Hello Limoncello,
I came across your story recently and finally I got the chance to read and finish all the 8 parts here today. Your writing is truly a treat, I felt the pain hidden in your words. If it is possible, I will like to read what happened after that 'congratulation'...
And after reading your lines, I have penned down some of my own (if you don't mind, that is!). All the three verses are of Arnav's point of view (for the first three chapters)
😊 Just for your Arnav and Khushi!
Chookar mere mann ko
The gentle wind sways through the trees
Whispering in silence the timeless melody
Stars twinkling teasing me bright
Saying my heart to embrace the life
The rippling waves joining the euphony
Strip me bare from the shadow of my folly.
The breeze that caresses me with warmth
The star that shines guiding me home
The shore that holds my crashing waves
The ray of sunshine trickling through the gloom
The happiness that seeps calming my soul
It has been only you' all the way along.
Tadap tadap ke
You were the wind beneath my wings
The eyes that taught me how to dream
Or have it ever been that way for you
Was it only me who weaved a life with you
I shut the door sealing our fate
Caging your smile in a lone tear drop
Everything falls like the autumn leaves
Was that my heart crushed under your feet
Pyaar yeh jaane kaisa hai (Sort of continuation from the previous)
Have it ever been that way for you
One little thought spared just for me
A petty little smile for the words I've uttered
Or may be a hint of love for the person I am
Have it all been just empty lies
The promises your eyes whispered to me
If you see through me oh! My beloved
You'd always know the reason I breathed
Edited by anu41982 - 9 years ago
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