ArHi Short Story: Things beyond our control!!

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Nitya

@nik1310

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Nicely written, paced it well. Kinda guessed the 'cancer' i angle n part 1...but Vishaal ..whoever deserts their wife for being ill...Rosy aunty ki Jai ho! Lovely camaraderie between Arshi 😊

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Wonderful story 👏 loved it a lot... Do continue writing dear don't let any harsh word ever to harm you. God bless

Thanks for pm 😊

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Beautiful story..
Lovd it..
Arnav is really cute in this story...
Thnks 4 pm. 👏

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Sara queen

@crazyqueen

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

This is so inspiring.

Loved it.

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Sometimes your heart speaks more than what you could quote verbly... 😊
Only words I have right now is Beyond ECSTACY!!!!!! ❤️

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

A truly inspirational story that encourages one to just seize the moment and live to the fullest. I am astounded by how beautifully you have written this...Khushi and Arnav meet each other at the lowest points of their life, they need the other person's support to get past it and things start to look up. Then yet again they find the cancer coming back to haunt Khushi...man, that is so sad.

But the truth is that this is true life...it does not wait for anybody, it just happens...it is disturbing and blinding in the intensity with which it gives us problems, it also brings us small sources of comfort to get through those problems. And maybe, just maybe, with the right source of support, it is possible to regain one's faith and keep forging ahead.

Such an absorbing story...reminds me of a poem I read so long ago...Wordsworth's 'The Solitary Reaper'. The last two lines are: 'The music in my heart I bore, long after it was heard no more'. I am sure your story too will remain in my head for some time now, perhaps guiding and encouraging...thank you! 🤗

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