ArHi OS l Things That Go Bump In The Night l A Collab with ArchanaMH17

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

W*F!!!

Okay, my reaction after reading the first post by Ruchi. Woman, I realized I cant even imagine him marrying Shit-all, even if its a dream inside a fiction. On a scale from 1 to 10 I think I am a 100 in case of ArHi obsession. Kill me!

But, what can I say, the second post just made me grin for a long time. How adorable they are *fangirling so hard right now*

But I cant help but wonder how your CC must be. If this is the outcome of your "discussion" boy that must be a helluva fun place lol.

Thank you Archana for saving me and saving Ruchi from my wrath 😛

Keep discussing girls.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: -Bhavi
What The! 😲
My first response where you ended Ruchi. Sheetal -Mrs ASR. 🥺
Next response padhoo ke na padhoo age😕 but then had to complete what I started and that was a 180 turn. Ekdum filmy style. 😆
Finally Khushi fulfilling the wishful dream of Raizada.😃 I want to know what happened to that picture though😆

I had fun reading this OS and thanks for sending me the link Ruchi.

Thanks Bhavi!

That picture is securely in Archana's care ... she deserved it for her timely 'sambhalna' 😆

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

he he he, i really loved this one, the nightmare of the 'sadistic' end of part one notwithstanding 😆 wonderful collaboration and a fitting tribute to the essence of who arhi are, were and will always be yup, trip, fall, catch can be done by anyone but will always be OWNED by these only two 😳 and phew for 'Sheetal' being put firmly back where she belongs, not just in ASR's but in all our nightmares please please do write together more, i would love to read 😃

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

hi ruchi,

😆 😆 😆 😆

how could you do this to my poor bitwa. sheetal??? at least usse la toh de diya hota... woh waisa hi hai, but to be saddled and samhaloed by sheetal? haye re asli duniya, now we know the real pain of you.

aww, my bitwa has just taken a decision and is tripping and falling, in his tom ford of course, straight into those gorgeous long slim baahein down there... he shall have an affair he has decided, because biwi or not usse koi faraq nahin padta dammit.

thanks so much... that was fun.

now reading on.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

archana...

so arnav singh raizada laughed.

😃

lovely second chapter.

thanks so much for this light happy fling with the two.

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palaayan

@palaayan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Ladies!

I loved this! What a sweet tale full of mischief and love. The blend between the two of you as writers was fabulously seamless, please do write more together it was a wonderful light hearted treat xx

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Lumos_Solem

@Lumos_Solem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Who came up with that title? 😆

Things go bump in the night, things go bump in the day. Arnav should have been married to Shit-all and Kushi should be married to Siyam babua.

But, anyway. 😆 😆

Funny, short and sweet.

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

A sweet OS of a sweet couple. Though the nightmare in the first half gave me nightmare but i liked the wishful thinking and the unsaid wish bring fulfilled.

Well Arnav Singh Raizada's real Wife's presence made him laugh and the cameras got shot of the century 😉

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PhoenixKhushi

@PhoenixKhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Wonderfully written, guys! You had my heart in my throat when Sheetal said they were married. And this being a one shot, I was imagining all sorts of cheating, running away, murder.. 😛

I need to stop being so crazy and melodramatic..

But this was a really great OS! I loved that little chat between Arnav and Khushi.. How can you capture so many emotions in a scene where the characters are not even on the same continent?!

And loved both the ramp scenes! If I didn't know better, I'd have said both parts were written by the same person.. How beautifully you have adjusted both your writing styles to sing along with the other's!

Well done! 👏