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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Looking fwd to the next update 😊

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Yay! This is one track everyone goes wrong and so I wanna badly read this.

Loved the song selections as titles.

PS - I used to be your reader until I decided that I can't keep up and only decided to read SS/OS 😆 will wanna join your stories bandwagon soon :)

Edited by MoonBow. - 9 years ago

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Thank you for pm.😛

Love you for coming up with this new series.🤗

First OS is brilliant dear...👏

Waiting for the other...

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wow you're compilation of songs is awesome!!!!

I love each oh one of them,

Especially Choo Kar...

It's one of my favourites!!!!!

Take Care!!!!

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Part-2 is now up on Page-1!

Thank you all for the wonderful response so far. The first 3 parts will follow the show. My own twist to the tale starts from Part-4. Hope I can maintain the intrigue till then.

Like I mentioned before, I won't be sending PMs for each part. Either follow me on Twitter @Limoncello_IF or bookmark this page. I plan to finish this story within 10 days.

Love,
Limon.

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Nice start and great selection of songs for every part. I think Arnav married khushi to punish her for breaking his heart rather than for trying to break his sister's marriage. I he wasn't interested in her then "managing" her with kind of wealth and power he had was very easy.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Interesting concept.

I always wanted to have a conversation between Arnav and Khushi before the marriage. I have read so many stories on this contract marriage track...now looking forward to read your POV on this. Your song selections are awesome and the title too.

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Thank you for pm.😛

Part 2 is too too painful.😭

In serial, I always felt, that instead of confronting Shyam, Arnav should have confronted Khushi... Then after verifying facts, he should have taken a decision. Acting in haste always leads to incorrect decisions...

Lets see, the twist that you have planned to the original story line.