ho, vaise?"
"Ghabra rahe aur hum? Aapko mehendi ka cone mila kahan se?"
"Avni ne diya. Voh dekhna chahti thi ki, uski bhabi ke haath.."
"Bhabhi? Toh jaakar Pari ko lagao na, Chilli."
"Really? Tum mann kyun nahi leti ki.."
"Kya, ki mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai, aur aapko jaldi jakar ek plate chowmein lana chahiye?"
"Khushi? Tumare gaal..."
"Kya hua hamare gaalon ko?"
"Chubby nahi hai. Jaise school mein the. Bas."
"Acha chilli, ab sach mein bhookh lag rahi hai, Acha, avni se kaho na ek plate chaat le aaye."
"Main kyun kahun? Khud jaakar le lo. Tumare haath.."
"Haath..?"
"Jalebi, I am sure tum apna shaatir dimaag laga hi logi."
"Argh.. Mera phone pass karo?"
"Phone, kya yeh?"
"Vapas do Chilli, abhi."
"Kyun? Mein nahi chahta ki tumari jab tak mehendi sukhe, ki koi tumhe disturb kare."
"Arnav, theek hai toh.."
"JALEBI, what did you do?"
"Tumaare gaal..?"
"KHUSHI..."
"Ache lag rahe hai, thodi der baad, laal ho hi jaayege jab tak mehendi sukh jaayegi.. "

"Avni? Avni? Jalebi, ke liye, I mean, Khushi ke liye ek plate chaat le aao."

Zef,

this was absolutely awesome and hilarious! 😆
Loved the way you have written the dialogues😃
Thank you so much! 😳

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: barsha_dash
Zef,

this was absolutely awesome and hilarious! 😆
Loved the way you have written the dialogues😃
Thank you so much! 😳

Thanks Aru, nonsense mein se kuch sense dhoondh nikalne ke liye. 😳

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

Thanks Aru, nonsense mein se kuch sense dhoondh nikalne ke liye. 😳

This was absolutely wonderful. Just like aru told. It made sense totally.. Thanks a ton! 😛

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Sadh123
This was absolutely wonderful. Just like aru told. It made sense totally.. Thanks a ton! 😛

Thank you, Kya bolun ab? 😃

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Sorry for being late girls... par kya karein AD calling!! I keep asking for kiss between Arnav and Khushi and you keep giving me more and more romance between Avni and Aman. What the! You gave them our favourite aur pass scene too. I was so upset when i read that... but then you'll totally made it up with Arnav and Khushi's flirting... and especially talking about A KISS!! Loving the progress in the story. You girls are absolutely in the right direction. 😉 Thank you for giving us the update despite ur health. Take care ok dearies... don't stress about the update or the Arhi KISS... and I mean Chilli and Jalebi wala kiss. 😛

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coco17

@BSRaizada19

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

babloo!!!! that was kool.. loved the update

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

A & S,

Do Khushi and Arnav address each other as Jalebi and Chilli, out loud? I think I may have missed something. 😳

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 9 years ago

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2
A & S,

Do Khushi and Arnav address each other as Jalebi and Chilli, out loud? I think I may have missed something. 😳

Of course not! Khushi doesn't even know about it. Arnav saying about J and C kiss was just pun intended.. 😆 I don't think Khushi would need more nicknames 😉

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Sadh123
Of course not! Khushi doesn't even know about it. Arnav saying about J and C kiss was just pun intended.. 😆 I don't think Khushi would need more nicknames 😉

So the reader's are aware of J and C, that makes more sense now. Babloo is a cool name, I actually know someone with that name, she is a distant relative. 😆

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 9 years ago