ArHi OS l Things That Go Bump In The Night l A Collab with ArchanaMH17 - Page 10

Wow OS...awesome :)
Please write more...

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

You write a story and I am commenting on the 14th page! 😲

Should I start with a sorry

For missing on your story

Or should I say oh deary

Glad to be reading this beauty

Should I praise the first part

That at the end stopped my heart

Or should say that second part

It gave my heart a kick start

Should I swoon to the floor

When that eyebrow begins to sore

Or should I simply start a war

For making the mighty hit the floor

Should I say I am glad as always

Even though I am late by a few days

Or should I say I am fully ablaze

As this deserves nothing but praise

Simply I shall say I loved it

I am glad you all decided to write it

Surely this is not the end of it

Let there be more to come off it

Originally posted by: ...ASB100...

Ruchiii! <3 <3 I loved this story! Loved the chance to think about the first episode once again (and the excuse to start watching the show one more time, because once your start watching it, you HAVE to finish watching it ;))

1. Absolutely love the attention you pay to small details. For instance, when you described how Arnav saw Khushi's hazel eyes in the audience...bas that description just blew my mind!

2. That plot-twist! Why, why did you have to ruin my fantasy?! There I was, imagining Khushi in red and Arnav in black and that gentle gust of wind and Rabba Ve's and raised eyebrows...until in came Shit-al. WITH THE MATCHING CIRCLE OF STONES! What the! And then she says, biwi hoon tumhari, haq hai mera...not cool, Ruchi, not cool!

3. IT WAS A NIGHTMARE.

4. THANK YOU DEVI MAIYYA.

5. Arnav's sprained his neck, again! Made me think of that episode on the show when he had a sprained neck! He'd looked so cute with his head tilted to the side!

6. I really liked how Arnav tripped and almost fell! Made for a nice change lol. Also really like the idea of Khushi being his knight in shining armor! Why should boys have all the fun? Let Khushi catch Arnav for a change, and then tell him, na tumhari shakal dekhni hai, na tumse baat karni hai! XD

7. Awww such a cute ending!

Archana, I have read all your previous work...silently (yesss I am a terrible person)! And I am a huge fan of the cute stories you come up with, and your characterizations of Arnav and Khushi. It was so lovely reading the part you wrote here ...absolutely love your brisk and witty writing :)

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Muaah <3

I'm thanking Nandkishore that you weren't tempted to post you know what 😆

As for point 2 ... Really?! 😲

Milte hai jaldi 😆

Yes i was confused hazel eyes and all other things are signs of khushi ..How come sheetal took her place ..Yes it was really a horrible nightmare .

Khushi is still so cute.

wow
awesome os.
the first part left us with horrible nightmare with sheetal and arnav married and the dialogue shambhal liya and all.
but loved how the second part turn into lovely romantic arshi.
amazing work

Arshi67 : not only for Arnav, but it was a nightmare for me as well, reading abt Arnav married to sheetal and then eyeing khushi. Thank God he woke up in time to not prolong the torture.

Funny!! 😆That nightmare gave many of us heart attack😆 I don't even want that to be a possibility in Arnav's dream or nightmare... 😛
but what a sweet fruit of discussing it with Khushi😉😊