ArHi Short Story: Things beyond our control!!

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kitties

@kitties

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

You understand relationships so beautifully di. Really story shows itself how much kind heart and beautiful person you are di. HATS OFF TO YOU. Just love the story. It just totally touched my heart. Once again thanks a lot di for writing such incredibly awesome stories. Take care. I am always with you.

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

This was such a beautiful story you wrote

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

dear...very very very beautifully written...beyond words...i luvd it...

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Nidhi Nevatia

@NidhiNev

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

I LOVE YOU JJ ! ❤️🤗⭐️ You are amazing. As a writer as well.

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Hey JJ,

First of all, thank you so much for writing a new story, thought a short one but you did write one and I am happy! Most importantly, you are feeling better and what is more important than that? Right?

I loved the story, it was wonderful, very different and emotional. Things are beyond out control but one thing is in our control, living our life! Such an amazing story. Both, Arnav and Khushi had their own problems but the way they fell in love with each other, it was so warm and beautiful.

I am glad my words made you feel better. i am always there for you and you know that! 🤗

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

what can I say.. It was such a beautiful one and the awesomest short story I have come across..

two broken souls, that were meant to be together and they made their way out happily from the various difficulties they faced..

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

story was beautiful...if only cancer hadnt attacked them again...wished they had one more baby of their own too

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Heart touching
I loved how you explained the whole concept of everyone is destined to live happily!

I know Khushi will survive... for her child and will grow old with Arnav!

They are fighters

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Ruwiz_IPKKND

@Ruwiz_IPKKND

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

First I have to say Jiji this became one of my fav SS's! It's deffo got added to my list! 👏

Simply loved it !! I got tears in my eyes while reading it! Totally loved it!!! If you can try to continue this you know!!! Please pretty!! 😃😃😃

I always love your writing! Thank you for this! Sorry for the late!! 😊 😊

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Gosh such an awesome OS and I took this long to read it. And so since I read it in new year I take it as a new year gift from you friedriceji. So a very happy wala New year to you and your family and my Dularaa... Wish him good health and lots of fun.

About the OS, it's speaks of a spirit to not be crushed under the bads and unforeseen uncontrollable situation or people. If we can trash does bad memories or keep a lid on them and think about all the good once, we surely can live our life and we will be called survivors.

Khushi and Arnav here are one and they build a beautiful life together.