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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Fantabulous OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the mail

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

For the 1st time I'm glad it was a OS.

Arnavji dying. Nahi!

Make up with a happier ending in the next upcoming ones. My friend said u write well. Non IF wali 😆

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow... A return with an awesome OS series.

'Till death do us part', spies, vows for nation and for hearts, love for country, duty and lover all rolled in one topped with Arnav and Khushi. 👏

What more death at the hand of your lover.

Thats what i love about your writing chaitalee that you always try to explore.

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Shilpi

@shils28

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Excellent! 👏 This was different!

Welcome back. Thanks for PM.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

What you want to tell us.. ..fighting for a free nation by deceiving your loved one and your future husband...

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

she killed him..duty first ..!!

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

What was that ? Never expected such storyline. It's different means extremely different. No chance of happily ever after. But Khushi did , what she has to do to save him from torture. when initially I read it, the actual fact took time to sink in me. & when I understand the depth of it, I am speechless. I am feeling numb & don't know how to express my feelings.

Can't say who is right or who is wrong. Such an extremely different concept. Arnav's death in Khushi's hand - never have imagined such things.