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saxena_hgt

@saxena_hgt

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

so another story to follow... i like how u keep d scenes same as serial but given them deeper meaning with your added views on them... a positive start which is going to b heartbreaking with second update, going by your precap..

by d way kudos to this new concept.. u have given up whole concept of every part but yet given up nothing.. looking forward for this new journey with your words. thanks for pm...

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shambhavi23

@shambhavi23

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Nice start😊...plz continue soon

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Sin my girl,

Sounds fab! Looking forward. Part 1 was smashing. Purely from Arnav Singh Raizada's point of view...and I hope you give poor ASR the redemption he deserves for the much maligned contract marriage...😆...I know I am about to get a bashing from all the KKG fan girls here who will be up in arms for even daring to suggest poor ASR needs redemption! But I always thought he did. He was more sinned against than sinning...and oops, not playing on your and here either,girl! 😉😆

Just in a bit of a masti khor mood today! Loved the choice of songs. Waiting for the tale to unfold. Is it coincidence much that Ek Jashn and your story are divided into eight parts, Sin? ( raising one eyebrow, ASR style!)

Waiting!

Hugs,

Anu

Edited by Anu567 - 9 years ago

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

wow amazing start loved it can't wait for the next update thank you for pm.

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

awesome!!

now following you on twitter x

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Nice Start.

Loved Arnav's POV. Arnav realising his feelings for Khushi and feeling bad for hurting Khushi in the past and wanted to confess his feelings. Even Khushi realised what she is feeling for Arnav is love and not sure about Arnav's though he is flirting with her.

Waiting for the next one. Please update soon.

Thanks for the PM

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Wow...
After reading through your note, the first update, the song and the songs chosen foe rest, all i can say is i'm very eager for all the rest of the parts.

I loved how you made arnav see theough his previous acts against khushi in the new light of his feelings something creatives didnt do justice at the time.

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Interesting concept...

First part was very nice...

Eagerly waiting to know what happens next...

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Part 1 was awesome. Always wanted Arnav and khushi's conversation to happen before the marriage. Rally looking forward to all the 8-shots. Wonder whether Arnav will actually get a chance to confess his love to khushi !! ⭐️