ArHi NEW YEAR 2S: Jazbaat e-Mohabbat | AUTHOR'S NOTE | PG-36 | JAN-18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Wow Limon, this was fab! I really loved how emotions played and flowed in this. You used every emotion to your strength and did an excellent job of executing it. I am so glad I read this one. Oh and this could have been a potential scene too. The New Year could have turned into this and we could have get to witness such an astounding scene that would made our heart flutter and leap in joy. This is Khushi rising beyond the hatred and obstacles. I am sure Arnav might have refused, ignored, and taunted her. But then her love would have triumphed beyond all odds and become successful.

And yes, I did keep up my promise of reading the OSs you post and I forayed into it, but hey do you see me complaining? ;)

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles

The OS is described so well throughout! Beautifully written and feels good to go into those old memories again 😳 The last scene was so touchy and unexpected, she rose above hatred, wow, what a thought :) it was excellent! Loved it

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

This os is really really very well written... feelings, emotions very aptly described! 👏
Must say Last touch was beautiful!
I know I didn't follow any of your works before and completing some 30+ chapters is not possible to me atm but I promise to follow every of ur's to be posted story😳

Originally posted by: pup03

Fantastic take on IPK New year Limon.. loved it a lot.. Khushi was always more stronger than Arnav when matters of heart were concerned and happy to see her taking the first step to make her Arnavji too come out of his shell and agree to what is between them.. loved the wonderful shot.. 😊

thanks for pm.. Happy New Year. Have Wonderful 2016 😃

Originally posted by: Maya.P93

Lovely OS - the fact that Khushi realises her feelings sooner than Arnav was probably a given; even in the show. Always thought Khushi was more in tune with her feelings than Arnav ever was! An excellent take on the New Years episode!

Originally posted by: ina_saahil

Wow!! That was a superb new year gift for all ur reader. And that too when u have written an OS based on the new year's episode of IPK. It was simply superb and I loved it.
The way u had written this one was so similar to the episode, yet so different. The situations and the basic scenario was the same but what was different were the emotions and the feelings.
They both challenged each other not to see the other's face in midnight but somewhere deep down the heart Khushi knew that she wanted to see Arnav's face first.
And then came Khushi's realization and her acceptance to her feelings. And that was beautiful.
And then the way u changed it in the end was so so so sweet. She accepted her feeling in the open in front of Arnav...😳

Good work...

Lots Of Love...😊😊

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

hi dear, its been long since I read ur OS. beautifully described. happy new year

Originally posted by: pinkly

Wow...you have so beautifully used ipkknd new year concept and pictures and created this beautiful story. What the creatives could not do, but you have done it. This khushi is brilliant. She understood her feelings and told arnav about it.

Limon, It needs another part. This story feels incomplete. You have to give us Arnav's reaction after Khushi's declaretion. He ignores her and walks out, or insults about her class again, or continues to pretend to hate her, or acknowledges and accepts his feelings for khushi??? Do let us know.

Thank you for this beautiful story. Wish you a Very happy new year to you too...